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Nice teaser!! Eagerly waiting for nxt part
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missing this story! Want to know what is Maan up to now with Parth!
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Likes complete nahi hue so no update.
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Teaser

Hmm, she is afraid for her baby..Even i don't trust this man 😉

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PART 38


GEET slept holding Parth in her warmth in another room as she promised he would not enter in Maan's personal space. Geet was scared regarding Parth's well being. Two incident took place back to back. First he was lost and now this drinking incident shaked her badly. Maan's this behaviour strengthen her decision of leaving him. He himself proves that he is not cabale of carrying a responsibility of a child. There is no doubt that she loves him only but trust? Maan is not trust worthy.


After both slept Maan made a silent move inside their room. Not sure what stroming inside him but one thing was sure and that is,he was disturbed. Not feeling good after this incident. Parth's innocent questions echoing in his mind. Without Geet how would he handle him. Moreover he was right if something is bad for him then how come it good for his uncle. Geet was right what adults do kids adapt them only and in his age mind is more curious to know every thing quickly. Maan sat besides them and gazed both. He caressed his head softly. It was the first time when he showing love or care,not sure,towards Parth.


"i am sorry. I am culprit to both of you. I hurt both of you with my careless and rude behaviour. I am sorry Geet. I am sorry Parth." Maan apolozised to both. He wants to confess when both were awaked but he lacks the courage to face both's innocent eyes. Leaning forward he kissed both one by one and tugged them under soft duvet before leaving the room. Maan left and one drop of fresh tear escaped from Geet's closed eyes.



Sun dawn but coldness between yet not over. Only Parth's presence gave the glimpse of life in mansion. His voice echoed and told that living beings are present there. Though Geet tried he would not do any mischief. Her eyes were only following Parth to avoid last night like any incident. Maan was waiting for her to talk. Her silent behaviour killing him. He wants to mend his mistake but not sure what he would do. Geet serving him breakast but not looking at him. Avoiding him completely. Parth playing near by. Geet called him and he came quickly. He sat and demands, forgetting everything about last night. He was normal like before but not Maan and Geet. When his all tries go failed he start talking with Parth to grab her attentions. "Parth get ready. We are going to amusement park." he was talking to him but his eyes were on Geet.


Hearing his offer Parth turned excited. "sachhi chachu? We are going to amusement park?" he asked to confirm and Maan nodded added more to his happiness. "chachi we are going to amusement park. Yipeee."


"no Parth. Your chachi is not coming. Just you and me." Maan nailing,forcing her to speak.


"chachi aap nahi chaloge?" Parth asked innocently not getting why his aunt not coming with them.


"Parth finish your breakfast. And you are not going any where." Geet's voice is straight and hard.


"why?" Parth gloomed hearing this.


"because doc aunty told me that Parth is not allowed to go outside alone." Geet told but taunting Maan.


"but he is not alone. I am going with him." Maan interupts.


"ek hi baat ai with you or without you its all same. Apko ek phone aayega and you will forget about him." Geet taunts again.


"ok i will not carry my phone with me." Maan was to hell bend on his demand.



"no need to take this much pain. Parth hum sham ko park jayenge." Geet was stick to her words. Not ready to send him with Maan.


"doc recommend complete bed rest to you." Maan reminds.


"its my problem not yours. As i promised he will not come in your space. He is my responsibility and will take care of him." Geet snapped.


Maan stood on his feet and hold her arm to turned her to him. "what's wrong in that if i take him out. He is my nephew."



"oh really? Now you realized he is your nephew. But sorry i wont allow my baby to go with you."


"why?" Maan annoyed.


"because i dont trust you." she told straigh staring in his widened pupil. "i dont trust you sir." Geet's words shaked him terribly. He never ever imagined this kind of reply from Geet. For a few seconds he turned mute. Searching for words to defend himself. "now dont ask why. You know that." Geet add more which was a direct slap on his face. His grip loosen and Geet took Parth with her to room. Maan saw her leaving. Maan knows she love him madly but not trust him. Why? he almost pout and hurt to. She not trust him.


Parth insisting Geet and trying hard to convience her. He wants to go at any cost. Maan too came there and this time apolozise to both again in their conciousness. Both's eyes were on Geet now,as he wasnt sure weather she convienced or not.


NOTE: even after so many days like were not completed. Fine no issue. MIS and ES both will be shifting to blog. Because Likes to aane nahi hai. And one more thing dont come for pw. PW only given to those readers who give both like and comments.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part.
maan was apolozise
both geet and parth.

watting for next.

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