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Posted: 10 years ago
Part---7 n 8
Just Amazing update
She was totally broken knowing themtruth of maan n his planned mission to trap her and take proof against that moron
ohh she felt being used but decided to help maan cz that dirty disgusting nikhil deserves punishment for his sin ...
She made MMS of his meeting and sent that to maan and seeing that message he came to know that geet comes to know everything ...
like the way geet fought for herself against that disgusting creature n show him girls are not weak ager baana sakte h toh mitta bhi sakte h wo he is now arrested and behind bars...

Coming to few things which I loved it cz of the real touch you gave it this scene and simply make whole story more beautiful n impact full ...
1st-.Maan as a ACP what he did its his job n he can't let his heart between his Nation he so much worried for geet n wanted to search her but when he got calls from his senior wo aapne dil ko side rakh k aapne farz nebhayaa n I love the most you didn't show the gisha pitta thinks sab chor char chalaa gaya geet ko dhoondne he knows his duty need him he had vow his Nations n he can't do things like a normal ppls ...
Swati very smartly about geet through tracking geet's bro n went to meet n even knowing her situation n understanding her POV still as a friend she tried to make geet understand about maan's POV but it's not right time or situation to convince geet as she endured two betrayal only in few days ...

Finally Geet got divorce and decided to leave with his bro n maan to decided to let her go bcoz he know she needed to free from all the burden n she has to find her own self the carefree ,independent , her self conferences and the Geet who lost somewhere ...
I hate sad ending but I know as well a justified ending of the journey BreakFree and for the beginning new journey Meant To Be I'm waiting you better start soon sare logic ek traf h but Maaneet k liye humra pyaar ek traf and you know that...
Amazing n such a heart touchy story Sobia well done sweety you did a amazing job just love it...
I'm sooo sorry sweety for my late comment what to do held up with work and less time then so many pending comments sorry dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely saddy updates geet is broken completely she cant imagine maan would do this to her rohan explains her they have no choice as they r soldiers this is what they r trained for this id their life they have to listen to their brains geet decides its only way she can breakfree she took rohans cell went back to her room but then sneaked innikhils study she had already made a rope of sheets to make it look she has escaped she hid and recorded the meeting send it to maan who was trying ways to rescue her rohan told him he had to tell her everything as she had heard him talikng to maan he was agitated as she was gone he wanted her ack swati tried to make him understand she will find her nikhil got arrested maan interogated him in his way swati found her tried to make her understand maan pov but geet is not ready she may have forgiven him but maan hae to work hard to make her believe in his love which he knew ehn she came to testify against nikhil maans words gave her confidence she had lost she got nikhil the punishment he desreved filed for her divorced but she cant meet maan she thinks she is tainted for his love maan lets her go but promiss he will win her back one day make her believe in him again
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Posted: 10 years ago
great update.would be waiting for the sequel
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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent Updates

When Geet heard whatever Rohan told her she was heartbroken as she believed whatever time and moments spend with Maan was all a farce nothing was true but in all this she stood up and braised herself made herself brave and entered Nikil's study and she recorded the meeting with him and Mishra thereafter she send the MMS to Maan making sure that now the law will handle her husband .
Maan on receiving the MMS was happy that his mission is completed with victory but broken because now Geet knows and feels that he used her only for the mission .

Swati speaks to Geet perhaps it did make some effect but truth Geet's state of mind and her restless heart she just needed to break free and become her own person again
Maan somehow knew that Geet needed space decisions taken in haste will always become a blunder or regret later so he leaves her
as he says they are meant to be so giving her a chance to get back her life

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Posted: 10 years ago
it was so so painful .. though geet kind of forgave maan and i am glad that her ex husband was punished
but still maan and geet are far part.. hope they meet some time
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n double superb emotional updates! Well written! Geet shattered! Geet gets the evidence! Nikhil arrested! Maan assures Geet he is there 4 her! Nikhil punished! Swati explains 2 her! bt its nt easy 4 Geet! she gets divorced! Her bro tries 2 make her understand! she needs time! Maan will wait! looking 4ward 2 next OS!
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Posted: 10 years ago
ending sahi hai aur nehi bhi...sahi hai geet k side se per maan...

nice updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

eagerly waiting fr d epilogue...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Truly realistic ending! Loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliantly written read all the parts at a stretch. Very nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear amazing story line beautifully written really emotional but u ended beautifully can't wait for the sequel :)

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