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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: abba12

thank u so much😉..Yeah Geet talks to herself alot😆Banner is made by kan😛

Welcome Amna,😃ya Vandy made awesome banner.⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks @aparna @crazyfriends ... :-) ...
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Thanks alot for hitting like and posting awesome comments .. means alot guys 😊 tried to reply all comments ...
Thanks for hitting like too ,,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PREVIOUS : PART : 1

Part 2
(translation added in green color )



Recap : she goes and apply oil on her body and then lay down a meter away from him as the place wasn't too large , " subh tak uth jay ga ! abi raat ho gai ha kahin ja b nai sakta yahaan se , mere b sone ka time ha , so hi jaati hun " ,.. within few minutes she falls off to sleep ...
.After sometime she feels the moment on straws , she gets up quickly , nothing visible ... she says a bit loudly " uth gya kya ?? " [ r u awake ] no reply ... she comes to check is he ok, touching his body she gets to know he is cold ... " abbey yeh to sardi se kanp rha ha , kya karun is ka main " [ohh !! he is shivering with cold ,what should i do ?] he was shivering as she already removed his shirt and his jeans was also not dry ,,, " koi garam kapda nai ha , aur yahaan aag b nai laga sakti , sub kuch jal jay ga , " [ nothing warm available .. cant heat the fire too , as it would burn everything ]

she gets up and pulls the kurta which was hanging on the opposite wall , " yeh pehna deti hun shayad better ho ga " [ should make him wear this , it would be better ] after struggle she succeeded in making him wear that and then she removes his wet jeans , and cuddles beside him, to make him a bit comfortable n warm , she felt strange , as used to cuddle in her mom's arms when she was 6 and now after whole 14 years she was in someone's arms ... " ab iss se ziada kuch nai kar sakti tere liye , tu b na utne ka naam nai le rha " [ cant do any thing more , u r nowhere near waking up 🤔 ]

He wakes up with the chirping of birds and sunrays which were falling on his face ... He opens his eyes and tries to adjust with light ... He gets up , body was paining badly .. n found himself in some other world , a hut . no proper ceiling , no floor , he looked at himself ,clad in dirty black kurta ,no pants , only inner and was laying on hay stack ... never in his life he even dreamt of such place ... his father being rich man provided him more then what he needed before he join business ...n then after joining business there was no looking back , where his big air conditioned rooms with king size beds and where grass straws ... Looking here and there he find no one ... " how I reached here?" he looks at himself injured , n few parts of body tied with pieces of cloth ... his servants used to come running towards him with the minor injury and morning coffee was brought as soon as he gets up but today nothing like that happened ...

... he didn't understand which world is it ? he has been in world's best hotels , clubs ,cinemas ,parks but not in such place ... y should he ? he always had luxurious life ... he looks at his shirt and jeans which a there on floor , both torn and blood spots were prominent ... his mind gets flashbacks of attack , bullet in his leg and falling in water ..he remember someone called him , but after that there was nothing in his mind ...

" no if I m not wrong , I did feel someone besides me ?" who can he be ??" he thinks ... " and who brought me here ?" .. may b some poor villager , if its so then he will not live here anymore, maan singh khurana will pay him enough to feed even his offsprings too " he could never imagine it could be a girl "but first I have to check where I m ?" he takes his jeans to check if his valet n phone is in , and to his luck it was in , phone was behind the valet so less water reached it but it was off "oh please ! it must work now .. how will I go out in this condition " .. he turns it on n tries to dial number ... no signals ... " arghhh ! where the hell I m ?" he was irritated ...he put his jeans on ... n tries to stand up , but injury in his leg makes him tremble , still he drags himself out of the hut , coming out he checks the place...

There was pond few meters away , looking up he could only see thick bushes and creepers ... Only from small portion sun rays were entering ... " where is the person now " ... and then he saw her ,she was coming out of water towards edge ... only in her inners ... long thick black hairs till her hips as if scissor never touched them ... and her curvy thin white body , she can beat any girl of his society ... she comes toward him ... " oye ! uth gya tu ... Boht sota ha yaar " [ oyee!! finally u r awake , u sleep too much ] ... he was surprised by her tone , first time someone was talking like this to him ,that too a girl n here in this forest ... " u here ?"..

" u here ? yeh to muje poochna chaiye .. but chor ,pata hai upper se gira ha ... main b giri thi " [ i should be the one who ask this , but i know u too fell into pit like me ] he looks at her, is she also someone like him who fell into pit yesterday ...

"aur khada kun ha ? aram se baith ja .. pata ha na tang pe goli lagi ha ,itni mushkil se nikali main ne " [ and y r u standing ?? sit down .. i pulled the bullet out with so much difficulty ] .. he gets another shock ... " tum ne goli nikali ?" [ u did that ??]

" nahin ! khud nikal gai " [ no , came out itself ] she mocks ...

" sach main yeh sub tum ne kia , I mean ..." [ really ?? u did this ?]

" I mean , u mean kuch nai ... koi aur dikha tere ko yahaan ? tera uper ka hissa khali ha kya ??" [ no i mean u mean , can u see anyone here ?? or ur upper portion is empty ?? ] he was measuring her words which were so heavy for maan singh khurrana to digest ... first girl on earth has guts to talk like this to MSK ...

" 2 mint bahar ruk main aati hun " [ stay here , i m coming in 2 minutes ]ohhh ! now someone was giving him orders ... she goes into the hut and comes out within a minute after changing her inners ...coming towards him she makes him sit forcefully on a block n place some apples and other wild fruits in front of him ...

" yeh kha le .. kal se kuch nai khaaya ha , tere liye ja k jungle se fresh laai hun " [ eat these , u didnt eat anything since yesterday .. i brought fresh from jungle for u ] ... maan looks at fruits and then toward her ... " will I eat this ?"

" haan to ? tuje kia lagta ha is jungle main tere liye roast aay ga ?" "ab kha le , phir se behosh hua na to yehin marte rehna , main kuch nai karney waali " [ so ?? u think there will roast for u in jungle ?? now eat , if u faint again , i wont do anything ] she hands him apple and goes in again ...

... he looks at the apple , greenish yellow , " I think she is right , I will not get anything else , issi pe kam chalao "she comes out with balm in hand and sits right in his feet n pulls his jeans a bit up from injured part . without permission or warning ... he jerks back ,n she looks up ... " what are u doing ??"

"abbey yaar ,tu ne ab tak khaaya b nai aur haan kuch nai karney lagi tere sath , abi tak koi insaan nai khaaya hai main ne , mai insaan nai khati " [ u didnt eat yet ?? and yeah i wont do anything with u .. i didnt eat any human yet , i dont eat humans ] ..

He takes a bite of apple ,n she puts his leg on her lap, which was fully naked and start removing the cloth bandaged on it ... he looks at her , big beautiful hazel eyes , and soft pure skin ... So carefully she removed the cloth, he feels odd seeing her sitting infront of him only in inners .. offcourse he is a man not saint ...she was about to put balm when he stop her hand midway and says " wait ! main khud kar lun ga ... tum dress pehn lo " .. [ wait !! i will do it myself ... u go n wear the dress ]

" haan ! le khud kar le ... aur haan dress nai ha mere pass , yeh b 3 din pehlay chori kiye ,naheen to bina dress k hoti yahaan " [ hmm !! do it urself .. and i dont have dress , i stole these 3 days back .. else i would have been without it here ] ... Shock after shock ... what is this girl ? is she from real world ? ... there was no hesitation ,no fear , no pitch of sadness while telling that she don't have dress...

" Dress nai ha matlab ??" [ no dress means ?? ]

" yeh to simple sentence ha , kesay explain karun ,, dress nai ha matlab nai ha " [ what !! this is simple sentence , no dress means no dress , how should i explain ?? ] she says in irking tone ... "tera uper ka portion sach main khali ha , asan si baat samajh nai aati " [ now m sure ur upper portion is empty thats y u dont understand simple things 😆]... he couldn't say a word just kept listening to her , and finish applying balm ... she stands up ...

. he pulls his phone from his pocket , no signals again ...she looks at his phone " hmm ! acha phone ha , but yahaan signal nai aatay " [ good phone , but no singnals here ]

" tum yahaan rehti ho ?" [ u really live here ?] he asks again not believing she really lives here ...

.. " haan ! ajeeb laga tere ko ?" [ hmm , do u find it strange ??]

" hmm very strange " he says matter of fact ..

" acha chod , muje yeh jagah pasand ha , yeh bta kahaan se ha ?" [ ok leave !! i like this place ,.. where r u from ?? ]

" dehli se " he replies ,still thinking how can someone like this place , " yeh btao , yahaan se nikalne main kitna time lagay ga aur signals kahaan aatay hain ?" [ tell me how much time will it take to get outta here , and where will my phone catch the signals]

" aur agar main kahun k yahaan se bahar nai ja sakte ?aur jo yahaan aata ha use yaheen rehna padta ha meri tarah to ?" [ what if i say , one who comes here , has to stay like me ??] .. he looks at her with weirdest expressions

NEXT : PART : 3



thats it for now 😊... hope u guys enjoy reading .. tried to add translation , though i m really bad in translating 😆... ignore the mistakes plz 😛

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Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Lovely update di
Geet is talking good care of him
And geet is answering in rocket speed and made The MSK shut his mouth
Maan beta this is not ur KM or KC 😆
superb! !
Loved it!!
Thank u sooo much for updating di 😃

me 1st 🥳
Edited by --mittu-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
very nice update
maan is very much shock knowing where is he n in which surrounding n how helpless after talking with geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
hey amna. its really looking different yaar. congrats for becoming the writer.👏👏👏well written , u r showing different geet. poor maan kaha phass gaya. ekk ek bomb daal rahi hai wo maan ke upar. last wala bomb sabse bhayanak saabit hone waali hai maan ko😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
awesome update
i'm loving this jungli geet😆
maan is getting shock after shocks from geet😆
loved the update
update next part soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update
geet noticed maan stirring in sleep out of cold and she made him wear kurta and slept beside him to give her body warmth ...maan woke up next morning and saw where he was he remembered what had happened with him and thought some one helped him and brought him here he thought to help the poor villager without knowing it's girl who saved him
he was looking for his saviour and found some girl emerging from water he was shocked to see her and her talks i think she also fell in this fit and some how got life and started living here not founding any way to go outer world...maan getting shock of shock from the girl infront of him she offered him some fruits and started changing the previous bandage...
i have doubt she has even a name or not...just curious to know
eagerly waiitng for the next part

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