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Posted: 10 years ago
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On the first note...yaaraa... How can u write so much..?? So so so new concepts everytime.. I too have new concepts but I'm nt a writer..lolxx... Btway I was complimenting u... maan is married to radhika.. She is a princess of her family and maan isn't so well off I think... Through out the story is.maams prov. His life took a u turn when geetanjali handa aka geet enters his life... so.. U know what we wants.. Maaneet in end but radhika ka Kia karnaa hai??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part hmmm

Last part!!


Looking at the members of the board who were discussing all so nonsense he was too much irritated finally not able to take more he abruptly left the meeting ... Driving harshly through the empty roads he reached his apartment. ..

All his calculations were upto the mark yet something was out of place... pushing his hair back he hit his face into the pillow trying to sort out the issue

He kept the matter aside for a while n thought of all the people who could help him managing the situation. ..

After rejecting all the options he circled the only name left in his list Geetanjali Handa!

He made a call n waited holding his breath for her to answer. ..

N when she did he almost forgot the purpose of his call...

Cursing himself for getting distracted he explained the matter talking to the point

She finally asked him to come to the mansion as she had taken an off from work for few days n she won't be available at the office. ..

With a note of msg with the directions to her manision she cut the call

N he was relieved!!

Thanking his stars with a wide grin on his face he pushed all the files scattered around the bed to side n slept off

He knew Geetanjali was best in her field n he could now sleep peacefully

Wahin wahin pe qayamat ho woh jidhar jaayein
Jhuki jhuki hui nazron se kaam kar jaayen
Tadapta chhod dein raste mein aur guzar jaayen
Sitam to yeh hai ke dil le lein aur mukar jaayen
Samajh mein kuchh nahin aata ki hum kidhar jaayen
Yahi iraada hai yeh kah ke hum to mar jaayen

Looking at her almost wet form he stood rooted at the door he was seeing her almost after one whole year more or less n she looked like an angel!!

He was directed to the lawn by one of her maids saying madem was tending plants... n Quietly left him alone with the beauty in front...

Anjali!!

Him addressing her so personally was like a dream to her she couldn't even lift her lashes to look at him

Getting red under his gaze she tried to escape but this time her caged her in his arms while she struggled to get out still not looking at him

So ?? He questioned her by rising an eyebrow. ..

She pushed him slightly while he pouted at her push n faking anger...

Radhika deserves it maan please try n understand. ..

This is not right... she left my life long back so y should we create all this misshap in the office its all over right. ..

Maan look... listen to me atleast once...

No... u are being mean Anjali n I don't like it. ..

Y don't u understand maan she will get back to u if she sees u all successful with her company sooner or later then again u will be forced to live the same life. ..

He scooped her her in his arms taking her to one of the rooms while she continued her explanation

She will claim her rights as ur wife again u aren't legally divorced. .. remember. ..

So now with u still having the powers n the company facing losses she will leave u n easily sign the papers I asked you to send it to her... tomorrow morning u will receive the first call from her regarding the same ...

He dropped her on the couch while he grabbed a fresh towel for her to dry handing it to her while she continued talking...

U go change I'll wait in the hall

He was still not sure if all this was good... he didn't know what would Radhika think of him... he had never thought of her in a wrong way... she was a good person by heart except she was too much pre occupied with stuff she forgot playing wife to him

If it wasn't Aditya Handa he would have never realised how much mess his life was...

An year back he had Aditya walking into his cabin with his assistant tagging along. .. he looked ao powerful n strong with a look his assistant disappeared out of the cabin n he kept watching him with mouth hanging wide open

When Aditya turned towards him he quickly pretended to look into some file...

Mr.khurana I'm sorry to disturb you. .. let me introduce myself im Aditya Handa elder brother of Geetanjali. ..

We have a small party at our home this weekend n on behalf of mu sister I'm here to invite you. ..

That's it how could he miss the opportunity to meet Miss.Handa go so he promptly attended the party...

It was a small family get together filled with warmth n love... by the end if it he was feeling low n empty... with tears in his eyes..

That's when Aditya came n explained what he had n what he was missing. .. the whole Handa family was ready to welcome him to their home wholeheartedly since their daughter had fallen for his charms...

They promised him to bring him out of the mess he was in but he said he would handle it ... which he couldn't so finally after waiting for an year Geetanjali stepped in taking the situation in her hands n created crises in the management

Now he was here to ask her to help him out with the mess n she knew she has to be a bit strong or else he would never listen

She came down to see him with a deep frown n crushing the napkin on the dining table not liking anything which was going around. ..

She served him food but he refused to budge. .. finally she opted for her final weapon

Ok don't eat... I'll go out with Rahul n have a romantic dinner later if her proposes me then...

She couldn't even complete he crushed his lips with hers not letting her speak all that baseless stuff...

The other day he did get a call from Radhika n within a month they were divorced. ..

Now he was working in one of the MNC at a post he earned with his hardwork... he had a chatter box as fiance whom he was about to marry at the end of next month!




The end!





If I messed up anything let me know will correct it...

n also in all the os I write hereafter geet will be Geetanjali n I will be addressing her as Anjali. ..

The os for tomorrow will be named "The 17th Match😉"

-spoorthi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: doll.12

On the first note...yaaraa... How can u write so much..?? So so so new concepts everytime.. I too have new concepts but I'm nt a writer..lolxx... Btway I was complimenting u... maan is married to radhika.. She is a princess of her family and maan isn't so well off I think... Through out the story is.maams prov. His life took a u turn when geetanjali handa aka geet enters his life... so.. U know what we wants.. Maaneet in end but radhika ka Kia karnaa hai??


Bata na we'll work out together!
N compliment tha oh☺️

Radhika why bother about her 😉
Princess will take care of herself😆

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os...
Maan married to princess and is not love...
Maan confused about feeling towards geet...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Wonderful start

Bechara confused maan

Thanks for reading! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: aparna3011

interesting

poor maan tie with princess forcefully who never think about him
geet come in his life as pleasant surprise whom he is in love now


Thanks for reading Aparna😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fab end! well written! so it was all planned! Geet fell 4 him! Aditya met him n invited him 2 their house! Maan feels bad 4 dng this 2 Radhika! Geet makes him understand! So they r nw divorced n Maaneet getting married! Maan gt a post tht he earned!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Sweet ... update ..
Maan choose Geet ...
and he could not come out of his problem so Geet ...
did all that made maan ...
worried ... yet they are... sweet ...
hehe liked the os so... much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: suni_104

Nice update
Maan married to princess and is not love
Maan confused about feeling towards geet
Continue soon


Thanks for dropping by😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya27

the title shoyld be

maan ko lut liya milke husn waalo ne
radhi radhi radhika ne geetu geetu geet ne

yaar maan toh na toh ugal sakta hai na bol sakta hai ki uske dil main kya


Mast title hai😆

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