Os: Confused Khurana! (completed on pg.5)

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Hamein to loot liya milke husn walon ne
Kaale kaale baalon ne, gore-gore gaalon ne..



Quietly sliding out of the bed getting dressed back into his clothes she made his way to his room... He was Maan Singh Khurana husband of Radhika Rathod..

She is a princess of her clan... Gorgeous no doubt in it... got everything she wanted at the blink of an eye... he too comes into the same list

Working in one of her organisations he bumped into her in a party n after a month he came to know that he was getting married to the princess from his family who were all ready to sell their only son off to the luxury they were offered in return

Pouting n cribbing to himself at his state he walked to his balcony trying to find answers to his never ending questions. ..

She said she loved him n they consummated their marriage he thought her will eventually fall into love but that never happened coz she asked him to settle his belongings in the next room very next day

She offered him the post of MD which he refused coz he wanted to earn his own abilities she was mad at him on that matter n didn't even try contacting him for a whole month. .. looking at things he again compromised with his life n took up the post... she was back that night to celebrate his success. .. as a princess off course

They did have sex a few times when she was extremely happy or when she was high n drunk other than that they hardly talked yet she claimed she loved him!

Life did change once again when he saw HER entering his conference room with attitude

Geetanjali Handa!





Nazar mein shokiyaan aur bachpana shararat mein
Adaayen dekhke hum phans gaye mohabbat mein
Hum apni jaan se jaayenge jinki ulfat mein
Yakin hai ki na aayenge woh hi maiyyat mein
Khuda sawaal karega agar qayamat mein
To hum bhi keh denge hum lut gaye sharafat mein



She was here for a deal with our company...dressed in a simple anarkali she stood very confidently in the conference room full of men

He got to know she was the CEO n daughter of the Handa group of companies.. n he would be working with her for a month or so.. till the project gets completed

she was through professional n very particular in her work... working late in the office was normal for him one such day he was working in a project he was disturbed by a knock on the door

Looking at the time he was confused as to who it was... she gracefully entered my cabin with few files in one hand n a try of snacks in other!

Placing them on the table she made a quick bun out of her long hair making her swan like neck visible. .. he was quite amused seeing her behaving so informal with him...

Maan let's take a break n have something I'm starving she said out of blue grabbing the sandwich which she just brought. ..

It was the first time she addressed him something other than Mr.khurana! N he was still trying to understand the sudden difference in her behaviour. ..

Then she started talking like an express about her college friends n all the fun she had... Though he gave his input here n there he was beyond shocked by her ability to speak so much with out a break

Slowly without his knowledge the topic took an official tun n she completed her work with his help...

A month passed in a blink of an eye n she bid all her tata bye byes in a very formal way

Today after the another boring success party he was left alone in his room n when his thoughts turned to Miss.Handa he was all more confused

Poor him n the two women of his life




Hamein to loot liya milke husn walon ne
Kaale kaale baalon ne, gore-gore gaalon ne!!


Last part pg.5





Here we go an os of the day
just a closure of this is left which will be up to night!!
I will be more than happy if someone would give your input as what you want the end to be like😃

Kal ek aur naya os...😉

Have fun n do let me know what you think of it

N next time yaar before posting a pm be more specific if u want an update ya just a random stuff😆

-Spoorthi

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing. Starting was shocking. Maan is already married with radhika.she is very stubborn woman and get everything what she likes and maan is one of her liking. Omg she bribed maan's family for maan's alliance. Poor maan , second day of marriage and he got order to shift his all things to the next room. He was fed up with his life until geet enters in his life. I am also amazed the way geet started to talk maan informally so soon. Geet was here for some project and now when it is finished , geet took her leave. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start. So Maan married but now in love with Geet? Waiting for next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishamna

Amazing. Starting was shocking. Maan is already married with radhika.she is very stubborn woman and get everything what she likes and maan is one of her liking. Omg she bribed maan's family for maan's alliance. Poor maan , second day of marriage and he got order to shift his all things to the next room. He was fed up with his life until geet enters in his life. I am also amazed the way geet started to talk maan informally so soon. Geet was here for some project and now when it is finished , geet took her leave. Waiting for next dear


U know sometimes ur comments give me complex

Jitna lamba mera update nahi hota utna lamba is ur comment😲😆

ok on a serious note thanks for reading all my stupid stuff🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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woow...nice OS👏
poor maan his life is really messed up...having a wife who thinks she loves you is really awful...🤢

i hope his wife get rid of him asap...coz i don't think he can do anything except compromising...😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fict

Interesting start. So Maan married but now in love with Geet? Waiting for next.


Love😕😕😆

Let's see

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskeeter

woow...nice OS👏

poor maan his life is really messed up...having a wife who thinks she loves you is really awful...🤢

i hope his wife get rid of him asap...coz i don't think he can do anything except compromising...😆😆


Hope so😆
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Thank you😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congos on new OS!! 🥳
poor Maan...a ball in Radhika's court 😆 ...
being kicked here and there 😉
y suddenly geet came and talked with Maan 😕
will geet make a deal and buy Maan 🤣
waiting for nxt part!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --mittu--

Congos on new OS!! 🥳
poor Maan...a ball in Radhika's court 😆 ...
being kicked here and there 😉
y suddenly geet came and talked with Maan 😕
will geet make a deal and buy Maan 🤣
waiting for nxt part!!


Nice idea

But I think we put a not for sale board on him now that geet is in picture🤣

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