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libros

@libros

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Avenging_Angel
finished reading all parts
seems nice story
Good that you are building nice plot and characters cause thats essential for story.
Loved all characters and the bond they share with each other
Waiting for more

I'm glad you're liking it😃

Thanks for your comment... and also liking all my characters and their bond

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libros

@libros

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
can u pls post teaser???

sorry for being gayab... was caught up in some work... havent written a word this past week...

will try and give a teaser surely

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Sudha

@babelicious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Nicely written ff.. But I feel it's a lil dragging ... Some scenes could easily have been cut short 😳 .. My opinion ofcourse.. It doesn't have to matter anyway.. Looking forward to the next

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libros

@libros

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: ms.nautanki
Nicely written ff.. But I feel it's a lil dragging ... Some scenes could easily have been cut short 😳 .. My opinion ofcourse.. It doesn't have to matter anyway.. Looking forward to the next

Thanks for the comment and your opinion...

I am a first time writer and am bound to make mistakes so please feel free to point them out for me and never feel that it doesn't have to matter... every reader's opinion is equally important to me...

I'll take it into account and try to increase the pace of the story... also I'd really appreciate if you could point out the scenes/ areas which you feel could be cut down... so that i can work on that in future... thanks 😃

Edited by libros - 10 years ago

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libros

@libros

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Teaser

"Well... do you remember my mom looking for prospective grooms for me..."
"Yeah... she found a few and we made fun of some of them but ultimately rejected all" she said while remembering their antics in rejecting all the prospective matches brought by the ladies of the society
"Yes well she found another guy... I ran out of excuses for not meeting him... you were also busy I couldn't find any other way to reject so I decided to meet him..."
"Babes I'm never too busy for you... you should've told me... I'd have come to your aid within seconds..."

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

rocking fab teaser! want an update nw lol! 😉

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libros

@libros

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
rocking fab teaser! want an update nw lol! 😉

That's your update status... still work in progress😉

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Interesting Teaser and its making me very curious

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

nice teaser. so geet's mother found groom for her and she ran out of excuses to reject him and now have to meet him...who will be that person...

update soon

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libros

@libros

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Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
nice teaser. so geet's mother found groom for her and she ran out of excuses to reject him and now have to meet him...who will be that person...
update soon

are you sure its her...?😈😉