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monika

@rashmiverma

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

awsum update dear. .. maan is airforce pilot. new concept really gud..maan plan missing geet worried.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

pl maan ko kuch maat honedena...

interesting...

loved it ...

thank u very much for the lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Alpha01

@Alpha01

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Poor Maan is torn between his two duties - on one hand he wants to serve his country and keep his family safe and on the other hand he wants to stay with his wife and kids and keep them happy.

It must be hard for them all to cope with this and the poor twins are finding it the hardest. They don't get to spend a lot of time with their dad and Maan equally is missing out on a lot of their young childhood.

Geet is finding it harder than usual to let him go as she is worried for him but doesn't know why and then they get the news that they all dread - Maans plane is missing.😲

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daring

@daring

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice start congrats on new story maan is pilot geet and maan completed five years of marriage they have twins maan hardly get a time due to his duty maan holiday complete now he was going back to duty but geet and their children don't want maan go back maan is also in pain but helpless hope maan is safe

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

congrats roch for the new story. nice start. geet ki subconscious heart warned about the upcoming incident., but she could not clearly understand. now flight is missing. hope maan is safe. its so sad to see geet and children in that situation

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

human intution is more stronger than anything else and geet and children asking him to not go,geet was feeling sad and they got a news of plane missing...i tthink he will successful in his mieeion and will be back safe and sound.

hai vatan hai vatan hubko teri kasam teri bato pe jaan tul loota dege hum...

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

congrats on the new story

lovely start

maan is an air force officer generally it stays away from family

but whenever he gets time he comes back spend his time with his family

maaneet have twin boys, both miss their dad allot when is he away

ending part was sad

hope nothing wrong happen with maan and he come back safe and sound!!

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anky_s

@anky_s

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Congrats for new story...haven't read yet do will comment later

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Congrtz for d new story dear :)

Concept is really good . first part was superb . maan is in air force ...geet n his family miss him but he is helpless coz he is a soldier so he have to think about his country first . maan came home after a long time ...just for 5 days ...in these days he tired to spend as much time as he can with his family n geet . n now 5 dayz r over so time to go back ...d moment was really emotional ... There was only one wish come back safe n sound :( I m feeling emotional after reading this :'(

P.s. thnx for d pm dear :)

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Rochelle

@-Roch-

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: mishtypie
Congratz 4 d new story Roch
Maan is wrkng in airforce nd doesnt get much time 2 spend wit his family😭
Maaneet r childhood swthearts nd bth supprtd each other nd married😃
Maaneet r blessd wit twins who doesnt want their dada 2 go back bt maan had 2 go 😔
Geet is tensd as maan didnt send msg nd den in news it is shwng dat air force plane is missng
Waitng 4 d nxt part Roch update soon

Thanks a lot for your feedback 😃