Maaneet TS : Safe & sound : Completed Pg 22 - Page 5

Originally posted by: idunno

human intution is more stronger than anything else and geet and children asking him to not go,geet was feeling sad and they got a news of plane missing...i tthink he will successful in his mieeion and will be back safe and sound.

hai vatan hai vatan hubko teri kasam teri bato pe jaan tul loota dege hum...

Originally posted by: aparna3011

congrats for new story

interesting

Originally posted by: _Maaneet_

congrats on the new story

lovely start

maan is an air force officer generally it stays away from family

but whenever he gets time he comes back spend his time with his family

maaneet have twin boys, both miss their dad allot when is he away

ending part was sad

hope nothing wrong happen with maan and he come back safe and sound!!

Originally posted by: anky_s

Congrats for new story...haven't read yet do will comment later

Originally posted by: sagorika93

Congrtz for d new story dear :)

Concept is really good . first part was superb . maan is in air force ...geet n his family miss him but he is helpless coz he is a soldier so he have to think about his country first . maan came home after a long time ...just for 5 days ...in these days he tired to spend as much time as he can with his family n geet . n now 5 dayz r over so time to go back ...d moment was really emotional ... There was only one wish come back safe n sound :( I m feeling emotional after reading this :'(

P.s. thnx for d pm dear :)

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

congo 4 new story

Originally posted by: ksasi

Interesting concept.

Originally posted by: nishamna

It's amazing. Maneet were lost in their beautiful world unyill their sweet liitle twins wake them up. beautiful family with enjoyable moment. Maan is a aircraft officer who several for country. After spending good five days with family now.maan had to report his office. Geet and babies all wanted tons top him but how could he stop when he is having lot if responsibilities. Maan left but don't know geet was much disturbed with his leaving. N I guess her heart already felt the danger. Maan's Plane is missing. Waiting for next dear

Originally posted by: CookieMonster.

Congos 4 new TS