Depth Of Love -maaneet ff- Thread 2!!!Updated Part 36- Pg 34 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
good Maan is good and thinks parents respect too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! amazing updates dear...loved them
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Maan's friends care so much for Geet. Maaneet's argument and Maan said now he will handle everything in his way.
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Posted: 9 years ago
good updates let see how now maan handles his mistry and her parents
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice but painful update
Maan kar raha hai woh thik hai par usska tarika galat hai...
Geet ko toh pata bhi nahi hai ki Maan Geet ki aur usski maa ki baatein sun li hai...
jab Geet Maan ke mann ki baat jaanti hi nahi toh support kaise karegi?
Geet ne apna gussa Maan ko dikha diya aur phone bhi louta diya...
Geet Ne Maan ko milne ke liye jooth bhi bola ...
Poor Geet...ab Maan kya karega dekhna hai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates...
This is first that geet is angry with maan..
This has spike my interest ten folds in this story...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 33

Maan parked the car and started following geet secretly...

Geet knocked the door of her apt and entered inside like a dead body ..

she wanted to tell everything to supriya what she did but and she didn't knew how ...

...

supriya wondered looking at her painful face..

geet ...what happened ,why are you crying...just now you went happily...

geet held one of the pillar for support and sat on floor crying hard

maa...maa maine aap se jhoot kaha...

supriya's heart was choking listening to geet...god knows what all stories came in just a second to her mind when she saw her crying..

supriya: kya jhoot bola..geet jaldi bol is sey pehle mujhe kuch ho jaye

geet : I didn't went for college work ,i went to see maan..I am sorry maa...

Supriya was staring at geet with her blank eyes and mute form
when they heard a sharp knock at the door...

frightening it could me any neighbour or sachin...supriya tried to come to her normal form and geet stood up rubbing her tears ..she looked away from the door trying to stop her hiccups...

supriya opened the door softly and was dumbfounded to see maan at the door ...

she was gaping him not sure what to say when geet also turned around to see Maan standing at her door...looking at her and her mother in his composed form..

After that day he never knew if he will be able to face geet's parents specially Supriya...but today geet's love overpowered his weakness and he gathered all his patience and strength to face them ,for his love he was ready to swim the ocean of flames...

kya mai andar aa sakta hu..

geet was petrified to see him at the door...she shivered hearing his lips moving...she was not sure what he said

but supriya let him in and closed the door behind...

all of them were standing at their places for 5 mins when maan broke the silence..

he looked straight into supriya's eyes and said..

i love your daughter and i can't live without her...

he conveyed the ultimate truth of his life in simple words...

His eyes steered towards geet

geet's hiccups continued ...she ran towards her room listening to his words,she didn't knew why but she wanted to cry hard ,it wa so dificult to understand maan..

maan's eyes followed her till she was out of his range of vision..

maan spoke again this time with his painful and firm voice to supriya..

we never crossed our limits anytime in these years...so you don't have to worry...

His insides were shaking with fury at the same time when he has to defend them,or when he has to even clear the air to someone,even if it was their parents..his ego was shattered bigtime as he never liked to prove himself for anything...he never did that since childhood..neither to his daadi or parents or anyone for that matter...


Supriya was not sure what to tell him,but one thing she understood that its not only geet who's love is pure but maan's love for her looks equally true with the authenticity with which his eyes spoke to her...

She took a deep breath and asked him to sit pointing him towards one of the chair...

His eyes were impatiently looking for sachin..and he said

where is Baba..i will talk to him too..

he stood with confidence,as he decided that he will have a clear cut discussion with her parents to avoid any misunderstanding in future,and after this he knows nothing in this world,just nothing can stop him to have his geet ...

He knew the place of her parents in Geet's life, and so it was important for him to take care of her most precious possession before he does anything,other than supriya and sachin,there was no one who can stop him to be with geet ...

Supriya panicked listening to his words ,she folded her hands in front of him and said

beta ..mai sab samajhti hu..i know you both love each other .mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai..but pls understand its not a right time to speak with her father..

i beg of you beta ...pls she bowed her hand with tears flowing from her eyes..

Sachin already had too much in his plate to struggle for ,He really cannot deal with anymore hassels and badly needed geet's and supriya's support at this point in his life...

Maan couldn't see her crying like this folding her hands..he felt miserable to see her in this state..maan immediately held her hand and said: maa please...

he covered her folded hands with his and pressed them with a concern...

saying I am sorry he left from her place in a guilt...Her mother is an angel like geet ,what was i thinking..mai unse aise baat karne chala gaya
as if i am going to talk to my parents...i should understand that everybody is not like my family..

he felt bad for geet,that he came into her life..Life of simple loving people and he is destroying their peace, happiness and their bonding...His respect for supriya was tenfold more now..

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supriya was relaxed after today's meeting with maan, both mother daughter cried happily ,supriya told her abt maan's conversation with her and how she was so impressed and contetded by the fact that maan loves geet and at the same time he respects them ,he called them maa baba,so he doesn't think of them like any other stranger but geet's parents were equally his parents, which supriya really admired and now she was also a mother of Son...she felt proud of Geet!!

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Rajji got admission in IIT ,On the other hand geet decided this time that for baba she doesn't want to go into medical college coz she never liked studying biology at all ,And thinking about dissection classes in her school, she still remember how she hated them ,and it was not her cup of tea at all...she was always a creative person,but coz she didn't want to argue with baba much at that time she took both maths and bio as her subjects...

sachin was upset initially but then he loved his
daughter to the core and his happiness was in hers,so on the basis of 12th result she got an admission in a decent college in delhi providing B.Arch course.

After a week...

It was her first day to college and she was quite nervous thinking about new friends,new people she will be meeting in college,Above all she was scared of not being able to cope up with such a forward mentality of people in delhi which she realized when she went to colleges with sachin and while shopping with supriya in different streets and markets ...their short clothes, how they were smoking, driving cars, totally independent...she use to ogle at them admiringly...

she cursed maan cutely for not letting her know all these things abt his city ,how she is going to manage ,all of this gave her a jittery feeling...she so wanted to talk to him ...

geet: kaise baat karu...i left his phone with him ..

supriya was in kitchen making geet's favourite aaloo ka paranthas...but geet was unable to eat much today...

sachin: geet why are you not eating properly,you just had half of the paratha...what happen

geet: baba i don't feel like eating more..

sachin ws smiling knowing her daughter is nervous

sachin : ok , atleast finish your curd ,he asked supriya to pack some for her lunch...

sachin bought a cell phone for geet and gave her knowing they will need it the most to be in touch with each other ..

geet was so happy to have a personal phone,her eyes were twinkling and she knew what she had to do now...


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Edited by varshr - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Update
love it
geet will start her college
can't wait for the next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
part 33 - so maan won geet's mother heart. she was too much happy that geet chose right person. geet took admission n collage but was scared with diff atmosphere. how will she cope in this new college life. hope she gets new true friends. she was happy that she got her phone. she was dying to call maan.

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