Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1]

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#391

like maans ditermination about his career no matter what nobody n nothing cant stop him to reach his dream but did he forgot geet

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#392

glad that maan didnt forget her just went to buy food but atleast he could inform her before go nice part thnx 4 update

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sanum23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#393

nice ud

at last they reached but still didn't got out of station

geet lost maan thinking he left her taking hr jewellery

and clothes maan grabs hr from back and scolds hr

but she's happy she got life that he's not cheater

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BloodDiamond

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Posted: 10 years ago

#394

Chapter 13
Geet had a hard time to keep pace with her husband seeing him buying newspapers she glances at the throbbing crowd and hoping for the best in her life and progress
her thoughts halt with a lady passing by and she discovers her husband missing !!!!

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BloodDiamond

@BloodDiamond

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#395

Chapter 14
Loved this update for the proper interaction between Maaneet
Maan was sarcastic at her being so lost and after Geet rejoiced that he came back she also muttered Dusht Danav for all the things he said her 😆

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Avenging_Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#396

Read all parts in one go and loved it very much
A very beautiful well written story 👏
The characters you have portrayed are very realistic...
Their hopes, dreams, struggle to achieve the goal in their life you have portrayed it all in a very simple n realistic way
Amazing job dear 👍🏼