Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1]

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Commelina

@Commelina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#411

Hey Readers !
So did the updates compensate for the long wait ?
This update is dedicated to my friend Flame Of Forest who has now turned into a goldie.
Congratulations , Flame !

A Bada wala Thankyou to everyone !
For reading , liking, giving your reviews and putting those waiting comments and that beautiful waiting picture ( taahir , I loved that picture. :)).

@ Hermoso , I am expecting more hugs now. ;)
@ Ms. Nautanki , are you happy with the length now ?
@ xolfiya , I am fit and fine. We had a quiz in the college so was busy preparing for it. Then asssignments bhi pure karne the. I hope you are doing well. Btw behna I have written a small poem and you 've got to check that. Dekho ab hum poetess bhi ban gaye. :)

Edited by Commelina - 10 years ago

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#412

Thank you will be waiting

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 10 years ago

#413

Loving the pace of the story .adi nd pinky story is welcomed and loving the relation status on father in law nd son in law.bahut kuch hone wala abhi . Maaneet ki story tho tension deti hai .who was taxi driver ,did i miss someone in the story ? Ab kya hoga maan ji ne tho farmaan hi de diya . Yehi ruko . Geet plan to get faint 🤣ab dusre reason ke liye she has to faint ki why his husband is behaving weird .continue soon ,i know u must b busy but plz atleast try to update sooner nd big warm hug to u for three updates .loved it

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Commelina

@Commelina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: hermoso
Loving the pace of the story .adi nd pinky story is welcomed and loving the relation status on father in law nd son in law.bahut kuch hone wala abhi . Maaneet ki story tho tension deti hai .who was taxi driver ,did i miss someone in the story ? Ab kya hoga maan ji ne tho farmaan hi de diya . Yehi ruko . Geet plan to get faint🤣ab dusre reason ke liye she has to faint ki why his husband is behaving weird .continue soon ,i know u must b busy but plz atleast try to update sooner nd big warm hug to u for three updates .loved it

Hello Hermoso !
Thankyou for the hug !:)
more updates coming today so I m expecting more hugs. ;)
About taxi driver...remember Adi and his brother's talk. And if you still cant then dont worry Ch 16 is incomplete so when i update the whole ch you'll get to know him.
Thanks for your feedback. It is words like these that makes the world brighter. :)

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#415

Awesme updates
pinky n adi part was nice..

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#416

love d pinky n adi prt...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#417

Geet's Ex boyfriend or ex-potential BF is Adi's brother who cleared exam in first attempt. this is going to sting Geet more. isn't it.

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Hemlata

@nitika20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#418

Hehe Pinky .. Asking about ..
Cleaning,and watering plants ..
in singing ..
and Adi replied in song only ..
these two what we.call love birds always singing ...Hahahaha ...
How Geet knows Adi's brother ..??
and Adi's meeting with his FIL was like maska lagying ...