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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
dadi is so selfish 😡 she only wants her waaris... she nothin g to do with maan & geet's feelings & pain...😡
but time maan is not agreed to do what she want... & poured out his heart... 😭 but use koi fark hi nhi padta... even maan said that he'll kill himself if she tried to snatch sunny from geet... dadi doesn't love maan...
nandini also listened everything & know the real reason maan married her... hope she will reunite maaneet & sunny...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
Loved it ...
Dadi s behaving very selfish ... Maan s pouring out s frustration ... Dadi want ly sunny ...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
looks like Nandini will free maan to be with his family. Glad to see his mother with him. How will geet react. Dadi is only thinking about Warris...what a shame!!!!!!!!!!! Sunny will finally have his father with him. Very sorry to see story ending this quick. you are very good writer and the story has reflection of social aspect (hidden status). please write a detailed epilogue.and soon. you are sweet, updating fast which is a relief (from waiting!!!!!!)
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Posted: 10 years ago


🤗 Hi Indu dear

😃 epi bhi milega kya..?


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Posted: 10 years ago
ye indu ko all of sudden kya ho gaya?ek to drasticaly ff end kar diya aur ab hamare sawal ke jawab bhi nahi de rahi khairiyat to hai na?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dadi is such a cheap lady...moi hate her...
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Posted: 10 years ago



First, thank you guys... for the likes and comments...


second, I am sorry for not updating... I was busy with last minute shopping and packing... as I am travelling to India today...

I thought to update epilogue.. but couldn't finish that... so i am posting till I have written... so this means there will be another epilogue... hope u are fine with that...


Here is the first epilogue...




Epilogue...



Maan exited the Airport and saw someone holding a name card for him... he went to the person... he said .. I am Maan...


person - hello Mr. Khurana... I am Yash Sinha... we talked on phone...


Maan - hello mr. Sinha... how is he...


Yash - There is no hope... he is waiting for you... I think only you can relieve him... he said heavily...


Maan - how did it happen...


Yash - they were driving... and someone hit them from the back...


Maan nodded and entered the car... Yash Drove for about 40 minutes and reached the hospital on Maan's insistence... he wanted to meet him first...


Yash lead him to the person...


Maan entered and saw him lying on the hospital bed... with machines attached ... he heart leaped seeing him like that... he always remembered him smiling... but now... he took a heavy breadth and approached him...


Maan took his hand into his hand slowly and said... Papa...


Rajveer and Geet met with an accident while returning from a store... Rajveer was severely injured and Geet is also injured but not life threatening... she asked about her father... but was told he is fine... and she is all the while sleeping coz of the injuries and medicines... Sunny was with Yash and Ankita... so he was saved...


Rajveer slowly opened his eyes... he saw Maan and tried to speak...


Maan - don't say anything papa... I am here... and I will manage everything... you just get well soon...


whom is he kidding... the doctors have said he has very less time... they even wondered how he could survive such a fatal accident... they didn't knew the reason... his daughter geet... is the only reason... he wanted her to be in safe hands... u till he fulfill his responsibility of seeing geet in safe hands... how can he leave... so only he asked yash to inform Maan...


Rajveer - let me speak Maan... i ... know I have a very.. less time... I have to leave Maan... but my worry is only geet... he said with tears flowing... remembering his daughters alone life...


Maan - don't worry about geet papa...


Rajveer - how can I not Maan... I know she is brave... but I have seen her crying in loneliness... she might be pretending she is happy... but i know Maan... what she is going through... as I have gone through the same... I don't want her to be alone... I tried to persuade her for marriage ... but she never heard... she denied every time I tried to convince her...


Rajveer was having breathing problem... the doctors advised him to stop... but he denied... he continued... I am not asking you to leave your family Maan... I just want you to look after her... make sure that she is fine... I don't want anything other than this... I will always worry for her Maan... I am leaving her like this... I don't want to... but I have to go to my simmi... she is waiting there for a long time... I have promised her that I will make sure geet is in safe hands... but now I don't have other option than to call you... plz take care of her Maan... when ever it is possible Plzz call her...to know how she is doing... I don't ask you more than that... I will leave peacefully then... Rajveer completed with great difficulty...


Maan - papa .. plz... take rest now... I am there for Geet... I promise you take care of her from now on... you need not worry about her anymore... I promise you...


Rajveer nodded a no... but Maan continued... papa... you don't need to worry about my family...


Rajveer - no Maan... I know what a family means... you can be angry with them... but u cannot live with them... I ... I lied to geet... just to make her think about you in a positive way... my parents died after my marriage with simmi... I do want her to lead a life like that...in anger and in bitterness... so I lied...


Maan had tears... Rajveer is an example... He loved geet to an extent that he lied about himself... Papa... how can I ever repay you...


Rajveer... no Maan... I am selfish... I want my geet to happy... so only I didn't care about your family and came to meet you... if I was not selfish I wouldn't have come there...


Maan - no.. papa... you are not... geet is lucky to have a father like you...


Rajveer - Maan... I want to meet geet once... I want to see her to my hearts content before leaving... he said in between heavy breathing...


Maan nodded and left to meet geet...


Maan entered and saw Geet... she is sleeping with injuries on her head.. hand and legs... she had her leg fractured... his heart winced seeing her like that... fresh tears formed in his eyes... he slowly went and touched her head... caressing it... Geet opened her eyes... she saw Maan...she thought she is haullacating... She said is rasp voice... Maan... He nodded...


Maan - geet... papa wants to meet you...


geet panicked... papa... hi alright na Maan... the Doctors said he is doing fine... what happened... and why are you here... who called you...


Maan - geet I will answer all your questions... but first let's meet papa... Yash went to bring sunny... papa wants to meet him too...


Geet in a desperate voice... Maan... plzz.. tell me... papa is fine right...


Maan didn't answer her... but picked her up and placed her in the wheel chair...he saw some things on the side table... he picked it and kept in his pocket and took her to Rajveer's room...


Rajveer saw her... Geet saw her father for the first time after the accident... two days back...


geet cried... papa...


Rajveer - gudia ... plz.. forgive your dad... I am leaving you like this...


Geet - don't say that papa... you are my brave dad...you are my hero... you can't do this... Geet cried holding his hand...


Rajveer - be strong Gudia... what ever may the situation... be strong for sunny... and remember you dad is always with you... he said in a heavy breadth...


Geet panicked.. - papa...papa... she shouted for the doctor...


Maan - papa... plz... take rest... Geet will be here... and I am here too...


Rajveer - I am going to rest forever Maan... my only concern is My gudia...


Maan - I am here for Geet papa... I will always be...


and in a moment he took out a box... opened it ... it had the sindhur... it is the same sindhur box... with which he proposed geet... he took out a pinch of sindhur and applied it on geets partition... Geet is startled ... Maan...


Maan - see ... papa... I promised you ... now geet is my wife...


Rajveer is still looking at Maan ... Maan continued... I got divorced papa... Nandini is married now... I was at her marriage when I got the call from Yash... Nandini found her love once again papa... she is happy... I planned to come here after the wedding... but...


Rajveer had tears in his eyes... his gudia is in safe hands... and she will be happy with her love... his daughter has a family now...


Yash slowly came with sunny... sunny got scared seeing Rajveer and Geet in bandages and bruises... Yash prepared him... so he didn't jump on his nanu or mom...


Maan took him and went near Rajveer... Rajveer felt content seeing Maan, Geet and sunny together... Rajveer held Sunny's hand and kissed it...


Maan handled him to yash and yash left the room...



Maan and Geet sat with Rajveer till his last breadth... Rajveer left the world as a peaceful man...




Ignore mistakes...plz...


next epilogue will be after I reach India...




Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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& have a safe Journey...

Tama❤️
Edited by sukklover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks 4 da pm! sad update! Geet n her dad met in an accident! Geet is fine bt her dad is serious! Maan is in USA 2 meet Rajveer! Rajveer wants Maan 2 b der Geet! Maan assures him! Geet goes 2 c her dad! she is shattered! Maan fils her maang! Nandini remarried! Maan divorced! Rajveer dies! update soon! safe journey back home
Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago

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