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rashmiverma thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
m sacred of sd nw khi vo sunny ko geet se alag na krde... n maan chup ku h. waiting for nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mahan geet and poor maan and his family... fortunate sunny and geet and unfortunate devika and nandini... after listening to geet now maan can peacefully be with his family and lead a happy life... if dadima wants sunny he can get him from geet and make his family happy... for maan his family and their happiness is important and coming to geet she can never say no to maan...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome parts...

Maan is now emotionless.. but when he sees geet & sunny.. he is not getting control on himself.. geet explained him & wanted to remove maan's guilt

waiting for next update
Edited by nehakapoor7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update. The way Geet was narrating everything to Maan I just loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update...geet n her side of story is so sad... Wht wl b maan s reaction ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Currant episode is full of Geet's neration about Sunny, from birth till today, how he born,how was he during pregnancy calm and compose, how naughty he become after birth,how he will ask questions for everything?how he is mature than his age children, how happy she is that she got his ansh with her and she dont want any body now ,how she was angry on him and how she has compromise with her life, how he is no more effecting her, and example of her friend meera (though it is not very prominant for her situation as that is diffrant case and this is diffrant as maan has commited to some one had physical relationship her, and never think that if they meet physicaly she might get pregnant to, no matter what family say once you are commited to some one in all respect one cant back away from that so i think maan is cowerd here, if he has not establish physical relationship then he had chance but not after that.
secondly u wrote they seperated with mutual understanding but as per my reading geet pleaded him to talk to daddi, even she said she can talk to daddi but maan refused her and just turn of his face from her without having glance is she reach alright oor not? so how come it was mutual seperation? again geet was knowing she was pregnant she should have told maan as he was bound to know the truth as he was also father of child, if they love truly she should have told him, ok fine she didnt said and in anger go away but after coming to india also she didnt make effort to contact maan and tell him reality, but she didnt, she only told him when they encounterd to each other and I am sure she might be sarcastic with him who knows?she might be trying to say him look you left me but i got biggest suport and happinsess of my life, she intent to say how much he missed his own childs birth till today moment.
every coin has two sides so if we reader can take this conversation otherway round too..cant we?
by the way i love this narration by geet and each and every sentance had its weight and was quite heart wrenching, she was pouring her pain very clever way and was trying to show him how happy and tough she is, may be she is still feeling lonely without him who knows?
and I have feeling maan has not establisg physical relation with nandini so there are chances she might back of from this relation, lets see what is happening.
And i dont think dadi will now give up on heir of khurana, he will try to get him by hook or crook ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi indu
amazing update ..the way geet ease with situation ..hatts off ..this gave a new dimension to understand ..the way u describe i now fear maneet will never be one again ..
one more story to see maneet seprated ..oh ho ..
but i like geet explaining the things ..difficult to handle ..
thank u for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! superb updates dear...loved them
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Posted: 10 years ago





Hello friends... thank you for the lovely comments and likes too...



@ idunno... thank you for the comment... or I should say lengthy analysis... I just wanted to tell you... Geet is not showing anything to Maan... she is just happy... she shared happiness with him... she in no way is taunting him... if she had any of those intentions... she would have never left India... she would have been in front of his eyes to show him how happy she is... She didn't call or tell anything to him as she doesn't want to be disturbance in his life... when she saw him... she couldn't stop herself from telling about sunny... his son... Hope this satisfies you...



Part #7



That day... I named Sunny... until then he was just Sunny... I actually named him that day... AMAN... means peace... he actually bought peace in my life... but I understood it late... and see it even matches with your name... actually it's a jumbled word of MAAN... I felt he is connect to you in some way...


I am happy Maan... and I want you to be happy... happiness is not found anywhere Maan... it's inside you... you have to find it yourself... I know you are in guilt... but see the bright side Maan... I have a reason to live now... our son... and you gave a new life to me... I would always be thankful for that... plz let it go Maan... I will be more happy knowing that somewhere you are also happy...


and when Sunny can understand things and relations... I will tell him about US... I hope it is Okay with you... she asked his permission...


Maan didn't know what to say... he should have known, if Nandini is pregnant... Geet could also be pregnant... as they crossed very border before marriage... if Dev is wrong then he is also wrong... he cannot blame anyone... he himself is at fault...


Maan with a heavy voice asked her... When did it happen...


Geet sighed... after you came back from London ... after Dev's death... you were so lost and that day you were ... she stopped and he understood... and I don't know how I forgot... I was always cautious... as we both were mad... she smile remembering their eagerness to be one...


Maan calculated and said the month... Geet nodded and told him the date...


They both sat quietly... Rajveer and Sunny came there... Sunny ran to his mother and sat in her lap... he said in his typical American accent... mom lets move... I am hungry... Maan saw him again... his son... just the thought brought smile on his lips... and seeing Maan... Sunny asked... who is he...


Geet - Sunny... say hello... he is my very best and special friend... we were in same collage... he was my senior... Geet looked at Maan saying sorry... but he understood...


Maan said hello... even Sunny greeted him...


Sunny again said... mom I am hungry... I want a pizza...


Maan - ok... I will get you a pizza...will you allow me


Sunny - no... I won't take it from you... I don't know you... you are a stranger


Maan cried hearing those words... his son... calling him ( Maan ) his ( Sunny ) father a stranger...


Geet - no.. Sunny... he is not a stranger... I just told you... right...


Maan - okk... Sunny... how about knowing each other... and he extended his hand... I am Maan... and I want to be your friend... will you give me your friendship... Maan asked...


Sunny looked at him .. the looked at Geet ... she nodded smiling... and Sunny...extended his hand and gave a handshake... hi I am Aman... you can call me Sunny... like mom and nanu... my friends and family call me Sunny...


Maan - so let's seal our friend ship with a hug and treat... what do you say sunny...


Sunny nodded and Maan took him in his hands and hugged him tightly smiling with tears... My Son... he whispered to geet... and geet nodded... Rajveer came to geet's side and hugged her.. geet turned to his side to hide her tears.. she didn't want to feel more guilty seeing her like this...


Maan smiled - now we are friends... shall we go for pizza... we will celebrate our friendship...


Sunny smiled brightly and said... let's go... .its been so many days I had my fav pizza... mum a always feeds me parathas here... Maan smiled and said... if that's the case... today sunny will have his favourite pizza... and they all went to have pizza...


This is witnessed by Naina and Savitri Devi... Naina is having tears seeing her son smiling ... it's been ages he smiled... and Savitri Devi is in deep thoughts... they both left from there to their house...


After having pizza... Geet took Sunny to clean up and Rajveer and Maan are left behind...


Maan - I can understand Geet's anger... but atleast you should have called me papa...


Rajveer sighed and said... after knowing about her pregnancy... I came... to your house Maan... but it was very late by then...


Maan- you came... Maan was shocked... coz he didn't knew...


Rajveer - I came there as soon as we came to know...what do you think i will leave a chance to unite you two... i know how much you loved each other... ... when I came... you were married by few hours... so I have no right to spoil you family's happiness... so I returned without meeting you...I didn't even tell Geet about this...


Maan closed his eyes... within few hrs.. his life changed... if only dadi had listened to him.. if only his family wouldn't have pressurized him... if he could have convinced them... then their lives would have been much better...he sighed...


Geet and Sunny returned and Sunny was sleepy by then... Geet is carrying him... Rajveer got up and took Sunny ... he looked at Geet and said... I will wait outside... Geet nodded... I will be there in few minutes dad... she replied...


after Rajveer left... Geet took a paper and wrote her address .. phone no... and other details... she handed it to Maan and said... Maan.. when ever you feel like seeing Sunny... you can come... I will be happy if Sunny would know his father...


Maan nodded and suddenly they felt heavy ... they both didn't want to part... but they have to... they slowly started to move and reached the parking lot... Geet stopped and looked at Maan... Maan also looked at Geet... Geet turned and hugged him... Maan's hands automatically went around her... both felt at peace... they knew they belnged to each other... but ... Geet left him and said... bye Maan... and I will love you always... she at once turned and left from there... she didn't turn...but he can see tears would be running down from her eyes...



Maan looked as Geet went to her car, got in and left... he felt heavy... Geet didn't even stop to hear his reply... he silently said... I too love you Geet ...



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Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update...
loved it...
maan trying to bond with sunny...
wonder what is going in dadi's mind...

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