MG SS : LONGING FOR LOVE. UPDATES ARE ON IF ON THIS THREAD|| JUNE 17 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Nice prologue
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Congrats on new story..
Nice prologue... Pls cont. Soon.
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Congrats for new story
Nice prologue
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wow another yummy fav of my maaneet from u dear
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very interesting track dear..wow lovely pro and cs..i love it
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dear for new start...🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting
cs is also interesting
waiting for it
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PART 1


Part 1

Please help me.. Help me.. She cried and threw her hands in the utmost pain that was screeching his heart.. Their was a vulnerability in her voice and he didn't let her harm herself this time.. She was so hurt already and in the futile attempt of saving herself she pushed him and her hands which were bleeding touched his white shirt making it red.. He didn't let her say anything and in a swift moment he held her in his embrace caging her weak self in his arms and next moment she was in his arms.. And he held hwr close to himslef letting her feel that no one can hurt her ..

M here.. M here.. M here for you baby.. Shh.. He softly pecjed her forehead and her non stop tears killed him.. She was crying and that cries were killing him apart..
Her white sleeves were now bloody and there was dirt on her clothes he wondered how come she was so messy.. He carefully took her to the washroom and made her sit on the slab.. she was still crying and saying something that was not understandle.. He was just nodding and he slowly peeled off her clothes.. Leaving her bare.. Her wrist were again hurt and he gave her a glare.. And she immediately hug him trying to absorb his closeness..
U will never leave me na .. She asked slowly still no regrets no sense in what position she was with him.. There was nothing on her and he slowly showered her with the luke warm water.. Her wrist were cut and he knew that its her who do all this.. Still there was nothing that he could say or do..
Geet you did this.. He asked her with a angry face.. She was facing sideways.. And next second she splashed the cold water on him.. And giggled.. She was lost he could see her .. Her moves were again same.. She made a face when he didnt respond and this time she pulled him in the bath tub making him drench
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U never let me do this.. She pouted and he didnt gave her any second chance to say anything..
He knew that she is living a phase where he is not the one for her..
You will catch cold.. Come now.. He just like a child wiped her and made her wear a loose top and skirt.. That's what she like... Next moment she was on the king size bed and he patted her to sleep..
Sleep princess. He whispered and was rewarded with a sweet smile that filled his life with the happiness..

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my request those who r reading
take this just as a fiction
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept... why geet is behaving like that... she is injured and maan is trying to soothe her... are geet and maan married...
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beautifull yaar but why u stopped that maariied again,.. please continue na,..

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