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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting and Intriguing Prologue

Maan and Geet live together because they doing a project together right but seems they are also bound by each other in some way
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats 4 new story nice start but way geet is behaving like this waiting 4 more parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start dear... itS intriguing with jus details that maan lives with geet and she is behaving awkwardly. She hallucinates in sleep, hurts herself, behaves like a kid, doesnt care abt her. All suspense with may be mysterious past. Is she not in her minds now? Who is maan to her?
Its awesome start dear. Would love to read more.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for the new story!!!!!
its very interesting...geet is lost in her own world and maan trying to smooth her..
waiting!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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~LONGING FOR LOVE~

PART 2



It was almost mid night when she turned and saw that he was not there for her.. She was so used to have him all for herself.. She looked at the room it was filled with darkness making her panic.. She was scared of dark and he knew this very well thats why he never leave her in pitch dark but looks like he forget that today.. She somehow gathered herself and went to search him.. Her tummy grumbled making her pout and she look at her tummy and anger seeped inside her on knowing that she had been sleeping for so long.. Her wrists were paining and he hadnt bandaged this time he was in a panic seeing her torturing herself..
She was coming downstairs.. They lived in a beautiful cottage that was just re designed the day he met her.. His princess.. That's what he calls her.. She was a damsel but he was no devil.. He was scared when she dashed in his life making him panic.. One day was that and now one day is this.. He was living with her in her fantasy , her nightmares and her dreams and knowingly and unknowingly he was a part of her life..
He know her life geet , the girl who dashed in his life and changed everything in a blink of the eye and he couldn't do anything..
It was chilling cold that day making everything freeze and he was sitting in the hall of the cottage , looking at the blue prints that needed his attention.. One side she was sleeping and he was so engrossed that he didnt saw that she was there standing infront of him.. She was young but not that much that she couldn't see what he needs.. He was the love of her life.. She could do anything for him.. And he is blessed to have her in his life..
Still there was a longing..
Geet was standing with her hands on her waist , she forget her pains when she saw him. But one thing she couldn't stand was him ignoring her..
Geet looked at him he was engrossed with some files and blueprints but didn't look at her.. He was a business man and he was giving her a lot than what she could expect but the illusion was still there.. She saw his tired eyes and her heart went for him.. She knew that he wouldn't have probably eaten anything ..
How can he when she hadn't anything..
Geet pouted and complaint to her babaji..
Geet : babaji not fair ... Aap jante hain wo kitna kaam karte hain. Phir he ignores me and his health and you made me sleep..not fair.. Her eyes went towards the kitchen it was a fully modular kitchen and she went slowly without disturbing him.. And looked at something , there were vegetables and she didn't noticed her own pain but she slowly prepared the vegetable rice and took with her.. Though she was searching was searching for pickles but couldn't find..
Geet : babaji mango pickle nai h.. She looked above and complaint.. This was something she knew to cook and very efficiently she placed the food in a tray and took some curd with her..
Geet's wrist were again red and it was paining her but she didn't yelped but took the food to the room and served for him first.. Seeing him engrossed she knew that she has to do that..
She spooned the rice and forwarded towards his mouth and asked him to have.. This was the first time he saw her doing something for him.. His heart was at the unknown joy but something pricked his heart.. And those were the blood drops that feel on his lap.. He immediately took the spoon from her handsand made her sit comfortably in his panic he had forgotten to dress her wounds.
.. He had been in the stress lately .. She was a broken and he was feeling like he was taking the undue advantage of her condition..
Maan : ye kya geet.. Who told you to do all this.. Dammit you are bleeding he tied the hanky that he was having and immediately rushed to get the first aid box.
Maan cleaned the blood and softly put the ointment..
She yelped as it burned her..
Geet : its burning , tears fell from her eyes.. And she cried but he was much more concerned for her condition .. Mujhe lag raha hai.. She cried this time her sobbing was piercing his heart..
Maan : shh its done baby..
He wiped her tears and kissed her forehead.. She immediately went in his arms.. And her arms wrapped around him... Her tummy growled and she looked at maan..
Maan smiled and asked her..
Maan : you were hungry.. Mujhe kyun nahi bola..
Geet : aap busy the.. So I prepared the dinner.. Maan smiled at her concern.. He first feed her and listen to her complaints..
Geet : pickle nai hai.. I searched in the cabinet mujhe nahi mila.. She frowned and he shoved the rice in her mouth..
Maan : we will go for shopping tomorrow..
Geet nodded happily..
Maan : now have it like a good girl.. She smiled and feed him lovingly he didn't protested , he knew that she was not fine..

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Thank you those who commented..

One thing I want to ask.. One reader said that it is like sajda
I am thinking from whole day what is sajda
Can you please tell me..
Regarding Arjun believe me he is an essential part and he will come in future updates..
I will update all ffs.. fd
Suhana
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Welcome back yaar... Read part 1&2...geet so disturbed n hurt her self n maan holding so much of pain seeing her I the condition... What happens happen to cause to end up in this condition. So cute that geet ignore her own pain n cook dinner fr maan.. Amazing start.. Pls cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
nice update... maan is taking care of geet and geet wants the complete attention of maan for herself... she saw maan busy and she prepared dinner irrespective of her wrists injured... who is geet to maan in what way they are related to each other...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update geet is very cute n very much depended on maan he cant see her in pain but geet forgot her pain n made food for him nice part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Fabulous Update

Why is Geet's wrist bleeding I mean what exactly happened to her
Maan forgot to dress her wrist in his panic but why panic what is actually wrong with Geet .
Geet manages to cook and when feeding Maan he realizes that blood drops are falling on his lap .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice part..so cute geet forget her own pain and cooking for maan..maan also concerned for her..waiting for next part

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