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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update geet was leaving for us for further studies everyone was shocked but eventually agreed for her future they requested for her to stay in touch they wanted t help and were shameful with maans cat made geet a little soft though she denied any monetry help from them but agreed to stay in contact with them she requested that they think wisely from devs side and listen to him indirrectly she helped dev and meera dev was thankfl to her diamaa saw someone she recognsed but couldnt remember where she saw him the stranger used to live in same lane as daimaa they were neighbours something might stir it seems
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update..Khuranas were remorseful about their son's deed and asked Geet to keep in touch which she reluctantly agreed.. Geet and Daaima left for US. They met Daaima's neighbour Kabir in the plane..Loved it..Waiting for next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part...

Khuranas r very much guilty on behalf of his son Maan singh Khurana...

Khuranas let her daughter in law to acheive their dream...

They also said that Geet has ful rights as Elder Daughter in law...

Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
geet visIt khurana's and told about her going
US fr hr studies they can't stop her they only requested
hr to keep contact with them bcoz they consider hr as
elder bahu and that can't change they offer hr money
too as she is member of their family she has rights too
geet didn't told she is going canada
at flight they met kabir
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 updating! lovely update! Geet leaving 2 Canada with Daimaa! she lies 2 Khuranas they she is gng 2 USA! they r sad she is leaving! Geet refuses n monetary help! bt agrees 2 keep in touch! they leave! Daimaa meets her old friend Kabir! Geet is unwell! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
khuranas r nice ppl..par ye maan aisa kyu ho gaya!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update!!!Khurana's are so good...they accepted their faults...Geet and Daima visit Khurana's and told about their leaving US...they requested her to keep contact with them...Geet and Daima met Kabir at flight...Loved it so much...waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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The Myth


The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 11



Part - 12

This small intro nd their smiles confirmed Geet that Daima nd this Man Kabir Siddu knew well each other , both belonged to same place nd there was no need to fear for Daimaa ,, she thought to give them space to talk as both met after ages ,, Mr Kabir was standing there nd wanted to talk Daimaa more , so Geet politely excused.

Geet: it's good to know u both knew well each other ,, uncle plzz sit here to talk ,, I'll go to ur seat .

Daima looked at Geet hesitantly : why beta , u r not feeling good , don't sit there alone.

Kabir worried : what happen to u beta ?

Daimaa: sickness ,, this is her 1st air travel so fearing nd puking .

Kabir: oh ,, take few candies from attendant beta ,nd my seat is close near to WR , it'll be easy for u to go ,, let her go Farida u cn check her in interval , or we cn ask d passenger to exchange d seat for u after some time .

Geet: that'll be good Daijaan .

Daima agreed , Geet settled in Kabir's seat after puking one more time ,, now Daimaa nd Kabir sitting together nd Kabir started his Q bank ,,Daima slowly replying him ,, knowing d ups nd down of her life nd how she left her husband's home , then struggle to survive nd end up with Handas nd lived there till now nd became d Daima of this girl Geet ,,(she didn't share Geet's past) make him very sad ,, his eyes turned wet nd in flow of emotions he held her hands nd pressed them .

Kabir: how much u suffered all alone ,, shame on those ppl nd so called family who discarded u like a useless thing ,, r u happy now in ur life?

Daimaa: yes ,, this sweet girl filled my all void nd give all d happiness ,, she is my world now .

Kabir: why u r going Canada nd where?

Daimaa: Geet is going to do her MBA from Vancouver .

Kabir: that gr8 ,, I m also there nd u don't have to worry for anything i'll look after u both there .

Daima smiled : thanks , but we'll manage.

Kabir: nope ,, no arguments ,, u don't know how much I m happy to see u ,, I didn't believe that I m seeing u .

Daimaa: I have a request to u ,, plzz don't tell about me to any one in ur family in Jammu ,, plzz .

Kabir : I promise ,, anything ? ,, after knowing that what they did to u I m also advise u to forget those selfish ppl nd live ur life happily like u want .

Kabir went to check Geet once nd came back again ,, both talked nd Daimaa asked about his family nd then he shared his past .

Kabir : I m also like u alone in Canada ,, I came here for my MDS nd settled here , all d siblings wr settled happily in their families nd I m here .

Daima: why r u alone ?

Kabir : didn't get that person who cn give me real happiness of life nd contentment.

Daimaa: means ? ess kya chahaty thy?

Kabir :nothing big ,, kabi ek sapna dekha tha aur toot gaya ,, koshish ki fir se aage badhne ki lekin lekin fail hi raha ,, sab durr ho gaye ,, aur mai akela , shayad yahi meri kismet mei tha ,, kahaty hei na .. Har kisis ko mukammal jahan nahi milta .

Daimaa sighed with a faint smile nd nodded in a yes : but u r very educated nd belonged to a good family then why this dismay ,, u cn get a good match any time ,, Mardon ke liye har rasty khule hein , wo kabhi bhi kuch bhi ker sakty hein ? Bandishen to hum aurton ke liye hein .

Kabir: not only man but d woman cn do anything Farida ,, it's depends on thinking nd courage .

Daimaa: but destiny walk one step ahead ,, we get only what we have in our fate .

Kabir: nd we don't know when nd where our destiny shower its blessings ,, she how I got u here ? After ur marriage I never thought that i'll be able to see u again ,but see we meet here nd even going to live in same place again .

Their talks r going nonstop ,,Geet felt very tired so slept ,, Daima checked her nd went back without disturbing her ,, a sleep was good for her .

In Canada lost in d new found liberty Maan nd Sam wr enjoying their every moments without any fear ,, though in first few days Maan kept a distance from Sam ,, he was in guilt nd regretting to cross his limits on his 1st nyt , where Sam was going crazy in new found freedom for both ,, she was on cloud nine ,, Maan was with her nd fulfilling her every demand ,, when d first day they entered in their hotel room both wr thrilled ,, Sam hugged him tightly .

Sam: oh Maan I m so much happy , finally we r together ,,thanku so much for doing this for us .. I love u .

Maan: I love u too Sam , nd thanks to u too , u trust me nd came with me .

Sam: it was not possible for me if u didn't support me ,, maa-baba wr not able to afford my MBA's fees nd expenditure ,, it was u ,, I lied that college is giving me scholarship nd i'll work part time to manage further expenditures .

Maan: now u r happy na .

Sam: very much .

She hugged him tightly nd kissed his cheeks ,, Maan too pressed her to him kissed back ,, d thinking of living in relation , privacy nd closeness was provoking them nd both wr ready to lose ,, lost in passion Sam started opening his shirt buttons kissed on chest ,, d reality hit him nd flashes of his togetherness with Geetika started tormenting him ,, he felt guilty , composed nd parted Sam with a fake smile .

Maan: sleep Sam ,, we have jet leg , nd I want to take a bath .

Sam felt disappointed nd rejected but gave a faint smile nodding in yes ,, Maan opened his bag nd went to take bath , but again at sleeping time they had to share d bed ,, he cdn't even say live sep on sofa ,, it cd hurt Sam ,, controlling his feelings he settled on d otherside of bed ,, Sam gave a smile nd snuggled close to him ,, circling her arms in his waist she place her head on his chest ... Again .. d flashes hit his mind ,, it was clear that sam wanted closeness nd he was holding back ,, night passed with difficult ,,he tried hard to get some sleep ,, day went well in roaming to know d area nd lil shopping , but d nyt was again a torture for Maan ,, those flashes we not leaving him nd he was maintaining d distance with Sam ,, week passed like this ,they shifted in their new house ,, Sam was very excited , at last they started living in same home .. their home , but when Maan's behaviour was disturbing her ,, he was trying to keep d distance from her , a doubt nd insecurity started eating her ,, He was married now , though he did that marriage bcoz of he was a manglic boy nd even her parents denied for her nd warned her not to marry him bcoz of that dosha ,, but now d situation was diff ,, he married to same yog girl nd leave her nd both wr together without marriage so no fear of kundli doshas ,, but why he was stopping him when they both planned for this live in relationship ?

This distance started annoying her nd increasing insecurity,, one nyt when she was high in his closeness nd felt that he was also high but stopping him nd tried to part her , it irritated her nd she pour out her anger on him .

Sam: u r changing Maan ,, u r changing ,, u don't love me now ,, after ur marriage u have changed .

Maam: Sam ,, what r u saying ,, it's not like that , I love u .

Sam : no u r lying , I m seeing ,, u r rejecting me , hurting my feelings ,, it's so insulting for me .

Maan: no Sam , how cn I hurt u , I did everything for u nd came here only for us ,, why'll I reject u ?

Sam: then why r u distancing ,, why r u stopping u to come close to me ,, why r u rejecting my love for u ?

Maan sighed , comb back his hair feeling miserable what he wd say to Sam ? how he said that he lost his control in drunken stage nd met that girl with whom she insisted him not to met bcoz he belong to her ,, he was her nd he too didn't want that ,, his silence was hurting her more nd she started shedding tears accusing him that he had changed after his marriage .

Maan: it's not like that Sam ,, trust me ,,why r u thinking this ? I m here with u as we decided , is this nothing for u ?

Sam: no , u r with me but ur mind nd heart is not with me ,, u wr not like this ,, u don't love me now .

Maan: Sam ,, trust me , I love u , why r u saying this ?

Sam: then why r u stopping u ? why r u rejecting me ,, why r u not loving me like before Maan?

Maan was tongue tight ,, if he said d truth she felt more hurt that I had shared myself with other girl ,, I m already in guilt for my mistake nd here she was feeling rejected .

Sam shook him holding his vest strips : tell me clearly Maan what is in ur heart , why this distance ? I found u lost nd tensed when I came close to u ,, r u not happy with me living like this ?

Maan: Sam it's not like that ,, I m happy , I did everything to live together .

Sam: then why this distance ?

Now Maan thought to disclose d truth ,, he cdn't hold that pain more nd hurt her bcoz of his guilt ,, let her know .

Maan: Sam , I m regretting for my mistake ,, my mistake was huting me nd it cn hurt u too .

Sam sniffed : mistake ,, regretting for what ?

Maan : sam I m sorry ,, u warned me , I promised u , but I lost my senses in my drunken staze ,, I ,, I touched that girl with whom I married ( Sam gasped ),, i don't want to but I thought to tell her clearly about u nd me ,, I went to tell her that I cn't accept her bcoz I love u , nd then I didn't know what had happened ? when I woke up I find me with her ,, I m sorry Sam ,, I didn't think to do that nd now my that mistake was eating me .

Sam : how cn u share u with some one else when u decided to live with me ? u wr mine Maan , I told u ,, u wr mine ,, why did u do u this ? NO .. No ...

She became insane nd started beating his chest ,, tore his vest in anger ranting that u wr mine , why did u touch her ?

Maan: sam ,, I m sorry ,, i was drunk,, trust me, i love u .

But she was behaving like a psycho in anger ,, she dragged him in washroom nd opened d shower on Maan , started rubbing his body with her hands saying u r mine , only mine ,, I cn't tolerate anyone's touch on u ,, u r mine Maan .

Maan was drenching nd feeling guilty ,, he hugged her tightly to calm her .. I m yours sam , I m yours ,, I love u ,, trust me I love u .

Sam : u r mine ,, u cn only love me ,, u r mine nd won't share u with someone .

She was hurt nd to control her he hugged her ,, both wr drenching under shower ,, to pacify her he was kissing her ,, that nyt to assure her , to make her believe nd to prove that he only love her he met with her , though it was not their 1st time , they had met physically few times in India too ,, both wanted to marry nd then planned to go in live in relation opened their minds nd they started having S** when they got chances ,, to keep her safe nd avoid preg she took emergency p*** , nd Maan knew that ,, they clearly talk on that matter bcoz they cdn't put them in any trouble ,, they had to come here for edu nd need to stay a long for study so planning nd protection was needed ,, after that nyt all barrier fell nd they wr living freely nd started enjoying their relation ,, some time he used protection nd sometime she took emergency p**** ,, now after more than a month both wr very comfortable this was what they planned , a happy life for them .

In KM nd KC too Yash was using his smart tricks ,, he ordered to all not to contact Maan from their side ,, let him talk directly ,, if they did they had to face his anger ,, Yash knew that with that balance money Maan cd survive only few months nd then he needed money ,, Yash was eagerly waiting for that day .


Peeping ... searching ...


Part - 13

sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update. geet & daima met khuranas & told them their decision . they felt sad but they know their son is wrong here so they supported geet's decision & told her to keep in touch . geet & daima went to canada & on the way daima met kabir who is from her past .
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