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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART-1

geet just walking from the road. the school today leaved late like 9.30p.m. she just walking fastr and faster. but the man was following her. he even look into her back. he just drinking her beauty with his eyes.

but today he determined that he will marked her as his bcoz he couldnt wait no longer. as geet walking she was not even thinking some denger was behind her. by the time coming she arrived at corner where light could not see comlete and people were also not to be seen.

by the time that mystrious cornered her forcefully and smacked his lips on her. but after sattisfying his thrust he only told" from today onwards you are only mine and mark my words that if i ever seen you with the boy then he dead and your perents also. you are only my possoinon. only mine." he just told and grabbed her hand and shoved her into car. and with taking her he zoomed out towards his house.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part2
past
it has been started from past 3 monthes when maan 1st time saw his angel in dance class. maan's sister was studying same in geet's school and join also same dance class. well, maan came at the time to pick up his sister and at that time he saw geet performing on song "tu hi re".
he stood memorised and made vowed to amke her his at any cost. he mumered "you are only mine, only mine ehoever you are" . geet was unawer that her friend brother admiring her from long time. she just practcing a song forgetting all world and singing a song. but at same time her partner aditya came to her to parctice last part of song where pair unite and dance on the song. but seeing this maan clenched his fist and staring angrily on boys hand where iit touched geets parts.
maan coundnt control at that time dance ended and sweat started treiling down from geets forhead sightly going to nose then lips. she just darnk that drop and wash her face with towel. but seeing this maan's lips became dry. he so wanted to kiss that sweat drop and drink by him and cleaned her face with his tounge.
maan's trance get disturbed when his mobile started ringing and geet concentrated where mobile phone ringing but cound't find it as maan hide behind the wall when he saw geet stated searching mobile ring.
anewesha w8ng for his bhai long time so she rang her bhai and told toc ome to pick- up early. maan gone from their but not before to call shekhar and told that tokeep watch on geet and get information abut her. he also arranged bodygurads to geet.
geet get ready aftere completing her class. she come out of class and hore rickshaw to go home. but behind hermaans bodugurd following her unknowingly started stalking her...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
part 3
past

maan went his home with her anny and geet reached home ny half an hour. maan's bodyguard following geet's rickshaw . when they saw that she reached her home safely they called maan.
bodyguard:"sir, mam reached home safely. we are behind her rickshaw and now guarding around her house."
maan:" hmmm... make sure that she couldn't find you."
bodygurds:" yes, sir. we will make sure. Mam ko kuch pata nahi chalega."
maan:" hmm... okay"
bd:"bye sir."
bodyguard cut the call. and they started their duty. but at geet's home situation was little different. geet's dad and bhai waiting for her. they restrictedher coing hours to home.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 4

warning: some voilance their. read at on ur own risk. don't bash me plz
past
geet just reached home and her prents waiing for her. brij was very angry on geet as she came late and papaji was scaring the anger of brij. when geet just opened the door of house and she took her first leg to come in home at the same time fuming brij shouted" stop their. dont come in house"
geet stated shivering and scared. brij come in front of her and held her hand. geet getting hystatic. he stated drag geet in middle of hall and stand sacred geet. brij roared in anger"geet, aaj tu apni maan marayda bhul rahi hai. tuze to abb sabak sikhana pdega. aaj tuze khana nahi milege aur ha ghar ka sara kaam tu karegi."
geet" bhai, plzz. muze aakhir baar maaf kar dijiye, mai aage se kabhi asia nahi karungi"
but bij had no mecrecy on her.
brij" tune muze ulta jawb diya, rukh tuze abhi batata hoon." he just said her and held her hand again tightly. there was some hot coal which just used for cooking purpose. brij take geet to thier and held her hand on burning coal. geet just cried feeling pain but can't even voice out due to the fear of brij. almolst like 5 min brij took her with him and drag her again from staircase.
geet"maa, papa... aahhh... bhai chod dijiye plzz. mai aage se asia nahi karungi."
but brij not shown any mecrecry on her an d maa and papaji helpless infront of brij.
brij locked in geet in storeroom but before that he just closed geet mouth and hands with clothes. he tightly closed geet's mouth so that she can't screamed and gae siglthly idea to neighbours what was happening in handa's house.
after locking geet in storeroom brij told her" aaj tuze khana nahi milege aur ha kal se tu school nahi jayegi."
he jusst told her that and gone from their.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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art 5
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geet just cried and cried after brij was gone from their. geet's maa and papaji was helpless infront of brij. but brij was not satisfied after waht he dont with our geetu. after thinking something he went to out of house.but all this drama was seeing someone from in laptop.
he cann't saw his geet in pain and being toture by her brother.
when brij went out of his house maan's bodyguard saw it and called to maan.
bodyguard:"boss, hmmm abhi abhi brij ghar se bhar nikla hua hai."
maan:"okay. make sure you were protect geet."
maan had order odyguards that when brij will go out of house they will onform him. maan has used some chip when geet changing her clothes from which he can be used to see all what ever happening in geet's house( friends this my imagination so don't try to find out whrere there can be any clip😉😆)
at the same time maan called geet's house. geet's papaji recevied the call.
papaji" hello"
maan" hello, geet ko jaldi se bhar nilakle aur se khana de kar doc ke pass le jayiye nahi to acha nahi hoga."
papaji"aap kaun? aur aap kya bol rahe hai?"
maan" aap ka subhchitak. jitna bol raha hui utna hi karyi"
he cut the call and fusliriously seeing screen where geet was sobbing and tied tightly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
waring: abuusivy language stay out of it and plzz don't bash me
past


geet parents where horrified after geting phone call but coundn't have courage to relase geet form that room. after sometime brij came from completing his work. when he came geet's papaji told brij about phone call ewhich received from unknown number. after hereing this brij got very angery and went towards store room whrere he kept geet.

he opened door and scremed"geettt"
"how dare u threned us by saying someone to release us? aur kahi asia to nahi tera koi boyfriend hai?" he gripped geet's hair hard by saying this and dragged her out of the rrom. due to immense pain she was crying and tried to say something but her mouth tied with cloth and when geet draged by brij he took her to some sabby plzce where noone also perents also don't about plzce.


he then untied geet hands and mouth. and said bol" kaun hai wo?"
after fithing this oppurinty geet tried to run out of the room but brij catched her before even took the step and said" u will pay heavily now"

he took geet and forcefully make her sit to chair where croches are running and dark was their. he took very big rope from cupboard with that he tiedher hands very thightly. he used celltep to tied mouth of geet and then it also tied with rope. then he tied legs ti chair like keeping some distance to some side and locked room and gone out where noone even idea that someone has brutly tied .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 8-

warning: 16+ content ahead. plz don't bash me.

it's had been two days still maan didn't find his mishty. he hell worried after not finding her. he also called the guads but they also have no clue of where being of geet.

here in handa house brij just coundn't totalarete that her sister had someone in her life. he then also went to store room where he locked geet. the condition of gee worn out. she didn't had any ffo d and watr since 2 days.

the prents of geet backbone. they idn't care about geet as she unwanted trash of family. they also didn't qustioned action of brij.

brij came in geet's room but still didn't stasified the punishment he given to geet. he opened the door of storeroom and came to the storeroom. he united geet but the mouth tied and hand was tied behied her back. with that position he draged the geet in the house.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
part 9-
maan was madly searching for geet. last two days was killer for him. he ddn't eat and sleep whole two days. the thought geet missing killing him from within.

the tape from geet's home showing error. after lots of searching he concluded that someone from family was culpid behind the geet missing.

it's had then he received called from shekhar " boss, i just get news."
maan" hmm..."
sh" boss, the name of culprit is..."
maan"what??"

maan anger was rising from second to second. he could not beleive that geet's own brother could do something to her.

he made some calls and arrnge the trap liked where brij could get easily ffoled.

sorry for short update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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art 10

warning: 16+ people read it. don't bash me plz.

past

maan lead brij's trap very kintly. brij was dragging geet ruthlessly to hall from storeroom. just end of the corridoor brij's mobile strted ringing and unknown caller calling him. brij received the call.

brij "hello"
caller "heelo, is brij handa speaking?"
brij"yeah, hum brij handa bol rahe hai"
caller" ji aapke liye ek important kaam hai. jara ****** idhare aagye to aapko 1 crore rupees milenge"
brij" aapki kya gurteen hi woaap hume denge?"
caller" aap aa jayige aako paise milenge aur kaam bhi pata chal jayega."
brij "thikmai aata hui"

after brij just like drag geet to corrodoor returend it to storeroom and again locked geet.
brij"geet, yaad rakh tere muh maise aawaj nahi aani chaye aur yaad rakh tera bhai tuche chata hai"
geet lintly crying but nooded her head to "yes" and brij locked the door and went from thier to other caller place.

brij arrived to ***** place where caller metioned on the phone and stand thier for waiting to come some clue and caler to come.
but again caller called to brij " hello, tumhe udhar ek red flag dikh raha hai udhar jakar kadhe rahana" and aging cutted the call. brij went and stand near the red flag.

but someone clicked the buttoned from computer and thudd.
brij was digeed in hole and tied and hang like upper legs and hands down.

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