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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 11-
warning 16+: some mature content ahead and plz don't bash me.

past

brij was hanged up and down on a rod. he just got big shocked. for two minutens his scenes became numb. he couldn't understand anything. after like that shocked got over he started shouting " bachao, bachao"

maan was very happy after the his plan became successsful. he was seeing all the moves of brij from the cctv. his right hand shekhar was on the sight and updating about progress of plan to maan. after brij kindaping maan told shekhar that to take brij a sunny place and beat him by salt's water rod.

as per orders brij was caught up and sarted beaten up by saulty water's rod. maan specifically mentiones about beet him on hands and very painfully bacause that filtch hands was abused his geet. after some like two hours brij's beaten was subside. again he was relased from ropes but maan's men dragged ruthlessly brij from hot soil which become hot due sunny's days.

brij was kept a godown where he tied to iron rods half naked and contiunsley torching by electric wires. the rage of maan was going to peek seeing brij's tourture. maan was just recollecting how brij tourtched geet in last two days.

maan made call to geet's home and..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
part 12-
warning 16+: some mature content ahead and plz don't bash me.

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maan made call to geet's home. Here in geet's home geet was alone and petrified of her parents. bcoz her bauji and maa solding her like anything. geet's bauji here landline ringing. they stopped scolding to geet and received the phone call.

geet's bapuji " hello, kaun bol raha hai?"
he here's cruel laugh of man. and got scared." kaun ... bol raha hai?" asked in shaking voice.
maan" ji koi nahi bus aapka subhchitank."
" maine aapko geet's ko marne se mana kiya tha na" "to aab aapke use parinam bhi bhotoke"

geet's bapuji got confused and asked" aapko kaise pata ke hum geet ko pit hai"
maan didn't tell anything and they haer's painful screamingof unknown person.

here in godown maan bitting the brij and after making call they gave him electrical shocks and anngonly he screamed " aahh... aah..."

geet's bapuji here screamed and got scared " ye kaunsi chilanke awaz hai?" and some sweat pearls came on his forehead. He stated shaking just like dry leaf and seeing this geet's maa got scaered.

Maan" Suna aapne Mr. Handa ye aapke bete ke chikne ki awaz hai"
"aabhi to bahot kuch baaki hai" and cut the call.

p.s. sorry for grammer and spelling mistake.
sorry for being so late and kept u hanging.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Parts 1 - 12

Fantastic Story and very Dramatic too

Geet's parents and her brother treats her like she is not human just how can they do this to her yet she only came home late and did not do anything wrong , I'm glad that Maan too decided to give Brij the same harsh treatment that he gives to his sister .
please do continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
LOVED IT
GEETS FAMILY IS MAD
N MAAN IS GOING GREAT HE SHLD MAKE THEM ALL PAY
WHY DO THEY HATE GEET

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice parts dear its love at 1st site 4 maan nd den he came 2 knw hw badly geet is treatd at hme nd punishd brij :-) wautng 4 d nxt part dear update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
amazing story maan attracted to geet in frist meeting her family is so cruel they didnt care they way brij tortured her maan did the right thing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Nice story ...
I don't care who hates Geet... till Maan is there to protect her...
Liked Maan's punishment for Geet's family...
That psycho Brij After torturing Geet so much he is not satisfied ...that he hurt her more and more...
Maan should torture him more..than Geet is tortured..
waiting for more updates...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
all 12 parts are nice
ohh raba asay bhi parents aur bahi hota hai

feeling bad for geet but why they are doing this with her

maan love the way he punished brij

waitiing for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Awsum
Loved all the parts
Brij deserves the punishment given by maan
Atleast her parents should have objected against bring
Waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
😃Wow... Nice start ... Brij should be hangout for doing this to her sister.. Hope maan save geet soon...

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