CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93

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Vinsh23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#691

part 20

niceee
fonally geet trance broke with rajji call..
mayank nupur k papa
... haaye.. cute..
dadima n the famous jewelry scene with ur flavr :))

maan finally confessed.. :)
n this tym no confusion.. :))

geet actually said no wit her reasoning.. hmmm

dadi the saviour..
geet missing maan n then finally love litmus test.. haha

loved it.. :)

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Vinsh23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#692

part 21

super long update.. yeahhh.
after all the comedy this part has the emotions n romance.. :)))

geet realization n getting to knw more abt maan ..

confusions ending n maan ka wait.. maan ka dard n realization of his mistakes..

maan back n teri deewani. :*

dadi ka plan superhit.. now complaints n confession frm geet.. woww..

bulldog z back with his smirks...

awww bf gf hain to ek hug to bnta hai.. cuteee everything sorted.. hope to see romance nxt :))

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Vinsh23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#693

part 22

lovely update finally the end of the story.. all the romance filled in the update.. pillow ki lv story ka kya hua haha.. loved it.. :*

thanx for such a beautiful hilarious story :))

waiting for the epilogue.. ^_^

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#694

Part-18

🤣 Poor maan, adi bhi iski lene me laga hua hai. geet thought maan is being caring towards adi but in actual woh toh adi ki watt lagane waala hai, bas yahi wajah hai maan abhi tk geet ke peeche hai & usse koi idea nhi ki maan loves her😆

geet ki nigahe kahin aur hai n maan ko lagta hai nishana woh hai🤣

"Is it automatic" she asks softly.🤣🤣

"Is it powerful?" I ask again.🤣

did maan really think she is talking about IT!

🤣 mouth to mouth woh bhi nakul se! maan ke achhe din chal rhe hai!

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#695

Part-19

🤣🤣 MAN! that guy was busy kissing her & all she thinks that he's doing the wrong procedure of CPR! Daadi & daarji see both of them, daadi was happy & singing song seeing them Whereas daarji ke toh hosh udd gye!

Acting as if I had looted his virginity, he says, "Ab main sab ko kaise mooh dikhauga Geet. Meri izzat!" this is what we say Ulta chor kotwal ko daante! maan too good🤣

poor geet, she is all confuse that maan is in love with her, wondering about pinky & her CPR procedure🤣

Oh meri Sharmili! Aaj toh bas loot hi lo mujhe! WO!!! The code word!🤣🤣 maan you have no idea what's going on in ur sharmili's mind!

rajji is right geet, you're still naive & juvenile otherwise who the hell will ignore the hot guy going mad after you while all you think about is CPR procedure was wrong!🤣🤣

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#696

Part-20

Finally maan got someone who can agree with him that guy is a hottie😆😆😆

Geet felt so awkward the way daadi was getting excited about her & maan's engagement.

Finally something serious, geet told him she didn't love him & marriage wasn't in her plans & it's necessary that they both should fall in love otherwise no one is gonna happy in this relation. There comes daadi & her perfect ideas to bring them together.

maan is away & now geet realizing his absence.

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#697

Part-21

geet missing maan & his antics so much on the other side maan is obeying to her wishes, such a darling & sincere lover he is

Finally the cloud from her minds are running away & she's getting to see the real picture, THAT MAAN REALLY LOVE HER thanx to the novel pride & prejudice🤣

Teri deewani sequence😳

ohh maan ke mann me again ladoo phooting😆 but his time he wants to be sure.

Chocolates and flowers, he thought. Jab laya tha toh credit Adi aur Daadi ko de di.🤣

& finally the bulldog met love of his life, maan ki life ka purpose khatam hua he can be at peace now since geet will be with him forever😳

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#698

Last Part

It was fab! geet & maan finally getting some time to spend with each-other before their marriage where maan was happy to be close to geet & getting to see so many shades of her, geet was flying in the air with maan's love😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#699

Originally posted by: impoojaverma
Last Part
It was fab! geet & maan finally getting some time to spend with each-other before their marriage where maan was happy to be close to geet & getting to see so many shades of her, geet was flying in the air with maan's love😳

Thanks for the comments Pooja😃

It reminded me of how much I enjoyed writing it😃

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#700

Ch 18

🤣🤣🤣

Newton's third law is in full motion I see. Every action has a equal and opposite reaction.

That which is inflated in Maan must invariably be deflated by Geet😆

What the hell kind of an automatic "IT" is he thinking about. Well the way he responds every time Geet is around, thinking that "IT" is automated and powerful is not too farfetched an idea for Maan 🤣

Damn I almost wanted to see Nakul and Maan goign at it. Avi you have destroyed my brain literally with this madness.😆