THE LOCKET REPOSTED (5) *** Epilogue pg 115 ***

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Part 94 - firstly when I found out about Devdas, i was like oh no don't tell me Maan devdas bangaya, by the way I loved this movie, Aish and SRK were awesome, loved them and the movie was magical. I know not everyone's cup of tea but Aish looked absolutely stunning and with SRK. You cant really go wrong. SO sorry back to the story, warna I'll continue writing about Devdas, I've brought the DVD even, although the movie comes of B4U and Zee cinema like every month. See crazy fan

OK part 94 was beautifully written. Sasha's thoughts were nice, who makes the bride-to-be work and Sasha was thinking right about those irritating women, her introspection about get's and her personality is honest. I like that Sasha isn't the usual cow but an understanding and mature individual.

Dev the ever understanding man, I love him. He can change any bad situation to good, a quality few people have.

Geet's song selection well actually yours was perfect, Maan and Geet put me in a pool of gush, seriously Avi how do you weave amgic with your words. I'm blushing, inta pyar 😳😳

Glad im not on the train today, uff 😆😆

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Twenty1st

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part 95 - Maan bohot clever hai, trying to escape now is he? But Dev is also his borther, that too twin. Haha

Anni is too much, that must have been hell embarrassing for Geet, Maan bhi na could he not wait a little before texting. Maan and his declaration was fun to read

The ever so bright Dev to the rescue, but i was sure he'll land himself and Maan in trouble. Arjun tora zada he mast hai, gosh what was he thinking riling Maan up. 😆😆😆😆😆

Aww the whole picture messaging was too cool and Maan apologising, aawww that to after holding the girl two feet away. TOOO cute. have i ever told you , i love love love this Maan

Geet going to teach a lesson, how loved this scene. Reminded me of the actual scene. Thank you

I loved Geet's passiveness, haq banta hai. and her nakre uff 😆😆

Dev again to the rescue and Maan fooling his beloved, not done Maan not done.

Aww shes so innocent, have i ever told you i love love love love your this Geet

Too much, inta fyda uttaya bechari geet ki 😆😆😆 Bad Maan

Do i forecast another couple in ANkur and Sasha, i love your writing, everyone has a happy ending awww

Great stuff, thank you

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Twenty1st

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Sujal's also got a happy ending, this should be a movie like those big family films with loads of songs, dance and fun 😳😳

Why don't you approach a director, you never know Ani might be the next big thing in Bollywood 😉

I would have loved to see these characters you've explained so well Sujal and the new girl that is. Since everyone else has a face, thanks to you. Wait you did, sorry typing comments and reading at the same time. So I can hurry the process, mujhe ending parna hai 😭😭😭 jaldi 😉

Meghna's bit was emotional, her saying goodbye. She sounds like such a good child and then the mother (the carer) remembering her but I suppose duty calls since she got another child now to look after, maybe someone who would help her get over the loss of Meghna. Although I'm sure Meghna would visit frequently.

I loved Geet's persuasion, 'anything for his sweetu' awww. Did I tell you, I love these Khuranna brothers. 😳😳

I'm more in RnB, pop and rap. Rock also. I know hard to imagine, soft hearted hardcore Romcom fan and Rock don't go together but kya kare. However I did try to listen to the song, the lyrics were apt, perfect for Naintara and Dev.

The poem was very sweet, very good indeed. the whole part was sweet

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Twenty1st

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OK are they going to get a happy ending because I was getting confused, Sujal and Kashish. But Suraj is a weird man, I know his scarred but little rude, then again Maan was too in the actual show at the start.

Ok I didn't know haldi ceremony was done to make the bride more beautiful, learnt something new. Maan ka 2 minutes kabhi katam he nahi hogi

So the wedding is next, cant wait. Inta sara wedding, first Maaneet, Dev-Tara, Meghna and her beau and now Pinky and Adi. YAY

you wont junking about it being the wedding season, speaking of which I have a bunch to go to since its summer and the holidays here, so pretty much the season has shifted form your story to reality 😆😆😆 Of marriage that is

will be waiting for the next chapters

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Posted: 10 years ago

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i wanna read this...
please give me pw of part 96, 97 ,98, 99, 100 and epilogue .
please

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sitoo
i wanna read this...
please give me pw of part 96, 97 ,98, 99, 100 and epilogue .
please

my older stories are not available at this time

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Twenty1st

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part 98 (1) - i love the thakur faily scenes, its all gushy and lovely, awww. i'm so happy they have found happiness after all that misery. Chandan's a good father

'Family hug time' do i need to tell you Meghna is so cute

Suraj? I'm confused about this character, yes his been through his share but does he like his girl (sorry forgot her name) or not

Adi's uncle is doing a great jon bring them together

aww darji and geet's bits were so touching, at one point I'm like no don't get married but the next I'm like don't be stupid, Maan pagal hojai ga 😆😆😆

finally Nakul did a job worth praises even if its at the end of the story 🤣

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Part 98 (2) - boy am i glad you've streched this story 😃

finally a happy part for Sujal and his girl

Kabir😲 never expected him to be a cry baby 😆 then again his in love, I'm glad his mum made him understand about Meghna and he understoof form her point of view. how cute

but you do know the cutest and bestest couple is MAANEET right, i love them, and then close would be Dev-Naina

you reminded me of the marriage sequence minus brij that is 😡 but aww, truly gushing worthy😳😳😳😳

Nakul got praised, OH YES you don't even realise how long i was wanting for this, reading locket is well worth now, finally nakul got appreciated 🤣 but no I'm happy for him

but happier for the marriage 😉

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part 98 (3)- awkward ☺️ poor mother, Poonam

haiyye i'm falling more for this couple, not fair its finisging soon 😭😭😭
aww he bows his head in front of her, like it should be 😃

Pinky 🤣 contact lenses 🤣 Adi 🤣 too good

and finally they are man and wife, i like your take on their marriage, very cute and adorable

not much to say apart form

I LOVED IT

thank you

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part 98 (4) - if im truly honest i haven't really connected with Sujal much maybe because he came much later or his story did anyway but very happy for his happy ending.

BUT lets focus here ---- Maaneet married now

Adi and Pinky are classic and food aur Pinky can they live without each other, maybe the food can but Pinky can't 🤣 but they were cute

Dev awww ' out faith won' I'm so happy for Tara and Dev

lets get this party on, they will have an reception wont they 😉

Teji and Pari, mmm nice couple

everyone's happy including Sasha, awww

thank you for a wonderful part, waiting for the next now 😉