New FF KAISI YEH KASHMAKASH (PART 5 updated pg no. 14 ) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting so long! pls update!
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congrats on ur first FF! Superb cs n lovely prologue! beautiful poetry... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am so sorry frnds
i now its a very long time
but i am busy in my studies
bt dont worry now m back nd
i will update it regularly
sorry for inconvenience !!

Part 2


Geet selected in interview as a caretaker of Dadimaa .she reached KM where she meet Dadimaa they share a great bonding in some time . Dadimaa loves her , she start loving geet as she loves Annie nd Maan .Dadimaa is happy that her caretaker (geet) is very sweet and nyc girl. so she decided that she lives in outhouse not in Servant quarters. bt maan was unknown of it.geet go to outhouse and settled there .

IN NIGHT
Geet go to bed and sleep
.

A car stop in parking area of KM . and maan stepped out from Car . he thinks its too late so he decided to stay in outhouse . he go there it was full of dark bt a small ray of light coming to him .he sees up There are lamps on he got confused and goes upstairs .

But the room was locked frm inside so he goes down and take the key of the room .suddenly geet heard some voice she got upset when gates open she set on bed and start yelling .


Geet : Chor chor chorrr...


(Maan put his hand on her mouth lyk this)


(He removes his hand and said.)


Maan :Mein chor nhi hu


Geet :har chor yahi kehta h ki wo chor nhi hai

.Maan :what !! mein chor nhi hu and meri chodo tum batao tum kaun ho aur yaha kya kar rahi ho ?


Geet : yahi baat to mein puchna caahti hu ki tum kaun ho aur yaha kya kar rahe ho ??

Maan: mein is ghar ka malik hu.


(Geet reaction suddenly changes she make a cute puppy face )


Geet : kya tum sach bol rhe ho ?


Maan : yes . what do you think i m a liar ??


Geet : (whispered)shakal se to lagte ho


Maan : What ? what you said... ?


Geet : kuch nhi


Maan : Nhi tume abhi kuch kaha h ?


Geet : nhi meine kab kaha . mein to kuch b nhii boli


Maan : bt mujhe to aisa mahsoos hua ki tumne abhi kuch kaha.


Geet : jo mahsoos ho wo humesha sach ho ye zaroori to nhii


Maan : Ya rite . So now you tell me who the hell are you ?


(Geet lost in her thoughts)


Maan : Hello Mein tumse bat kr raha hu .. Kaun Ho tum ??


Geet : Haan ! tumne kuch kaha ?


Maan : kaha kho gayi thi . mein ye kah rha tha ki kaun ho tum ?


Geet : wo mein .. wo mein... da...


(before she complete maan stop her and said )


Maan : wo mein wo mein kya kar rhi ho batao kaun ho tum ?


Geet : mein wo nayi caretaker hu


(Maan Surprisingly look her top to bottom and said )


Maan : Tum ho new caretaker ?


Geet : Haan .Kyu Kya hua ?


Maan : Nhi meine socha ki koi old aged hogi


(Geet saw him confusingly )


Maan : Thik koi baat nhi chalo ab to tumhe pta chal gaya h ki mein koi chor nhi hu and tum caretaker ho so ab mere room se bahar niklo.
Geet : Lekin dadima ne to mujhe yahi room diya h rahne ke liye .


Maan : tumhe koi galatfahmi hui h bcz ye room mera h.


Geet : galatfahmi mujhe hi kyu tumhe b to ho sakti h na ?


Maan : (a bit angry ) ye mera ghar h and tum mujhe kah rahi ho ki mein apna room bhul gaya hu . Dont you think its disgusting ?


Geet : to kya hua hall ki light off h sayed tum dusre room mein aa gaye honge.


(Maan become angry )
Maan : OK ! tum aisi meri bat nhi manogi wait .!

Precap : Hungamaa...!!

Edited by AngelicHeer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful update dear, loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome back! thanks 4 updating! wonderful update! superbly written! Maan n Geet meet! they argue! Maan wants his room! Geet says dadi told her she can stay there! Maan angry! update soon n do pm. Is this Part 2 or 3??

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for Updating

Sweet and Lovely Update

Maan and Geet meet and they little argument was so refreshing
I really liked it
Edited by taahir004 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART - 3

( Maan dragged geet to his house and start yelling )

Maan : Daddimaa Dadimaa ... Annie anniee... dadimaaa ...!!

Geet : ye kya kar rahe ho ?

Maan : just shut up

In Dadimaa room

Dadi : Ye itni raat ko Maan itne Jor kyu chilla rahe hai ... Kya baat huii hogi Humien jaldi jaker dekhna caahiye.

( Annie's room )

Annie : ab kaunsi nayi aafat aa gayi jo bhai itni raat ko bhi aise chila rahe hai
Oh God !! whatever ab neeche to jana hoga Annie chal beta jaldi chal otherwise bhai chilaa chialla kar puri colony ko jaga denge .

Dadima and annie come down they saw maan hold geet's hand and in anger .

Dadima : Maan aap aise kyu chilla rahe ho.

Annie : ha bhai atleast raat ko to acche se sone do

Maan : ye baat is ladki se puchiye jo mujhe chor smjh kar police ko bulane ki dhamki de rahi thi

Dadima : kya ? Geet kya apne sach me aisa kiya ?

Geet : wo ..wo .. mein dadimaa..

Maan : ab wo mein wo mein kya kar rahi ho thodi der pahle to bhuat attitude dikha rahi thi

Geet : dadima wo actually ye achanak se mere bed par aakar so gaye the to meine socha ye chor hai isiliye

Maan : Oh really ! tum abhi waha pa kya kah rahi thi ki mein chor hu and is ghar ka maalik nhi hu to dadimaa aap zara ise bataiye ki mein hu kaun ?
Dadima : wo sab to hum bata denge . par pahle aap bataiye ki aap iske room mein kya kar rahe the ??

Maan : Wo dadima mein late ho gaya to meine socha mein outhouse me rah jata hu but jab mein outhouse mein gaya to waha par light on thi so meine socha ki kahi koi aa to nahi gya h ghar me so .

Dadima : maan sach me yahi baat h ya aaj aap phir se kisi party se aa rhe h ?

Maan : sach mein dadimaa mein clent k sath meeting mein tha

Dadimaa : theek h ab aap sb jaiye aur so jaiye aur ha maan aage se dhyan rakhiyega ki ab out house mein geet rhti h

Maan : ji dadimaa .

PRECAP : MAANEET TOGETHER <3 .

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Edited by AngelicHeer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
nice part
maans yelling made all wakeup
n both mu clarified
dadi told maan to keep in thought now geet is staying in oh
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Very nice update
Fight between Maaneet on first meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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