OS: You only live twice

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Avenging_Angel

@Avenging_Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

It was beautifully written
reminded me The vow movie

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

lovely os ..

strange life and its strange ways ..

beautifully written

thank u

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Beautiful and Soulful OS

Geet and Maan met as strangers but soon became lovers however Geet had an accident and lost her memories and now she has been doubting the guy called Maanav but suddenly when she spoke about the night she met him it was as if she clearly remembered all and she even asked him if she ever called him Maan .
it has to be sad for Maan knowing his love his wife does not remember their time together or their love .
It has to be worst for Geet not knowing what has truly happened all those years and even her parents could answer all her questions but losing one's memory actually makes you a stranger in your own life

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Soni

@soni-zee

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Emotional os..beautifully written😊

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

It is beautilful.

da memory loss track... You just dont want to burden da person with lots of memories yet you want them to remember evrythng at the same time!! How ironic could it get for maan when u share such a deep relation with a person n yet not tell abt it to her.

you only live twice- sums it all up.

brilliant work shikha

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Fab !!!!👏

Absolutely awesome...

It was sooo beautiful n heart touching...

Just loved it...👏

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

amazing story beautifully written just loved it

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-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

I just saw this on the first page and I'm glad I did. This excerpt is so freaking beautiful. I want to cry. 😭 How do you do this? I can't even frame a proper comment for these beautiful lines.

"Maan" he murmured remembering the very few precious moments when she called him that. On the day where she confessed her love for him, on the day he took her in his arms with a swoop surprising and embarrassing her before their elders to enter the house they built together, and many more such moments that are only relished in one memory, rather than two.

"I would wish to have one of such days again Geet" he said instead to her picture smiling. After all, life was just twice. The first one of their life together disappeared in her memory, and he has just a second chance to relive those days, and have her call him by the name again, which she saved for special occasions...