ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED #7 THREAD 8 ADDED PT 36 Updated on 1-7-2015/ P133 - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
finally maine saare missed update read kr liye...
wow kitna kuch ho gaya h story me...bohot changes aa gaye h maan me but poori tarh se change hone me abi bohot time lagne wala h...hehehehehe maan n geet k mood swings... mujhe bada maja aa rh h maan ki halat dekh k...now ab tho parth b aa gaya h unke saath rhne n geet ka saara attention tho parth ne le liya h ab tho aur maja aayega bcoz itne dino se maan ko geet ki saari attention mil rhi thi tho usko aadat jo padd gai h...bada maja aane wala h
waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 29 - Lovely part richa di .. Maan confused with his feelings for Geet and baby .. both felt their baby for the first time .. Parth is coming to stay with them and Maan not at all happy with this
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 30 - Awesome part richa di .. Parth finally here and Maan irritated now only .. Geet got busy with Parth fully .. both enjoying a lot .. Geet wants Parth to sleep with them and Maan says no but finally he agrees
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 29

Maaneet moments were just so beautiful
So soulful and touching!!!
Geet gazing at her bump, Maan silently watching,
then both feeling the babies movement together

And finally a glimpse of an overwhelmed n emotional father who for the first time felt n kissed his baby!!!


Dadi, Dev Meera going for family wedding n Parth will be here
Maan in his frustration hurts Geet
and feeling guilty n sad to have hurt her
finally he gives in and agrees to have Parth here!

So The MSK is toning down n Geet doing the honours!!
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Lovely update
thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 30

Finally winds of change are blowing in Maan's house
Relations, emotions, concern and bonding all making their place in his life!!

Parth's entry probably a major breakthrough in their relation
MSK's first hand experience dealing with a kid😆
I can imagine part n MSK together🤢
Poor Geet😲

Geet is strongly facing Maan and making him bend to her views!
I'm sure Parth's stay here will surely stir some more emotions in him😳

Lovely update
I really want Maaneet going together for a ultrasound and Maan watching his baby 😃
He would love that scene ... I guess😳

Awesome update
sorry for delayed comments
waiting for the next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update di
Maan has a new competitor now i.e. parth
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
eagerly waiting for next part.. Update soon please 😊
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PART-31



WHAT Maan and Geet was sharing was beyond explanation. They themselves even can't understand it exactly then how other will. But right now this wasn't the question. Its time for getting new experience. Where as Geet's emptyness filled by Parth,same time Maan was struggling to adjust with this new member in his house. He was not a person who to mingle. He only set rules as per his accord and others followed it but now his every rule was broked by none other,but his mere employee,right this time he can told himself that she is his employee,who's work is to obey him,but Geet act completely oppoiste.though it wasn't intentional coz Geet aint courageous to show tantrums intentionally. Whatever she do was a natrual come out of her condition. After all she is carrying junior Khurana,a stubborn blood,like Father.


Well whatever but surely it become a headache for Maan. He was challanged at every new second and with Parth his whole world shaked. He become habitual of,sleeping holding Geet in his arms. But Whole night he was only seeking for a chance which dont come. At 4 am he was slept after spending hours in stirring on one to another side. When he woked up bed was empty both were missing. Maan scanned whole room but they wasn't there. When he dont found them he went out in their search. Maan thought of checking in Parth's room. His assumption proved right. Geet was busy in giving bath to Parth. Parth was in his mischief mode. He blowing bubbles and splashing water on Geet,which she enjoyed a lot but Maan entred and scold which scared him. He was sududed instantly,which definitely made her annoyed. But she tackle both patiently.


"aap yaha? I mean do you need something? If yes then please wait for few minutes. Parth ko school k liye ready karna hai." She was very calm.


"Geet dont spoiled him. He is big enogh to do his work at own." he growled.


"really? Itne bade to aap nahi hue ye to sirf 5 saal ka hai." Geet said wrly which frowned him. "dekhiye aaj iska exam hai so please can you stop scaring him." Geet tried to made him understad that his rough tone and rude words was not bearable for such a small child.


"Geet see what he did. You can slip here." Maan was in his mode only not listening to her.


"ok then you give bath to him." Geet snap quickly.


"no Chachi mujhe chachu se nahi nahana." Before Maan's denial,Part himself denying the offer.


"why so?" Maan glared him and he hold Geet's wrist firmly to save himself.


"because you look scary with those big eyes. Dont widened them all the time. One day it become only like this. And i dont want our baby see you like this. What impression baby get that its dad look like some monster." Geet mocked in pace tone to lighten the mood of Parth. His giggles echoed the washroom which told Geet that she was sucessded.


Maan turned and leaned to face Parth. "what so funny in this?" he again tried to scold him but failed as now Parth in play mood.


Geet came to stop him but she was lost her balance and ready to fall. Before any thing happens to her, her two rescuers hold immediately. Maan saved her but Parth to do his side efforts to save her.

"Chachi aap theek hona?" His concern was clear in his eyes and voice. Geet nodded and caressed him.


"Now you see. If I don't held you on right time you, any thing can happened." Maan again scolding her, proving himself right.


"Chachu don't scold my chachi. Aap nahi b hote to b main girne nahi deta." He protest on Maan's strict behavior.


"Ya sure. Khud ko sambhal pehle." Maan said rudely and took Geet ouside followed by Parth. He was running, holding his towel draped on his waist, like a duck


"I am fine. Sachhi." She assured Maan while sitting on bed. Parth came and jumbed on bed. "Aap jao mujhe abi Parth ko school k liye ready karna hai." She told him.


"And what about me?" Maan got offensive.


"You are big enough na, do yout work at yourself. Abhi koi keh raha tha aisa." Her said sarcastic word with gleamed eyes made Maan fumed.


"Ha to tume lagta hai main kar nahi sakta. I will do it better then you." He fumed and went out dumping his feet in anger.


Seeing Maan's gestures both gave hi 5 to each other. "Cmm'n Parth get ready or else you get late." She quickly made him dressed up. Parth was happy as he was getting same attention from Geet which he get at home.


Geet to changed quickly and brought him for breakfast. She was busy in feeding him ignoring Maan. "Geet where is my coffee? He finally called her to grab her attention.

"Vinny laya nahi? I told him to give you." Geet replied without even glancing at him.


"If he did then why I asked from you?" He was frustrated and reflecting in his gestures.



Mean time vinny brought his breakfast with coffee. Maan sipped coffee and leave it instantly. "Geet what is this? Where are your attentions?" He complained.


"Kya hua?" Geet asked.


" ye aaj kaisi coffee banai hai?"


"Sir ye mam ne nahi cook ne banai hai. Mam was busy in preparing Parth baba's food, so she instruct us." Vinny revealed and he left the table without eating any thing.


Geet felt bad so he command Vinny to take care of Parth and she quickly left from there.


Maan was sat in his room. Angry and messed. She raised his mug on front of his eyes but Maan change his direction. Geet to roamed. It continues till he stopped. Geet was tried but she don't complaint and smile all the while. "Ye maine banai hai." She told him and handovered in his hand. "Chaliye abi breakfast kariye. Till then I get ready your office attaire." She added and moved towards his wardrobe. "By the way you claimed in morning that you will do it more perfectly, then why don't get ready. Abhi late nahi ho raha?" Geet teased him.


"I will do it if you don't messed up my wardrobe." Like a kid he put all blame on her.


"Ha meri galti hai." She again teased him. Geet quickly select and ready to leave but he grasped her firmly. Her breath turn heavied as his fingers make a way to upwards. His teasing tips make her inners damp. "Maan.." she moaned in his mouth. Her channels clenched hard, needs him badly.


His velvety tongue stroking her mouth, while his hand playing with the taut peaks of her soft bossoms, melting in his rough plam and begging for more. Her body shuddered with need. This urge was so strong that couldn't be controlled.


Maan's morning start wasn't good but he feels good now having her all for him. But how long only Parth will decide. 😉




Note: likes pure nahi hue last update pe or abse maine bolna b nahi hai as you guys feel offensive and unfair. But now you guys also don't ask me for updates. When I get time and I feel to write then I will update. No matters how long it takes. May be once in a month or may b not. I am not sure.


THANKS FOR GIVING YOUR PRECIOUS TIME
Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update Richu
I must say the way story moving on slowly n gradually its tremendous I like its so very mush ...
maan n his changed behavior the person who care a damm about any emotions n feeling now he become
attention sikker , he wants geet for himself kuch toh badal raha h...lol he actually is cribbing like a kid
n geet whole attention is on parth n in short he is jealous of him ...
n bathroom scene was damm funny ...in breakfast again maan was irritatd as geet was feeding parth nd maan's mood turnd bad as he didnt get coffee from her then in frustration he left without having anything n geet felt bad for him ...here comes finally geet gave him the much needed attetion which he needed badly from her and he took full advantage of it ...
Edited by brandgurti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update... maan feeling neglected because geet is spending her time with parth.. maan is behaving like a little kid asking for attention of geet... great going, how will parths presence will change maans attitude...

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