Aye Mere Humsafar /updating july 3rd 16

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

thanks for the PM di
and password

part 1 and 2

its a new plot and m looking forward to read specially how maan will accept his gaao wali wife and the way u wrote maan's character is just too gud..

m in awe with his dialogues and I always love when maan uses hum to address himself , it gives a royal feeling
maan's father is really a business minded person
and he don't even consider his own sons wish
felt bad for maan

still he cannot deny his father..

it's something new..
maan is a obedient son and his character is a bit soft..
he is not khadoos types

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divya

@-Divya.S-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

that's a nice title.. would like to read this story if you can provide me the access. thank you.

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

It's very nice starting. Ranveer is so much insensitive. How easily he ordered maan to marry Sam but he has to sleep someone else for a child as Sam couldn't able to conceive.what is he planning. He send nakul at his place. I don't know I am feeling something fishy there. Maan is really weird. He is a educated and knows very well about right or wrong. Than why didn't object hearing his father. Waiting for next dear

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MC092126

@MC092126

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Hey dear pls send me the password for the first part for this ff

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

if u r not intersted...I sent u password coz u asked for this work .. u need not to read mine u r most welcome but don discourage like this.u can read all other my one work is not addition to bunch...even I cleared before not any compulsion to read my fictions...

you always taking wrong way my comments any way i cant help u said this is os , and i already comented on 2 eppisode only as going overseas and goingthrough so many other tention so decide to put on hold new ones andwill read old one so tha i cant mix upthings and after coming from overseas i can read with peace of mind ,why u always taking me other way round if u dont like me reading ur ff than let me know I will not read but dont miinterprete my comments ,never consider any body small or big all are equal for me.

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Hi... Hey.. I wanted to read this story... U send me pm.. But its protected.. Can u give me passwrd.. So parh Kai Hii.. Comment kar sakti.

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Aye Mere Humsafar

Pyaar ne jahan pe rakha hai jhoom ke kadam ek baar
Vahin se khula hai koi rasta, vahin se giri hai deewaar
Roke kab ruki hai manzil pyaar ki
Ae mere humsafar, ek zara intezaar Sun sadaayein de rahi hai manzil pyaar ki