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WOW!! fantastic updates dear...loved them

nice update
waiting for next update

Part 8 -11...
I am appalled with the way you have been carrying this story on...
it has turned out amazingly beautiful...
though it has more pain than gain more sorrow than joy yet it has touched the heart...
I don't remember reading something like this here on IF but your attempt is superb...
this exactly shows how much layers you have got as a writer...how versatile you are...
so Maaneet put vikram behind the bars...
Maan did get justice for Geet...
Geet is still being unresponsive to everything around her...
Maan finally took her to psychiatrist for aid...
the doc is sceptical about her health and safety...
Maan is unsure of what to do...
Geet's outburst worried doc all the more...
so it's time for Maan to make efforts and make Geet realise of his love and make her to feel and react to his love...
brilliant piece of writing!

Awesome update. Doc ne maan ko suggest ki geet ko firse maa banne ke liye tbhi woh thik ho sakti hai but maan apne pyar ki insult krna nehi chahata ...koi kisise kitna pyar kar Sakta hai !!! Geet vikrm ki news sunke kafi wild ho gyi n ab doc bhi dar rehe hai...ab toh maan ke pass bhi koi aur rasta nehi hai . woh doc bhi geet se jlni lgi ..:p plz continue soon...

Itne court room ke hungamas and now Vikram is dead..

awesome... Interesting...

Fabulous update..Vikram was put behind bars but still Geet is upset and unresponsive to the surroundings..Finally Maan sought psychaitric help and Dr advised on having a baby might bring Geet to a normal state. Knowing about Vikram;s suicide Geet became wild again..Lots of TLC required to bring her out of this depression.. Loved it.. Waiting for next.

Lovely update. After Vikram fiasco Geet is not mentally balanced so Maan took help of Dr. He suggest for baby. Let see what will happen next.