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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

congo for 50th part aww so beautiful geet insecurity fear pusing maan again n again her heart just want him in his arm she feels like home finally she listens her heart n take a chance superb part thnx 4 update

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

OMG... like O M G!

That was simply superb. And aptly titled "Inevitable". And just like the title here, I am inevitably falling more and more for the writer... As non-dramatic as I am "Dil karta hai aapke haat choom lu".

I felt cold in the moment when they were both standing in the rain, I look up to search for the blue star myself, I felt my vision blur and realize it wasn't the rain but my watery eyes (and felt a little stupid for it too), but my oh my, you had me standing there, right next to the railing, witnessing this beautiful moment.

Loved it, loved every bit of it!

PS - I am a little sad about Sameer and not a totally heartless person. Stop judging me 😳

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

ice broken. at one place she got to know the reality and let him in her heart and sorrows

at second place the 'second' she let 'second' him in her heart but the reality is still unknown. wat will happen. The reality will be out and again the pain will follow.

nice update.

Edited by MissBahanji - 10 years ago

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Congrats for the half century. It was truly inevitable. She had been at war with herself for long... she needed to let go of her barriers. I am still overwhelmed with the emotions in this part. It was so beautifully portrayed. He truly is the only one who can break all her barriers.

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Inevitable totally inevitable because...

A lovestory is not about those who lose their heart but about those who find thet sullen inhabitant who , when it is stumbled upon, means the body can fool no one , can fool nothing - not the wisdom of sleep or the habit of social graces. It is a consuming of oneself and the past...

And the heart ..it is an organ of fire

Edited by ardentfitzcy - 10 years ago

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

...she wound her arms around his waist and buried her face in his chest...

But when i hold you , i hold everything that is...
Sand, time,the tree of rain
everything is alive so that i can be alive:
without moving i can see it all
in your life i see everything that lives...

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

" Time slipped by, and the only thing she felt was his hand on her waist,and on her cheek, and his lips that touched gently , parted for a moment before theytook hers with a raw passion, caressing, exploring , revering making her knees melt into jelly."

Aracadia displays but a region of dreams,
What are visions like these to first kiss of love?
Oh! Cease to affirm that man ,since his birth
From Adam till now , has with wretchedness strove;
Some portion of paradise still is on earth,
And Eden revives in the first kiss of love.
When age chills the blood, when our pleasures are past
For years fleet away with wings of the dove
The dearest remembrance will still be the last,
Our sweetest memorial the first kiss of love.
(Lord Byron)

Edited by ardentfitzcy - 10 years ago

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: MissBahanji
ice broken. at one place she got to know the reality and let him in her heart and sorrows
at second place the 'second' she let 'second' him in her heart but the reality is still unknown. wat will happen. The reality will be out and again the pain will follow.

nice update.

Pain will follow and that is another inevitability.
But love will provide the strength. This time they wouldnt bear it alone.

And then raahi manwaa dukh ki chinta kyun satati hai dukh to apna saathi hai..

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

I don't know what to write..

I adore this Geet. Superb characterization

And yet the pain is still to come.

If only it was that easy that a prince comes and solves your problems

The battle is so intense when it is fought with yourself

The scars self inflicted, the boundaries set by yourself, the feeling of unworthiness

I think she needs a hug from Lasya aunty

There is healing in a mother's hug.

❤️

have been thinking of this all morning ..

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

This is a piece of writing that makes me feel the deepest of emotions.

Beautiful so dangerously beautiful it is ... that i whatever i say would'nt be enough yet it is bothers me that i couldnt comment on the similar page of the post or right below it .

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