Web of Love (3) - [Ch 69/70- P. 100] 30th April - Page 8

WOW!! outstanding updates dear...very beautifully written...

thnku for pm.

Update was outstanding, tweety finally opened her wounds in front of vicky, gud to see how he is caring for her without demanding any answer.

loved it dee. Already waiting.

The death of a youngster is hard on people they leave behind, irrespective of how the death occurred. Speculation and introspection are two very dangerous things in certain situations.

Awesome... That's all I could think as of now

49. Torments - 3

Shika I kept listening to "phir le aya dil" each time I read this update (which is so many times in the last few days 😊 )

It just is so apt with the situation Tweesha is facing. Whom should she blame her friendship, her destiny or that of her freinds', circumstances, our society, in general her need to have everything as before or her pain of having lost someone whom she treasured and yet couldn't. How helpless a feeling it must be ... and yet she is surrounded with it and nor can she escape it neither can she accept it. I sometimes argue with myself the way you make me feel each time I read something with such themes. Tweesha can't even fight for her friend and can't even ask for forgiveness for not being there... something was just left incomplete, with so many feelings and desires left suppressed with no one there to answer her.

Vicky here, was shown going through so many shades of his personality... each scene was a transition for him. He started with being the friend who cares for her and who embraces her when she herself is unknown of her surroundings due to her inner struggle, and when she is getting few minutes of peace where she isn't consciously fighting her inner questions and pain, he plays the role of a lover cocooning her from the world and providing her with place to recover and rest. Later you show him as his flirty charming and adorable self when he is with Kirti ❤️. And then, he's a protector and friend again who is trying to save Tweesha for her own self when she is injuring her self ... so fierce in his expressions and then at the same time so soft and careful in his acts ... who can be there for her when she isn't the capacity to think in her own haze filled mind. In all of this not once did he ask her anything ... he just stood by her as a rock she can lean upon and who absorbs everything she presents him with be her anger, resistance, pain, sorrow, or helplessness; and later is rewarded by her breaking down in front of him which was very necessary for her or she would suffer within. He was able to melt her but at the same time didn't let her be vulnerable in front of others but kept her safe from everything and was there in the background always so that her one call and he came there to be the comforter, to him she finally opened up all that she went through in last 3 years. 👏 👏

I Love Vicky 😳

Naina's act I still won't comment on it ... but yes so much was left unsaid and so many different paths could be chosen, which can't ever be justified or given a rest with just a letter. A person's worth and life's journey is filled with millions of moments and people who are affected and have a right on their life by just being bond to them in some named and unnamed relations... and a piece of paper with some words and letters can't ever integrate everything that's left behind. And a suicide note is all that Naina left behind for her folks ... but in reality she left behind so many desires and moments which were actually filled with love, friendship and care which our now tainted by her act.,...cause now she will be remembered with what she went through and what could and should have been.

Tweesha's desire to experience her wedding with Geet was very touching and painful.


And the Last scene where she opened to Vicky in bits and pieces was enough of a recital of what she's struggling with ... and her realisation that the person standing in front of her is her Vicky and not the one she resists by calling him by his given name to put some distance in their relation. He came and left no space for coldness and distance now between them now... he was persistent and was rewarded with her trust and love in the form of her acceptance to his soothing kiss and then being roped in her tight embrace and still being there to witness her breaking down which none have been bestowed with.


Update soon the Golden jubilee update Shika. Waiting eagerly.

part 49 - finally his care & "love" made her to open up her torment from her heart...liked how Vicky all the time supported her and even she noticed & accepted it

Tu nahi toh yeh bahar

Congrats for 50

Oh 50! Congrats for the half century🤗

Read and comment later...😉

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Ah, it's been ages that I've commented just below the update. This feels nice 😃

50. Inevitable-

Oh Shika! what have you done girl... you always struck a chord. It was so simple expression but yet held something beautiful and deep.


Her acceptance and his struggle were led them to this inevitable moment where none saw it coming but still embraced it ... as it was meant to be.

Loved this line - "Inability of holding back and inability of letting go". was enough an evidence of how much she's come ahead to try giving life a chance and letting a hope enkindle within her which died tragically after that 'incident'


She accepted that she has built so many barriers within her own self all with her self loathe and guilt ... and at the same time has surety that only Maan can breakthrough all of it even with her withholding. I feel this acceptance was a big step towards the covering of the emotional distance she keeps with everyone and was nullified with the intimacy she shares with him.

Liked how you connected the cycle for her here. Years back when she was feeling lonely due to her mother's absence in her life ... Sameer was there for her to cheer up and she found a brother in him then. He connected with her on a deeper level. And today when she remembers that incident standing under a distressed sky reflecting her misery and turmoil, she is again comforted by a presence so strong that she has unconsciously as well as noncommittally allowed to form a deeper bond with her. That relation with Sameer was formed on friendship and trust, whereas this one with Maan is formed on sharing of similar pain, anguish and struggle which reflects in their eyes ... and is engulfed and at the same time blissful with silence that surrounds them.

For the majority of the update their silence spoke so much and their eyes expressed more than all the words they've shared in this short span of few days. Go to see they haven't spoken much at all, and whatever little they've spoken is either out of anger and pain or few words that provokes and breaks their barriers a little each time. Inspite of it all they still know each other so much more that they can both cause either inexcusable damage to the other or bring redeeming grace for each other. Very unique and indecipherable relation they share between all their silence. I hope this silence shouldn't cause any more storms for them ... which I think is on it's way.

Both covered a distance this time... he covered a distance towards her soul, that even his letting go caused her to come near and taking an active step towards acknowledgement. And she accepted his need and her desire.

They shared a kiss, but before that I loved his act of embracing her pain ... after snapping the thread holding him; with his eyes closed, face bent and lips touched her hair. That for me was so intimate and crucial as that act spoke of him as a true person and his feelings. it caused her to feel at home, a sense of belonging. And later that Kiss ... was like an answer to it all... an ultimate and apt culmination to his act of love that he first kissed away her tears accepting her sorrow and; then when she breathed his name "Maan" (not the Mr. Khurana that she had used to keep a distance) did her break the final emotional barrier to go ahead and kiss her.

He still feared and felt rejected .. as it's deeply embedded with all his loss ... but her embrace and step towards him should work at least as some solace.


Beautiful way of bringing in the Golden jubilee Maggie ji
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Love ya ❤️

50!!!! congrats !!!!!
geet asks from maan to stay!!!
what will he do??