DARK TEMPTATION 2 Updated NEW THREAD & PT 22 on 30-8-2015/ PG 139 - Page 97

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Posted: 10 years ago
Both updates are awesome
Maan apne papa ki company join kar leta hai jaha wo junior supervisor hai usse bahut saari difficulties ka saamna karna padta hai but wo himmat nahi harta Finely usse apni first sellery milti hai uski khushi ka koi thikana nahi hai wo mention aata hai aur apne check ko nihar raha hota hai tabhi Geet waha aati hai aur uske check ka amount dekh kar uska mazak batati hai jo Maan ko ye ehssas karata hai ki usne kitni money apni ayyashi mai waste ki Maan dukhi hokar apni mom ke place par jaata hai jaha uske dad uska intzaar kar rahe hote hai wo usse kehte hai ki aaj wo uss par proud feel Kar rahe wo kehte hai ki money unke liye matter nahi karti unke liye ye matter karta hai ki aaj wo ek responsible person hai Maan is feeling motivated with his father's talk
Maan apne dosto ke saath disc jaata hai aur waha wo Geet ko Vikram ki date bane hue dekhta hai Maan is getting angry on Geet aur dono ke beech fight hoti aur Geet Maan ki sabke saamne insult Karti hai
Beautifully written
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice pts
maan become responsible and want to
handle his empire he learning fast
he got approval on his first proposal
in geet matter he is upset she is weird
he thinks he become close to his dad
maan was hell angry seeing vickram's date
geet slapped him wen he slapped her

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Maan is changing
He joined business and got his first cheque also
Maan is slowly realizing his past mistakes
He brought a proposal for KC for which everyone agreed
Geet went on a date with vikram which made maan angry
Words used by adi and Vikram's for geet made maan furious and he beated them
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome updates
Maan is becoming a hard working man from a careless one
i am happy that Maan is working hard and not going after Geet
and happy that Maan and Samarth relation is growing in a good way
that again meet at old home and samarth took his first check
Maan gave a new proposal which was praised by all so now he is handling big thing


Samrath is happy with Maan success
and gave him some tips about love and life
Maan party with his friends was spoiled cos Geet was with vikram
Maan friends dint know Geet so were angry with Maan behavior but when got to know truth sad sorry to Maan ... Maaneet slap eachother Geet was rude to Maan and endded their deal
lets see whats next
Edited by kuhu18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its nice to see Samarth and Maan's relations is getting better ! Maan changed a lot ! Samarth approved Maan's proposal ! Now seems he is all set to be the MSK
Maan saw Geet with vikram I don't know what is wrong with Geet , what was in her past which doesn't allow her to be normal she is ruining her life 😒 Maan slapped her 😲 and Geet too slapped him 😲 😲
Maan fought for her with his friends but Geet insulted him... .
Waiting for the day when Geet will change...
The great thing about the update was " father-son" bonding ! Which I love the most ❤️
Thanks for the double dose 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely double update maan wanted to prove himself that he was not a loser he can accomplish on his own he is capable of doing work and earning on his own his hardwork paid he got his first cheque he couldnt believe it geet mocked him making himrealsie what his lavish life has been it has been a wakeup call for him maan went to his spot where he found his dad who was proud of him and encouraged him for his hardwork maan felt nice talking to him the only person who actually cared for him maan brought a propsal which was accepted he will be heading for it maan told samarth abt geet he wats maan to win geets trust and make her open up maan wanted to party with his friends vikram had a date who was geet which made him furious he punched his friends and slapped geet who slapped him back showing his real place in her life his friends were shocked to know geet was his wife
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 20 Geet bringing Maan on track yes her approach is different but Maan feel like achieving for himself than only spending
He gets his first cheque and first project
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 21 Now Maan has to tame Geet 😛 which is a bigger job then doing a normal job ... he feels for her otherwise why he hit Vikram
Excited how like Geet changed him Maan will do the same and also make her fall for him

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 1 seems interesting. Geet is a rich spoiled brat who does whatever she wants and cares about nobody. Interesting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohoo quite different character hey I m a new reader yr and I want to read ur story plzzz

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