DARK TEMPTATION 2 Updated NEW THREAD & PT 22 on 30-8-2015/ PG 139 - Page 98

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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan is changing n has started to think about his step father n his patience n loveful caring towards him. His friends r also giving him realization. Loved it. He can't now even resist her with anyone. She made her to change her regulation evevn which she was following on her birthday. He has given himself to her n willingly though he fears that she could take Hi like any random guy after fulfilling her desire. Hope their closeness will consume their bitterness towards their nearest one n at the same will start to feel for each other n the need of their togetherness. Update soon dear. Waitinggg
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 18
Maan is changing n has started to think about his step father n his patience n loveful caring towards him. His friends r also giving him realization. Loved it. He can't now even resist her with anyone. She made her to change her regulation evevn which she was following on her birthday. He has given himself to her n willingly though he fears that she could take Hi like any random guy after fulfilling her desire. Hope their closeness will consume their bitterness towards their nearest one n at the same will start to feel for each other n the need of their togetherness. Update soon dear. Waitinggg
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Posted: 10 years ago
For part 20, 21

Amazing amazing amazing amazing... Awesome awesome awesome ...
This update was super se uper. U too write n execute all ur thought so cooly n with so much control. I am in love with this one of urs. Maan's realization towards his father n his responsibility came in him in such a way that I couldn't stop tears from my eyes . at last his e counter with geet was so much painful that I am feeling bad for maan. Eagerly waiting for the next to read. Update soon dear.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Part--19
Awesome update
Omg m I dreaming maan was changing really ...muaaahhh Richu I love you the way when you turn your story we think something you did something really amazing which we never thought I never think that jerk maan k pass ek dil bhi h n emotions h...
maan n samarth bonding was very nice...maan wants to become responsible starts job...bcoz he proves everyone wrong n becomes sucessful ...I wish this change stays for ever with him..
I think maan really care for geet , her behaviour hurted him but at least he realised what he did to his dad and
geet did the same to him ... he went to his mumma house where he is at peace n their he found his dad aww I love father son talk sooo much ...ohh when maan's dad say ek tum he nahi ho nahi Jo arpita ko miss karte aww soo many emotions in in sentence...
Samarth mysterious talk make me curious about him ... and I think maan is samarth real father ...
I feel he was also exactly like maan spoiled brat but life taught him a big lesson in a really hard way ,which changed him I
think even he was kind regrating his past ...

Other hand geet still same n living same disgusting life ... let's see when she is going to change I know eske liye bhi Tumne kuch rocking plan kar rakha hoga ...but seriously I still not able to understand her :P what she wants why she is dong
this with her life hushh ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part--20 to 21

Both parts are really amazing

20

Wow what a change in Maan's behavior ... aww I hv to confessed finally he is on right path n realising his mistakes no try to mend them ...
Hmm Maan got his first salary n he sooo happy he earned in his own hard word ... but geet make fun of him n she just glance the check n amout and mocking him which hurt n irritated maan ...
Othe hand where everyone laughed coz of his pay but his own dad whom he always hurt him ... who made maan first earn so proud that he kissed the cheque n then his dad supported maan and make him understand the value of real happyness...
Love maan and his dad moments ...maan showing his msk skills slowly n he crack a deal ...

21

Wohooo maan is so happy he gonna sign his first contract .. other hand his dad having happy grin coz
maan achieving gradually the heights of success more over he is doing this with his own will not bcoz of any pressure or anything...

Here geet still same leading same disgusting life ... koi nai jab maan line pe aagay ye bhi aahe jaye g...no worry I have faith on you Richu ... Maan went to pub to enjoy with his friends but Where he saw vikram with geet and things turns really terrible...
geet again humiliate maan in public and both slap reach other ...
omg what stunned me the way maan reacted gosh this shows how much he is affected by her
the way he showed his authority on her was right I loved it ...
Lets see what happed next ...now I genuinely likening this maan so much ...


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Posted: 10 years ago
superb
maan slowly changed responsible person
geet didint change a bit
maan started to possessive about her

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome uppdates.
Loved the changes that are happening with Maan. For the first time he is realising that he needs to achieve something in life. N when he got his first check there is no bound to his happiness.

Geet n his friends making fun of him. Now he understood that whatever he has uske liye kitna mehnet karna padta hai.
He goes to seek peace. Samrath and Maan talking. Samrath words surprised Maan. That scene was best. Samrath encouraging him n praising him making Maan more determined. He is working hard and earned to work in a project also..


Maan at disc. his blood boiled seeing Vikram with Geet. Bashing Adi n then Vikram. Everyone shocked by the turn of events n it was serious when they got to know Geet as his wife.


Now wat will Geet do n Maan reaction???
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 22



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Posted: 10 years ago
samrath seems to be really angry this tym his care concern as a father will surely make him more strict
really i do feel geet needs to be taught a lesson n its high tym she mends her ways n abt maan it was to a mistake on his part regarding fight at the night club
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Posted: 10 years ago
Can understand Samarth's concern but why is he so scared for such a small thing.. i mean they have controlled everything then why the fear..is something very bad and he wants to control it before it reaches his son...

something is really amiss here coz samarth looked shocked and shaken with the fight and its not like he does not know wat maan does.. something is really troubling him.

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