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Hahahaha bichara maan kahan phass gaya n abv all dat bad past experiences

part 4

Julie, wowww is the word for the update.
I loved Geet. Specially when she thinks how to convince him. With right words or the pout? So cuteee.
Also Maan is not at all ready to help her in her lies cos of his past and the lies she said to her dad and now Maan. For him Geet is turning out to be just another person.
But still there is this spark of attraction you showed there from Maan's side. I dont know if I should call it a attraction just yet. But there is something about Geet that makes him wait for her opinion in project, wait for her coffee, watching her laugh or notice her gestures.
There on other hand Geet's hand is filled with task. First to convince him to be her BF, then also to rehired the fired employees. True, she has indeed landed herself in a big mess.
Loved your writing style. You should definitely write more. It really dint seem that its your first time.
You should start writing for the concepts you have in your head. You will do awesome.
-Sanjana!

Originally posted by: preeti.1

Part was good but little confused. .
in part 4 geet'father has taken geet with him and maan told him yhat geet is knly his than how come geet is in maan'office and serving coffee..plz explain in next part..
did geet'father left geet with naan ?
Or maan kissing geet in front of her father was a geet' dream

lovely update Julie! well written! Poor Geet has a tough task ahead of her - convincing MSK! Maan so affected by her presence! he is attracted to her! Maan is nt ready 2 help as she lies 2 hi n her dad! his past influences his decision! Geeet brings him coffee! waiting 4 next part!

Awesome part .. very well written

It's amazing. Maan accepted that he feels something more about geet. But his past was so much sourful . he hates those people who lies without any hesitation and now he is thinking the same as geet also lied to her father. But now maan is angry and her father gets to know her lie now what will geet do. Waiting for next dear

so geet entered lion den by bribing him with coffee.. hehe

nice part

OMG ! Another awesome part.

Geet is finding right words to convince Maan but she is forgetting whom she is dealing with.

Maan has pre-decided that he will say No to Geet but I am sure his all decision gone on toss after seeing Geet's cute n weird way to convince him.

P.S. - Tanya, I must say you are Merchant who is haunting new best writers. Julie and Sanju I hope you both start writing FF/SS for us.