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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Part 2 Relation between Geet and Geet's dad was sweet

He maybe a don but he is still her father and like any other father he wants his daughter to be in safe hands .

Unfortunately in a hurry Geet took her boss's name and him being Geet's boyfriend did go down happily with her dad😆

so now Geet's father is anxious to meet Maan and ask details of their love story 😆

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Part 3 This Geet is quite similar to the actual show so her ways of talking is getting connected well👏

and Maan is quite brooding strong personality and he feels disturbed seeing Geet so badly trapped but he is hiding something as well

Maybe his background or past will be revealed eventually

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Part 4 Maan is so angry he fired 8 employees !😲

I guess the damage brought by Geet is having ripples in everyone's lives . Would love to know once in a while what is Maan's thinking about all this ?

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

supperb idea
and i loved ur story concept
first i will read all parts and comment keep it up

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

part -1 Geet ask maan to pretend her lover in front of her don dad and our grt maan throw geet from his cabin and i love ur last line very much
meetu ur to gud i loved it

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ch.nawal

@ch.nawal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Great idea... loved it

I havnt written anythng before but as m great maaneet lover so will definitely read and cmnt to help in keeping forum active

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

part-2 sanjana u write so well
geet lied her dad to save herself getting married to vivan and blurted maan's name and her dad is really happy for her choice supperb yaar plz try to write more parts

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

those people who are reserving their place should give update quick otherwise they are blocking other possible writers,is this link is only for writers or armature is also allowed?

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

on one side in rule it is advertise that only update which will be approved by moderator will be printed and on other side cap of reservation don't you thing contradictory rule?

according to me who ever wants to write they should send to moderator and time limit of one to two day should given to continue further, and should be evolute first come first basis and the best entry should be publish which will give equal platform to all the writers.