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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

awesome story...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

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ReelyROSExx

@ReelyROSExx

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

GREAT ONE SHOT

I had this huge grin on my face when I started reading this... so this was the surprise u were speaking abt in the other page ??

Geet seeing Maan in her dreams ... saying her to move on

( For a sec ... I thot tht ... its going to be a sad one ... esp When Dev s name came up ,,,,, But when Mira came up ... I was back to my grinning mode 😃)

So Maan was " Not " actually dead ... but was faking due to his fear for Geets safety and insecurity of his appearance post the treatment

but he couldnt resist when he sees Geet crying for him in her sleep ... n Ggives into his desires 😳😳

Which brings out the fact tht he s alive

arghh,... Kamini ... 😡

Geet gets the strength to fight when she sees her Mate in danger ... and kills Kamini but ends up getting injured badly

Loved how Geet took away Maan s insecurities... n now tht Kamini is also dead

Maneet happily everafter

Now thts what I call a PERFECT story 😃😃

Now I ll be alert next time u say " SURPRISE " 😉

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DishaMG

@DishaMG

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Superb os dear
congratson ur 1st os!!
I too love supernatural fics and maaneet in it...hayeee
plzz do write lost of stories

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

lovely os though it was confusing in the beginning

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JaasChowdhray

@JaasChowdhray

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

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mamta-salian, satyasree89, bgr_80, kainturakiran, maneetarsh, hottyangel, susm, nishnal, muskeeter, DAZZLINDD, spoorthi28, gurtimuskaan, friend_lee2006, samidsamid, its_me, ainanwer, maria_awan, mayapari, annirogc, aparna3011, jasika08, Hanishadevi, preeti.1, ambbiha, khwaishfan, love2_soma, punam2712, Drashtilove, taahir004, CookieMonster.,

Originally posted by: sonia2340
amazing os loved it

Originally posted by: jasika08
Awesome osSmile

Originally posted by: mishtypiya
superb os

Originally posted by: friend_lee2006
Awesome update

Originally posted by: muskeeter
wooow...wonderful OS...loved it

Originally posted by: annirogc
beautiful os .. well written

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
congrats on the OS! lovely OS!

Originally posted by: manjeet6
Wow awesome os..I loved it Very well written

Originally posted by: maria_awan
Awsome dear

Originally posted by: ainanwer
interesting os

Originally posted by: aparna3011
wonderful

Originally posted by: punam2712
lovely os though it was confusing in the beginning

Hi Thank you. Confusing?

Originally posted by: CookieMonster.
amazing one...Loved it alot

Originally posted by: preeti.1
brillian work .very well wriitten ..cant beliee u hae written first time

Hi Thank you. Still I am not a fine writier. I am trying to improve myself eventually.

Originally posted by: spoorthi28
Ok started reading it but I guess its a bit big one so... aaram se padenge!!N yes interesting concept!!Clap

Thank you. LOL it is too big to read? Ok i will keep that in a mind. next time i will try to make it short

Originally posted by: susm
Awesome n amazing one shot on MG. Continue to write OS n SS along with FF when ever u have time

Hi sushmitha, Thank you dear. I will try yaar. This OS took me to write a week to complete due to time constraint. uff I must finish one story at a time as MT is a ongoing long story..I musn't start new one unless i complete it one story at a time and yes now and then I can sqeeze OS in between. lol by the way thanks for the suggestion.

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
congo for new os n its amazing very different maaneet both r warewolf they love each other for geet safety maan faked his dead but geet loves him very much she couldnt move on finally they r together maaneet moments r so passionate loved the story very much

Thank you dear

Originally posted by: taahir004
Phenomenal OS
At first I was sad that Maan died but when Geet realized he is alive I was again glad .
Maan stayed away to protect her but once all the enemies were dead
together again Maan and Geet were

Thank you. usually I like happily ever after kind of stories and many like it too. but i wanna try something new..will post it asap

Originally posted by: samidsamid
awsm os...oh God u hd desrcibe...ech part so well...n evry sentence...thr ws llove pain longng respect...honesty...of maneet...maneet has bear too mmuch bt thy r agn wiith ech ithr...tss good thing that Geet forgv maan...and aan dnt be guilty its nt ur fault its ur love 4 geet whch holds u back to go to Geet...loved it

Hi thank you dear. I was scared of readers responses to this type of stories. ususally readers like family oriented and love stories but anyhow I tried. I will start new story with the same concept asap after finishing my other ongoing story Mangalyam Tantunanena.

Originally posted by: love2_soma
awesome story...
loved it very much...
thank u very much fr d lovely story...

Thank you dear.

Originally posted by: DAZZLINDD
GREAT ONE SHOT
I had this huge grin on my face when I started reading this... so this was the surprise u were speaking abt in the other page ??

Geet seeing Maan in her dreams ... saying her to move on Ouch
( For a sec ... I thot tht ... its going to be a sad one ... esp When Dev s name came up ,,,,, But when Mira came up ... I was back to my grinning mode Big smile)

So Maan was " Not " actually dead ... but was faking due to his fear for Geets safety and insecurity of his appearance post the treatment
but he couldnt resist when he sees Geet crying for him in her sleep ... n Ggives into his desires EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Which brings out the fact tht he s alive

arghh,... Kamini ... Angry

Geet gets the strength to fight when she sees her Mate in danger ... and kills Kamini but ends up getting injured badly
Loved how Geet took away Maan s insecurities... n now tht Kamini is also dead
Maneet happily everafter

Now thts what I call a PERFECT story Big smileBig smile

Now I ll be alert next time u say " SURPRISE " Wink

Yes I was speaking about this surprise only but now it looks like there is no surprise at all. And I had this huge grin seeing your super long comment.

LOL mujhe marna nahi hain readers ke hathon asie sad story likhungi tho. but I love dark stories too. I have written couple of sad endings on random characters. but its incomplete. I will see wheather I can change it into maaneet story.

Wow Thank you ...I can't stop grinning

I too hate kaamini

lol don't be coz I suck at giving surprises

Originally posted by: --mittu--
Superb os dear
congratson ur 1st os!!
I too love supernatural fics and maaneet in it...hayeee
plzz do write lost of stories

Thank you so much dear. I am and I will for sure dear.

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I heard a news/rumor that IF is closing down.

Is it true?

If yes, Please somebody confirm me. I don't have any blog or website to update my stories if IF is going to revamp.

You can reach me on FB

Jhaanvi

Edited by JaasChowdhray - 10 years ago

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

A very nice concept of love put to words wonderfully... love to have more of ur writings dear... u r very gud at it...⭐️

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

oh!

i forgot to comment properly

wonderful story altogether

after reading ur other work is very hard to believe that this one also urs!

matlab too good yaar!👏

intense n different!

aree haan about the length yaar that time my battery was low... i just sounded otherwise😛

n about the forum closing thing u didn't know it was a prank!😆

Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Wonderful story...
The scene at the beginning when Maan was cooking and telling her to move on, stole my heart away... So poignant...I was really sad thinking that he's dead...like really dead!!!
Maan stayed away for protecting her and hiding his battle scars!
But he should have let Geet make the choice...

They loved each other way too much.
She was 125 yrs old!
What was Maan's age?

Lovely story... The characterisations were good...
The concept was really interesting... This was my first story on a supernatural Maaneet.

The fight was superb.. All action packed..
I liked Geet a lot but she forgave him too easily... But the poor guy was really insecure and was worried about her safety...
And Love anyways squares up everything nicely...
Such a passionate and brilliant tale...

Geet forum is not closing... It was an April fool's prank.
Please keep on posting your maaneet stories dear.

Edited by pearl.white - 10 years ago

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Its awesome dear . luvd it :)

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JaasChowdhray

@JaasChowdhray

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: chiki143
A very nice concept of love put to words wonderfully... love to have more of ur writings dear... u r very gud at it...⭐️

Thank you so much dear. Awww I am swooning with your compliment. I will try my best 😛