Originally posted by: pearl.white
Wonderful story...
The scene at the beginning when Maan was cooking and telling her to move on, stole my heart away... So poignant...I was really sad thinking that he's dead...like really dead!!!
Maan stayed away for protecting her and hiding his battle scars!
But he should have let Geet make the choice...
They loved each other way too much.
She was 125 yrs old!
What was Maan's age?
Lovely story... The characterisations were good...
The concept was really interesting... This was my first story on a supernatural Maaneet.
The fight was superb.. All action packed..
I liked Geet a lot but she forgave him too easily... But the poor guy was really insecure and was worried about her safety...
And Love anyways squares up everything nicely...
Such a passionate and brilliant tale...
Geet forum is not closing... It was an April fool's prank.
Please keep on posting your maaneet stories dear.
Hi
Thank you for reading and liking it dear. actually the dream sequence was my own real experience ..I mean very first dream sequence 😆 😳 ..I just twisted it adding bit drama to it.
usually i write stories based on my own experiences in life and the situations I face with little spicing it according to maaneet.
I know the feeling what it feels like to lose someone you love more than yourself. And I also know its not easy to deal and live the life aftermath.
maan was already suffering from staying away from her and I didn't want him to suffer more by making geet punish him for his selflessness.
err maan is 130 years old? 😆 well how is that...
Hope I might come up with vampire maaneet story next time...😳
I didn't knew this story could actually get this much of appreciation. but thank you again. he always worries too much don;t he ? hmm let me make him suffer more next time .
yes Love always squares up in the end
yeah i was fooled terribly .. but i am relived now ..
I hope to write lots n lots of stories.. thank you so much dear for the comment
If you are interested in reading family oriented story ..you can check my other FF ..link in my signature. 😊
Edited by JaasChowdhray - 11 years ago
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