You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131)

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: muskeeter

really...😃

my exams are from 12th may...

thats pretty soon🤔

ok will try😊

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nishamna

@nishamna

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#822

Amazing.geet is getting used to of that environment. She take care of everyone's need. She entered in her room and got startled seeing so much shattered paper on their bed. geet helped maan to wrap up radha Krishna idol in gift wrapper. I guess it is for anchal. I don't know but my fear on anchal is litterally gone. I mean the way maan shows his cravings for geet, it shows his love for geet. Last part was amazing. Although maan had asked in a rude way but his intention was only to make geet comfortable with him. At first geet was reluctant to sleep hugging maan but after some time she also gets comfort in maan's arms. Waiting for next dear

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 10 years ago

#823

Awww that was cute.

loved it

cont soon

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#824

nice ud

its really grt one

geet maan relation r so confusing

geet still need space

but maan is a man he having

beautiful wife in his bed and he

can't touch her this is not easy

fr maan to control his desire but

he fallen in love with his wife so

he can't hurt her fr forcing him self

he wants her love to so to reduce

his insecurity he put condition of

hugging her she accept that and

maan was over moon after her

little confessions asshe address

her self Mrs.Khurrana

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#825

their talk was so cute and sweet

he is villager but not like them

how thinks their wife's as their

personal servant

and about aacnchl

we waiting wat u decide

i thinks she's geet friend

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full2puneri

@full2puneri

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#826

Wow... Update... Thanks a ton... Was feeling ticklish reading the last update looking at the way things were shaping between them... Now feeling... wow... Kya depict kiya hai unke characters ko... Nothing in excess... Subtle words splashed together to give a wondetful piece of writing.. Mera dil hawa mein udd raha hai... Waiting to see how maan and geet take it from here

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#827

beautiful part, maan try to make her comfortable with his closeness and touch.. waiting for next part

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Mamta-Maaneet

@Mamta-Maaneet

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#828

Thoda sa pyaar hua hai..thoda hai baaki.. 😳🤪

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#829

Originally posted by: mamta-salian
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai..thoda hai baaki.. 😳🤪

hum tho dill de hi chuke

phir bhi teri haan hai baaki🤣

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#830

This was beautiful part spoorty .yeh tho hona tha ,kabhie na kabhie maan ki man ki baat aani thi . Maan proposal to remove a little distance is vry appreciable.loved it .