Short Story - Dream a little dream [Last Chapter - P 34]

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

congrats on the new story! Fab update! superbly written! Maan used 2 stay as a tenant wit the Handas! update soon

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

I cannot only nod sagely and agree with Zarin(kaamchorni) and take a piggyback ride on her comment😆

As I was reading this dream all I could think to myself is 'how nostalgic'

Your dream has taken me far back to a past which might as well have been a dream

The glaze of time on the memories of yesteryear makes them seem as if it all happened to somebody else. Now reading this story throws many of those same memories into sharp relief.

If the past holds a stronger attraction then the present, time stands still even if the clock moves forward.

Such seems to be the case with Maan and Geet.

I am really really really looking forward to this story😃

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ramarora

@ramarora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

new story👏
lovely start...geet having a secret crush on maan😃
update soon😃

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979861

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Ms.Veil you know after reading your stories i feel like stealing your journal so that i can read anything and everything that you ve penned down but then what would i do with a journal without the one whose words create such effects
Is there a way that i can kidnap you???
But Princess september 's nightingale had stopped singing when it had been caged.
You ve a great control over writing to express so much in such afew words.
Keep writing!!

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

lovely part waiting 4 next n plz try to make a thread of all ur story really want to read ur all finished n on going story

Edited by Drashtilove - 10 years ago

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

lovely update great start to an interesting ss update soon dear

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

It's amazing story. I am reading your writing first time n am loving it. Geet is here for her friend's marriage preparation or rather to say for attending . She is sitting in her room and recalling all memories of her hometown. She received her mother's letter and reading it n along with recalling all those person whom she admire. The main person whom geet was missing is maan who was her first crush. N now they story will go a head as maan is also present in the same place as geet.

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

I think I should steal your journal for real now!! 😆

I know u are good at fiction but this ...

Ok coming to the update good one
Not best though!!

Waiting for the next! 😊

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Amazing. All three friends are spending time together as might be it is for the last time. Ashwini told about a guy who send her love letter but she ignored it as she hadn't that much strentgh to accept that person who is totally opposite from their parents liking. N geet also get lost in her thoughts about maan . she accepts that was teenager's attraction but I think it's above from that as she still think profoundly about him. Maan is standing behind geet. Is he also having same feelings for geet.Waiting for next dear