THE LOCKET REPOSTED (3) Ch 59-62, p 118 , new thd link pg 1 *****

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vandana73

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Chapter 42

As your FF is progressing I am time and again amazed at Tara's character !! The pain and labour you must have through to develop her character sometimes leaves me speechless. I think that this had to be one of the most thought out and difficult part of your writings..

Suraj is such a ass####.and people like Brij do not think twice about selling somebody for their own personal gain.

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MC092126

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Part 41
Nice update hate pink Bhabhi she is so rude felt very bad for geet but the love the way maan explainher superb love the maan relation it so pure

Part 42
Loved the update it so sad for tara the pain she went through is sad but I loved the Tara character she is goin through so much pain but she is so strong but felt happy also that she accepted that she love dev I hate Brij it so cruel

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honeygrape

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

part 2:

i dont feel like am reading it for the second time...that is why i asked you whether you rewrote them...

Beqaraar dil, i remember hearing this song from this part...beautiful lyrics...guess most of the old songs have got very meaningful lyrics...many of them make me cry...

Maan n his mom shared a very lovely bond...

what a wonderful first meeting for Dev n his istar😆😆

Part 4:

awww geets pov ...she is soo innocent...guess in all your stories geet is naive and maan is naughty...with each story her jhalliness is increasing and his shararat is growing😆

part 5

maans pov...

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

chapter 36

really our wish also granted in this part..

loved the maaneet moments ..very romantic,soothing...and mesmerizing...

how well u have displayed the feelings of Maan ,during the theater scene..!!!👏👏

all the scenes just streched in front of my eyes and i watched it delightfully...thank u so much..

i just can't stop loving this couple more and more..

MSK's self talk and one on one fight and scoring between maan and salmaan was hilarious..🤣

first i didn't like the way geet showed interest in salmaan over maan..i was really sulking reading that part..but finally while geet thinking...

"Salman, who Salman? In all the tingling that I am feeling, all the butterflies in my stomach and all the blood flowing fast and furious in my heart, it's only Maan. "

omg what an amazing lines...i was like jumping over moon...u r too good avi,never let ur readers to sulk..

thank u dear..for giving such a feel good chapter...

about kabir and mega..

i have become fond of them too..off late it has turned out like that i would fall in love with any pair ,when its coming from ur writing...

u have that commendable skill in ur writing...

i think this the first maaneet story ,of the stories i have read i am liking the pair whom doesn't have the name tag of MG..

first dev and tara,now kabir and mega..

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kalabhas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

chapter 37

first date is so nice and entertaining it has all aspects such as love,humor,fun,thrill ..and finally the patriotism i never expected at that point..but ur words are so ture about our unity in diversity..

feeling proud to be an Indian..

and coming back to the first date...

loved the way maan got possessive and jealous over other men drooling his angel..

and the chocolate part was too funny..maan grumbling about the small kid getting kiss ..😆😆

and the price list of the dishes is very true..i too felt the same way as geet,while i first went to the restaurant of a metropolitan..after switching from my home town..really metros are too

expensive..😲

geet wiping maan's lips..and both their mind voices were too good...😳😳

really geet was giving such a bad time to maan and testing his self control...😃

the whole dhaba scene was very well portrayed and it turned out well ,better than the original version..

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kalabhas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

chapter 38

omg!

another dream...😆😆😆

i think more than reality maaneet's love blossoms more in their dreams...😆😆

the first seed of seed of indifference had been rooted in geet's innocent heart..while she came to know about MSK..

her confusions and withdrawal can be understood well...

i too wondered how maan is going to resolve this puzzle...

but there comes my ma(a)n...with such a cute and lovely words of explanation..

" It is not a question of what I chose sometimes the choices are already made for us".

how convincing yet truthful words...

can't stop admiring ur dialogues once more..

and kair and mega part was too good..

however tried kabir can't forget mega ..poor him..he has to pay for his father's sin..

some of his dialogues were really very touchy and i tempted to read it again and again..

"Each time I lose my temper I can see my face erasing in the mirror and I feel myself becoming more and more like him, the man I have begun to hate, my father. "

this line affected me the most..how much he would have been hurt that he even loath himself..i really feel very sorry for what he had been undergone because of his ruthless father..if one's family is broken,then everything is ruined for the person and he becomes worthless in the society...kabir is the best example for that..

hope in present he would be in a better position...

i too want to know more about mega,will wait until u reveal it..

and the silent transmission of love and care between K and M was so poetic...😳

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kalabhas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

chapter 39

very emotional part...

finally tara maintained her silence once again..and turned down dev's offer of lending helping hand..

she was doing it for his own good..but still while she was hurting dev in the worst way ,i felt very sad for dev..

our charming,ever smiling,and naughty dev was gone ..and this serious dev i don't like..

i want my funny dev again...😭

the highlight of the part is conversation between Dev and Geet..

it was very pleasant to read...

the comfort level they share and the concern for each other was very well displayed..

i liked their bonding ..

while geet talking about her untold love of maan ..my eyes pooled with tears...

especailly

""Pyaar kya hota hai, I am not sure. Maine bharosa kiya hai. Vishwaas kiya hai. For me that is what love is. Someone who is always there for me, with me at every step in life. For me there would be no one but him ever."

i got so emotional reading these lines...u have brought out the emotions so well through ur words..incredible avi..i have read each and every line slowly and time to time dwelling in those words and cherished it fully..

thanks for giving that nice feel..

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

chapter 40

oh god...😲

what maan is thinking about geettt...????

definitely there must be a big misunderstanding...

pls maan don't change ur personality..i love the unconditional ,innocent and passionate lover boy ...

not the MSK type arrogant version of maan...😭

waiting eagerly for the present...

and finally when sameera comes in..i was like... no not again...

thank god u gave a note at the end...otherwise i would have gone wild by now..😡😡

pls don't make any place for sameera in maan's heart...his heart,body and soul all belongs to only geet..tell sameera that maan is sold out...😆😆

(pls don't think that i am intruding in writers liberty ..i am just expressing my feelings here..u write as u feel like..i have full faith in u avi..i know u won't disappoint us...😊)

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custodian75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Part38

Earlier it was Maan and now even Geet is suffering from this dream syndrome.

Geet does not yet know the full truth of Maan. If she realises who he is then as Maan knows she will run at full speed in the opposite direction.

Kabir fears that he is just like his father and will abuse megha. Little does he know that if he was even a bit like his father, he would not have take care of his mother nor worried about megha.

In a way Kabir is more like Maan. The moment he comes to know that megha is fasting his first reaction is anger because she is hurting herself.

Kabir feeds her but does not eat himself even when he is hungry. That scene left me in tears.

Like the way Maan answers Geet, addressing her fears without letting the cat out of the bag.