MG~ FF~The Jinx ~ THREAD- 14 ~ UPDATED - Epilogue Pg 107/ 14th Ma - Page 63

Wat???????? dis was last part 😭
am gonna miss dis story A lot from..tomorrow...
u giving daily updt...was d +point of dis story...
i had loved dis story of ursss very..
very much...
Torment is my fav story ...
nd now dis tooo...

Had loved dis Geet who was strong...who sacrified everything.. yet was strong .nd made herself capable to stand proudly in front of all...

D way she had struggled...d way she faced maan...her quiteness .for his families happiness..yet d way..she
felt lonliness her helplessness.. her fear...as a mother ...was all penned beautifully...


Had hated Maan a lot at start for d crimee deed..sin he had did...to her...i wanted him to suck all his life...
bt den again ...his redemption ..part was so beautifully explained...his care...his helplessness.. his plead for punishment...
aww..jus fell in lov wit dis Maan again...


nd Manu ka kya kehna...cutiepie was always cherrie in d cake...
loved his cute talks...nah!!!!!! qns🤣

yash was d best dad been showed...he handled all d situations...wit ease...
every charater was justified in its own unique way...

Tho i wanted to see Sam nd Dev suking for der deed..bt
no problemmm...kuch cheezay bahar na aaya hua hi acha hai...


comming to last part...
Ishhh!!!!!!!! der romance passion nd naughtiness was at peak...yet loved der togetherness...
dat was a bliss...nd den family rituals...
der talk...
His desire to live those missed fatherhood...der promise to b together wss all lovly
lovly
lovly...

Der am sad it is last part...
is story ki aadat ho gayi hai...
har subah...pehle...yeah her raat sone say pehle...its ur story i end or start wit ...

see now also...its 3.30in morning...nd am reading ur story...
now Gn...lemmme..sleep..HeHeHe!!!!!!!!

Waiting for Epilogue ...

very long and beautiful update all is well in end happy honeymoon to maneet and god bless them and give lots and lots of happiness in their married life dudo nao and puto falo god bless u.

nice update feeling sad coz it is finished now time for new story

Wow... We are already at the end... Will miss looking for updates from your side every day...

Awesome part simply awes4 par epi inni jaldi :(

awesome updates
loved it
sorry i was unable to comment from one week has i was reading through my mobile
good job dear
given justice to all the characters
thank you very much for updates👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Thank u for the PM.

Superb update

awsem maneet happy in there life