Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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tabby999

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i want this maan ...oh god please

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😃 read all d parts in a go ...

love every part ...❤️

very well written 👏

thanks for d beautiful FF ...🤗

love d Epi..

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beautiful story...

eternal love ...

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WOW!! brilliant ending dear...loved it

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thats truely beautiful n most romantic epi loved it

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Wonderful and beautiful story. I really enjoy it. Geet was so much sensitive and introvert. She used to keep her pain to herself and used to her hurt herself whenever she got hurt. It as maan who comes in her life like a soothing warmness of sun in winters.hoa their relation bloomed with time but one misunderstanding of geet made them apart. But still the love , passion and intensity was there for each other. After many year when they.again met and cleared all misunderstanding and their beautiful consumation really made me feel anxiety. It was indeed a treat to read such a wonderful story.

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tabby999

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Hi Nishaji ...

just loved the update ..

epilogue was superb ..never imagine love can be so beautifully described ...it was a beautiful update ..

the beauty lies the way maan convinced geet to loosen up ..fulfill all her desires holding up the person you love the most ..their moments were sensuous explaining their cravings for each other..their longingness ended and they become one ..

i like the way u showed mishika...totally copy of geet ..she understand desires and wants of her mom ..she want maan to hug them up so that geet can have some relief ...that was so heart touching ..

last line by mishika ...papa i still want to know who is parijaat ..that was hilarious ...

thank u for lovely update ..it was absolutely different from all the stories epilogues i have read till now

thank u

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Sharmeen

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Originally posted by: Susegad

Oh my god Nisha ji 😳
I love u yaara 😃

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Sharmeen

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What a beautiful ending if this beautiful story 😃
Loved their moments.. ahh loved the way Maan made her understand His need to love 😳
Beautiful 😳 😉
And last but not the least.. the epilogue ❤️
That cute girl took my heart 😃
Waise how old was she? Mishika 😳
Let's open my gift tomorrow papa. I missed you papa, but papa mamma also missed you very much. I saw her hugging your photograph last night. She only does that when she really really misses you, you know. We were all supposed to sleep at Nani's place tonight, but I thought mamma wouldn't miss you so much if we were all sleeping with her. Papa can we include mamma in the hug right now. Coz I know mamma is waiting for her hug too."
My my 😳 😃
Exact replica of his wife True 👏
Will miss this story

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