Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#531

superb epi Nisha

Both parts of epilogues were of different emotions

The first one was so well written

I felt it hot even if you did chose very decent description of love making..

Maan had a lot of patience to bring the natural and original Geet out of the Geet which was under the shell of fear

Maan showed her that she was the only woman who was made for him..He brought the confidence back in her to speak her emotions to him..

and The parijaat finally blossomed

and in second part..

saw Maan's sweet family

Mishika..Their daughter who was replika of her mother..

whose heart was filled with love for iohers

and their impatient and cute son Ravi..

Loved both of them...

I wish their life to be filled with the fragrance of Prijaat...

Thanks for the wonderful story

I think I did not comment ob your last update..

Koi na ab karungi bhi nahin..

issi se kaam chala lo😆

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#532

Absolutely Beautiful

Maan and Geet also has two kids now and Maan still calls Geet as Parijat while his daughter wants to know if missed the flowers more than his family

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#533

lovable finish with an adorable epi...waiting fr da nxt one frm u...loved da last line of da epi...

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#534

Fabulous update and lovely epilogue

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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#535

Beyond imagination
No words or remarks can justice to the fabulous work you have presented
As the theme "Jhooti Mangetar"
You have weaved the story highlighting both the characters so beautifully that from the first to the last I never wanted to stop reading
Though I could finish it by two days
Still can feel the sensations
As though the same is happening with me.

Again fantastic amazing work
And I want to thank Avi again for posting the link
Please continue giving as the chance to read your excellent work
Always waiting
😊

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hellgirl

@hellgirl

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#536

loved it...
i was waiting for this so much...
awesome work dear...

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#537

such beautiful and touching story...beautiful ending and epi to a beautiful story

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#538

That was one hell of a passionate update. I enjoyed it. You wrote it so beautifully.

Epilogue was perfect as well. Loved the names they kept for their children. Mishika is a sweetheart.

-Sanjana!

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#539

Loved it so much cannot believe this is your first story, so soft so beautiful and so different... Loved all the parts and was waiting for epilogue. Beautifully written and one can notice the effort you put in writing it... It portrays the passion they have fore each other, the love that they have for each other without it getting vulgar or disgusting... The banners was beautiful love those flowers ..

Write a new story soon and add me to the pm list once you start and share...

Thnx