Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016 - Page 32

Reserved for second part

maaneets'a dramatic entry n so many types of emotions on everyon's face...

maaneet's mothets n dadaji dadima are too happy...maan's father irritated with maan's parijat connection...

maan's family srama is so cute but poor maan is trriatated with all drama...

lol maan father was jealous with the one who will be geet's fil!!!!

all are happy and wanted to get 2 marriages at a time...

but maan being maan he wants his special day only for him...

geet's actions spove her possessiveness...

sefali in her over excitment told geet all maan did in past few years...

rano told geet is not more withdrawn in herself after she leartns she is adopted...maan is shocked to here this...so that was the day geet cameto him for mental support n confuses shefali with parijat...

geet's mom knew onle maan can bring back the geet who was there 5 years back...

now waiting to see what maan do to break the wall which geet built from such a long time...

will read once i get to my lappy. Eeeppp am excited

Now this qualifies for a Bloody Brilliant😆

I read it on Thursday and today is Sunday... and I still can't form words to describe what I feel reading this update... saying it update is not correct, I should say this Intimate confrontation which you made me witness while I read this beautiful story. It felt like I'm a person who's peeping in the room Where Paarijat and her Adorer are coming face to face with their long held desires. I felt I'm invading someone's private moments ... but not even once can will myself to look away as I was so engrossed looking at things enfolding. Lovely description and flow Nishaji.👏 All your stories are very light and bring a smile on my face... yes they all do tackle grave topics too and your story telling is quite unique... but yet This Paarijat... oh my You've cast a spell on me with this one. Loved the story telling here... So different yet so passionate and holds a desperate plea in it. 👏👏

The start was so intimate yet so fulfilling ... it was feverish and quite a culmination to everything pent up within 2 restless souls. Indeed it felt a dreamy reality. Right from the sprinkling of the flowers to the replacing passion ... awesome. 😳

The back story was a journey of sorts and revealed so much.

I specially loved the way you in two different ways demonstrated their own nature... one who absorbs all her pain within and who is willing to torture herself but never hurt the other person but yet opens up in full bloom only to one person ... her saviour her guardian and her soother... her answer to all unsaid prayers and sorrows. While the other nature of the hard core person who is so absorbed in her that nothing else is reflected in him other than his external mask of indifference... he helps her open up to him while he himself closes out all others and finds his greatest achievement on being her comforter. and helps her bloom even when she herself pushes self into darkness...

They are contrast personalities and yet only they can mingle well and transform each other into fullness and colours of life.

She is his Paarijat ... he met her underneath that tree and their love blossomed there ... so who else can be his love "Paarijat"than her... and how can he call anyone the symbol or synonym of her name other than her. He has always felt possiveness over her and all his emotions are only for her.

Loved that gist he has written in answer to the poem ... something he treasures and wants to share only with her as it's his dark desires for her .. and wanted only to reveal to her as he knows she blossoms in darkness and can't bear sunlight ... and only she can shelter his desires within her and never let other's light touch it. What angered and hurt him must be that she went and did the opposite of what he always felt she would see through his unsaid emotions and absorb within her, but then her only identity was in question that day, she was facing the harsh light of adoption which never anyone made her feel, how could she rationally figure out what would happen... she was left orphaned that day just felt it and then comes this blow where she herself was blinded with rage and feeling of loss from all sides... and wanting to prove the right that she belongs somewhere even if it meant sacrifice.

Lovely one Nishaji ... and the end was like cherry on the top... relived Geet days. I'm stopping now or else won't finish typing anything 😆

Will comment on the next part soon.

Who ever said Geet was a shy and timid girl? The way she staked her claim on her man (even if it was evident and obvious only to him) showed that she is anything but shy or timid. All other girls, watch out. This Ma(a)n is taken 😆

Maan has always been an outspoken and straight forward guy when it comes to anyone else but her. So, it didn;t come as a surprise that he out rightly rejected the idea of all of them getting married the same day. This day was going to be special only for the 2 of them. How thoughtful and romantic... aaj kal kaha milte hai aise ladke

The entire family was amazing. Be it dad Khurana's acceptance, or dadi's happiness, Shef's excitement, everything. But the interaction between Rano and Maan was something else. The silent agony of that mother was so evident in just those few sentences of hers, and her knowledge that Maan is the way to her daughter's heart... that was "Bloody Brilliant"

In all, very nicely done 👏. Waiting for the conclusive part now.

Hayee very sweet... 😳 I'm in love actually I'm in love with the feeling you have made me go through while reading their love for each other.

Chapter 1 was about his desires and her sacrifice... whereas chapter 2 was about her madness and his care and grooming his done to cherish and nurture her into his "Paarijat".

How beautiful her heart is that she finds culmination only in him. What is more beautiful is how he has treasured and understood each of her acts and unsaid emotions ... he not only adores her but is the only one who can love her the way she deserves and is worthy of ... something that even she isn't aware of he can read in the deep recesses and cracks within her soul...😊

Loved how he recited and made her and him both go through their journey of madness, bonding and possessiveness. I guess seeing her profile being uploaded for marriage just caused the dam to break open... how can he even summarise her feelings for him or his admiration and love for her... I guess these words like love and passion can't hold a candle towards what they feel for each other.

Even when he kept asking about some imaginary person she would claim to be hers he never mentioned about "Love" but "Care" he never mentioned about "Mingling with her as her own soul" but about "understanding" ... as how could he use love or her soul for anyone lese other than him... he can't even imagine it then how would he make her understand that with mere words. Loved the whole play of emotions and words 👏

The song and her accompanying emotions and words on that piece of paper wrapped in his gifted cloth was wonderful.

Loved the progress form passion to claim her as his in the start in response to the rage he felt of her ever being claimed by somebody else just knowing about her uploaded profile to the sweet peck of love caused by her acceptance to his proposal to the passionate bite when she wakes up to turn her dreams into reality in the morning light ... to her blurting out her true felt emotions behind the bathroom door to his trying to break the door 😆 ... and finally him shedding the drop of tear seeing her deewanapan to her being carried and cocooned in his embrace where he will shelter her form the light she holds within her to spread to others but always keeps self in darkness... as now he won't let her wither away from the li9ght but help her walk in the light with himself to preserve her. 👏

But Nishaji as lovely this story is... Is till have long held doubt, do such people exist and do such strong emotions and feelings felt for real??? or IS it only in recollected and retold stories they find existence... to hard to imagine the reality as such.

Now Next part 😉