Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant ... Absolutely wonderful...
My God... Geet loves him unconditionally- She actually immersed the idols, brought every dish, and added every likeable song in his collection. And she did so only for HIM.
And still our greatest MAAN KHURANA was doubtful of her love for all these years.
This is the limit, I mean he knew everything, understood the deepest aspect of her nature and still hid behind the facade of his ego!!! He should have confessed his love long ago...
Okay, I know I am being too harsh on him, he had his own insecurities and issues and Geet is really frustating.

Now what do I say about Geet... She is too stubborn in her belief that Maan does not love her that she is not paying any attention to hos words. Short of directly saying he loves her, he has already said everything, bared all hos feelings.
She is infuriatingly crazy and endearingly so!!!

Maan loves her with such intensity, his words literally ignite one's soul

The characters you have created are so honest and true to themselves!!!
Even though I sometimes want to bang their heads into the wall for their stubborness, they touch the chords of my heart. I yearn for a love like Maan, I wish to love like Geet.

Both are simply unbeleivable, do such people whose love is so limitless , actually exist???

I have one small request, please show some more intensity of Maan's love...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant ... Absolutely wonderful...
My God... Geet loves him unconditionally- She actually immersed the idols, brought every dish, and added every likeable song in his collection. And she did so only for HIM.
And still our greatest MAAN KHURANA was doubtful of her love for all these years.
This is the limit, I mean he knew everything, understood the deepest aspect of her nature and still hid behind the facade of his ego!!! He should have confessed his love long ago...
Okay, I know I am being too harsh on him, he had his own insecurities and issues and Geet is really frustating.

Now what do I say about Geet... She is too stubborn in her belief that Maan does not love her that she is not paying any attention to hos words. Short of directly saying he loves her, he has already said everything, bared all hos feelings.
She is infuriatingly crazy and endearingly so!!!

Maan loves her with such intensity, his words literally ignite one's soul

The characters you have created are so honest and true to themselves!!!
Even though I sometimes want to bang their heads into the wall for their stubborness, they touch the chords of my heart. I yearn for a love like Maan, I wish to love like Geet.

Both are simply unbeleivable, do such people whose love is so limitless , actually exist???

I have one small request, please show some more intensity of Maan's love...

Not that he loves her any less, or maybe I am misunderstamding, but his love is bound by ego. Though the girl never gave him a chance but according to me he should have made more of an effort and should have come upfront with his feelings... He simply should not have stayed away for 5 damn years. And I understand that is the vulnerability of Maan and I am again contradicting myself but guess this os life...

Sorry for my long rant...

You are a really talented writer, please provide a link for your other ff, os, s.
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!! just outstanding dear...can't explain how much I love this particular story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh my god what a marvellous update nisha.👏kitna kisses doon tujhe. maar daala re iss update se hayee mein thud.😳
yeh geet itni jhalli kaisi hai. itna detail se maan ne sab kuch kehraha tha phir bhi wo uske pyaar ko nahi samajh paarahi hai. jo insecurities hai uske mann mein is not allowing her to hear any thing, just mind blowing how u wrote about maan's emotional talk starting from their childhood days how geet used to do everything for maan.oh god yeh maan se jyaada pyaar karthi hai.par kya karein uski mu never made her to confess her love and maan because of his fat ego never tried to confess his love.finally maan ko akal aahi gayi hai. kya khoob apne baaton se geet ko fake mangetaar banne keliye raazi kardiya. Now this time he is not going to loose geet and now he started fighting for his love. jab usko yeh patha chalgaya ki geet loves him unconditionally from childhood.
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update...
maan understand geet so well...
he describes geet in such a beautiful way...
maan geet ko sidhe se bhi to bata sakta tha but nahi use gol gol ghumana jo hai...
maan ko to finally geet k dil ki baat pata chal gayi but jhalli geet ko kab pata chalegi???
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful part.. geet accepted for engagement.. maan comes to know her feelings.. waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous Shot maara Nisha ji 😳 👏 👏
Awww Geet all the time loved him so much awww dreamy
Loved the way Maan tells her all the stories of their past 😳
Jhalli Geet.. still no clue abt Maan's feelin 😲
DHAKKAN GEET thought Maan loved shef
Now He saw that saree n note/poem written by Geet... haaye WAITING for next shot 😉
Eagerly WAITINGGG 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely research by Ratna. Thanks I did not know this at all.


Tabby wonderful poetry 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
another beautiful update👏. OMG geet cross all limits of dumbness.😡She still can't able to understand maans true feeling for her.Thak god maan atleat sensible enough too stop this game. I love the way u described maans feeling for geet when he got to know about matrimony fisco. more than love his fear too lose her make him desperate to make geet his.I m feeling bad for geet but I guess she is the only one who chooses this pain.her small misunderstanding make both maaneet suffer for years.I m happy maan finally decide to end this game of pretense.It will hurt geet further but u know U stopped in very wrong place pls continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was beautiful ❤️ loved the entire feeling expressed by Maan how Geet is and how caring her life partner should be
simply amazing👏

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