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Posted: 10 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

CL11 and CL12 I have the same response...

I liked comedy initially but now it is the same thing...romance...I am not sure I would like the romance inthis story considering Maan k dimaag ka romance...I liked it more before the leap...and few chapters after the leap...
khair it is your story...it is a good thing to explore different genres...
But will read the next chapter...maybe I will in the right mood to get it...

@bold: Yes.

I am bored of writing romance for 2 years non stop.

I can't force myself to write it

It will come after 2 more chapters but like I said I can't force it.

There has to be a flow for it to work.

The characters are divergent right now

A catalyst has to change them to see each other properly and actually fall in love.

I don't know it if makes sense but somehow that's what I am trying to do

Looks like I am not doing an adequate job right now

Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

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shree2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#842

Nice teaser...

Geet went home to meet her would-be groom... poor maan what he will do now...

Dev yet to get premission from his mother... Waiting for tara's plan inorder to confess their love to dev's mom...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#843

Lovely update. I will go with your choice.

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Micky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#844

update was awesome

maans proposal was really a misal

geet never thinks positively she made a joke of proposal thing more about tv serials

loved this

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namita25

@namita25

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#845

Chapter 12
So Maan finally proposed Geet...
but Geet being Geet didn't get it...she should give up watching TV serials...poor Maan...it's gonna be an uphill task for Maan to convince Geet that he loves her...Dev scared to confess hos love for Tara to his mom...darpok kahin ka...can't wait for the next part...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#846

Fabulous part.

Thanks for sending me passwords.

Now i will read updates with the flow.

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11j25sam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#847

maan ka kuch nhi hosakta. banda is full of himself. he thinks any girl will fall for him. but geet is not any girl

geet ka bhi kuch nhi hosakta. hotty maan ko chodkar woh daily soaps k duppata scenes per pyaar barsa rhi hai

very bad. continue soon

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#848

Originally posted by: dqno1
Bolo😲

Sharm jaha koso dur hai uska naam Sharmeen😆

Uss hisaab se mera naam kya hona chahiye😆

Ye sarasar ghalat fehmi hai aapki.. mujhse zyada shy koi nhi tha ghar me.. waqt ke sath sab badal jata hai 😉😆
Main bhi badal gai Sharmili se Besharam 🤣

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: dqno1

@bold: Yes.

I am bored of writing romance for 2 years non stop.

I can't force myself to write it

It will come after 2 more chapters but like I said I can't force it.

There has to be a flow for it to work.

The characters are divergent right now

A catalyst has to change them to see each other properly and actually fall in love.

I don't know it if makes sense but somehow that's what I am trying to do

Looks like I am not doing an adequate job right now