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CHURA LIYA HAI TUMNE JO DIL KO (3), new thread link pg 1 ******

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Thanks Lakshmi for this fabulous banner

A small story that was inspired by my friends Lakshmi and Priya and theiir Dil se thread

Do read the OS's there as well as admire the VMs, bannersand siggies created

Updates will be based on your interest

Except the first one, all chapters will be on my blog.

FOR THOSE WHO HAVE NOT READ MY WORK:

I post my chapters on my blog. Links will be posted here for each chapter and I will PM a separate password per chapter. All comments should be on IF.

If there are no comments, I will assume that you are not interested in reading further.

NO COMMENT, NO ACCESS, NO EXCEPTIONS!

I have lost a lot of good writers due to people who are silent readers. I miss them and their stories.

I have decided that no silent readers will get to read my work. I have been called a bi*** and Hi*ler for my rules but if I am writing and spending time to make you happy, I deserve a proper response.

Na main beg karti hu na demand.

Rule hai! Take it or leave it.

PLEASE POST A COMMENT HERE IF YOU WANT TO READ MORE

Thanks!

Avi

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INDEX

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

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Thank you readers for the likes and comments

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Sahiba

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Posted: 10 years ago

congrats...

welcome all to the new thread..

beautiful story!!!

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libros

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Posted: 10 years ago

new thread...new update ??😉

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Ameera.

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Congratulations on the new thread.

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Originally posted by: libros
new thread...new update ??😉

update is not ready but maybe a teaser? chotu wala😃

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Originally posted by: dqno1

update is not ready but maybe a teaser? chotu wala😃

😃 chalega woh bhi chalega😃

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TEASER

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There is silence for a minute or two and then BBB roars as he throws Adi out of the office.

Oh my gosh! What is this man's problem?

This BBB is such a tyrant!!

Poor Adi dear.

I nod towards him to come to my cabin but BBB calls me to his cabin and I have to go there.

I hate BBB!

Pyar ka dushman!

I spray myself with the antiseptic spray and put a hanky over my mouth as I enter the tyrant's cabin.

Bababji! Please bacha lena apni bacchi ko!

God knows how many illnesses this man has.

The way he shouts at everyone and talks loudly, I am convinced he is deaf.

I clear my throat. Oh God, now I have to talk loudly to him too?

***

Was it an illusion or was she smiling at Adi and giving him the glances that were meant for me?

I look at Adi in shock and he naughtily wonders if Geet has cross eyes.

I was wondering the same thing but Adi saying it made me erupt angrily at him.

Adi is no less. In front of the whole office he gives me respect and calls me Sir but when we are alone he is back to being his naughty self.

"Ja raha hu main Maan. Dost dost na raha", he says as he leaves making a pouty face and sad eyes in Geet's direction making her give him a melty expression.

Kamina Adi!

He is enjoying this too much. I promise to beat the heck out of him if he does not leave right now. He is paying me back for the teasing about Pinky and him.

He giggles like a school girl as he leaves.

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BBB is pacing around like a wild lion as I enter the cabin.

Tsk! Tsk! So many illnesses at such a young age, of course he is frustrated and angry. I am angry about him yelling at dear Adi but I feel sad for him too.

It must be tough being almost deaf.

When he just continues pacing in anger, I speak loudly and clearly so that he can hear me, "S-I-R, MUJHE BULAYA?"

He seems to startle at my loud voice.

He is walking towards me with quick steps.

My steps backward stop as I feel the wall touch my back. My heart beats are out of control.

This is more than acidity I am sure.

I am definitely allergic to him.

I close my eyes tightly as he puts both hands on either side of my head.

"Kya kaha tum ne?" he growls menacingly.

His warm breath is over my face and I am losing all coherent thoughts.

I swallow wondering whether I should tell him that I have seen Dostana? I mean everyone has heard of Karan Johar, right?

A/N: Puzzled? Good. Update will be Friday at the earliest unless I feel that you guys are eagerly waiting.😃