CHURA LIYA HAI TUMNE JO DIL KO (3), new thread link pg 1 ******

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sasi

@ksasi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Interesting part.

Waiting to wat all other misconceptions will get come up with in the next part.

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Resing for now.

Having exams till 14th March, but Im reading updates whenever I take break from studies. Will read and comment soon. Thanks for the PM.

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Geet said she has to talk loudly to him too.. Iska matlab koi aur bhi hai jisko sunne mei problem hoti hai? Darji?

Oh god I cant wait to know Maan's reaction when he comes to know the actual reason behind Geet's "shyness". Lol.

Adi had a gala time at Maan's expense, laughing at him seeing Geet not ready to believe that the gifts could be given by Maan. Poor Maan. One thing is for sure, I feel the more he wants to rush the things now ahem ahem having his way with her, in future he will learn to be patient. Tab tak he can enjoy being in a la la land.

Omfg, Maan's badla on Adi had me rofling. Such awesome bond they share. Adi had fun at Maan's expense ab Maan ki baari.

Body dikhani thi tab bhi he was so full of himself. His thoughts about she cant handle his hotness ki dukaan had me rolling my eyes. But what followed next had my eyes popping out. Manish-a. Oohhh eemmm geee. 🤣 🤣 Plus Geet "carry on" was like icing on the cake. Aww poor Maan. Pehle hi she thinks he is illness ki dukaan ab toh gay bhi samajhne lagegi. All thanks to Kjo's Dostana. 😆

Uppar se his fake fiancee drama would also make sense to her which she forgot to add to her list which makes him Kjo of the office. 😛

You stopped at a wrong time Avi. But damn update was hilarious. Specially the Manish-a part. Your updates are like stress buster. Im loving and enjoying it a lot. You are best when it comes to romance aur ab comedy mei bhi you are rocking.

-Sanjana!

Edited by BrainEaterOwl - 10 years ago

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl
Resing for now.

Having exams till 14th March, but Im reading updates whenever I take break from studies. Will read and comment soon. Thanks for the PM.

-Sanjana!

All the best for your exams Sanjana.😃

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Tanzy10

@tanzy10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Lovely update lagta hai maan abhi achhe se plan banayega jhalli princess ko patane keliye

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Thanks for posting the link for Paarijat on your thread Avi🤗

Ch 9

Thanks for the due warning Avi. I am keeping myself away from all kitchen slabs, heights and sharp objects while reading this story😆

Yeh dosti hum nahi chodenge, todenge tere daant magar tera saath na chodenge

Love the Adi- Maan bonding. This is actually how males co-relate to each other...name calling and leg pulling😆

I was cringing even as I was giggling away waiting for the body exposition plan of Maan's to fail and oh boy, what a man-ish failure🤣

But i love how all the failed plans only make him more aggressive.

Ladka toh kudi ko apna banake hi chodega by hook or crook.

It is the hook or crook part that we are eagerly waiting for😆

Avi you have proven yourself to be an all rounder in writing with this story.

Your comic timing is perfect😆

Hats off to you👏

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Super update

😆 😆 😆

Bechara Maan has no clue Jhalli ke dimaag mein kya chaling🤢

Geet wrong number laga rahi hai

But Maan made sure the Adi ki dhulaai ho😆

Pinky bechari MSK ke plan ka shikaar ban gayi😉

Geet taking all precautions to keep safe from his infections

But what she doesn't know that no one can resist the MSK charm

Lets see the MSK in making!

So Manishaaa is here🤣

Maan ki izzat khatre mein😉😆

Aur Geet dostana bana ni lagi😲

Defo a wrong stop😡

Update soon but knowing I know tu hamaare armaano par thanda paani dal ne ki planning karing😒

Thanks for the lovely update

🤗

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namita25

@namita25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Part 9
Ohhh my my...Maan plan to patao Geet by showing his body went down the drain...credit goes to Manish-aaa...n now she thinks he is the Karan Johar of the office...
Maan beta ..it won't be an easy task for you to woo Geet as our kudi is different...
Geet is not ready to believe that it's who sent gifts for her ...
loved the precap...
waiting for the next part...