~MAGICAL RIDE~NEW MG STORY~CHAPTER 5 posted@38 on 9.3.15

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

A Wizardly Update

Maan finally meets his wifey but he too had to experience her magic tricks ...poor guy was actually bouncing
seems now that Geet's father had found out that Maan is there he has trapped Maan , Geet and Sanaya

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

fab update! Well written! Thanks 4 da pm 4 Part 2 bt commented already! saw u updated! Js read part 3 nw! Sanaya changes his appearance! Maan meets Geet! she is happy he came 4 her bt she is also upset tht he believes she will marry dev! Maan explains! Sanaya interrupts n teases them! Maan realises they knw wt he is thinking! Get;s dad sees him n traps him! update soon

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pixelflower620

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

nice update
cont soon
thnx fr d pm

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Wow lovely omg omg superb emotional update..te way my maan ki entry in magical world and sanaya ki excitement to se her jiju and taking him to his geet for tat she doing some magical to hide him and reading hsi mind voice was lovely cute..te way my maan seeing his angel ki room and how she have being living was lovely..opps my maan seeing his angel who sleeping taking his sleep was lovelyy..opps my maan is flying in air coz of his geet omg maan, me laughing he he he..te way geet ki happiness seeing my maan came for her and they hug and kiss was lovely touchy emotional..te way my maan ki words opps sherni got angry and made my maan to hang in air and she enjoying her pizza maan babu better next time try to control ur tongue or ur geet will cut it he he he..opps both friends teasing my maan was lovely..opsp now everyone got struck, how will they escape..i love te update so much yar..lovely edi

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Its totally dreamy update !! Those cars speeding in air and that castle woaah !!! njoying this story !! sanaya's pic too goood maahn !! Thanks for pm

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jasika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

amazing update
waiting for next update

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Vinsh23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

woww.. wat a magical update.. :)
sanaya ne aisa kya transfrm kia tha maan ko dat evrybdy was giving him,weird. looks. 😆

finally maaneet reunion.. :)
awww geet ka room acc to her mood apna env chnge krta h .. dats intrestng :)).
geet's father trapped them :(
ab kya hoga??

maan apni,magicl powers ni use kega kbhi??

sanaya n geet edit was superb..

lloved it..

waiting fr nxt :)

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Heema Somani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Superb part

maaneet met

geet gave maan such a cute punishment

continue soon

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zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

awesome loving ur update...❤️👍🏼

amazed ...all events turn ..in a update..👏

maan born as wizard ..but did not learn to use it..is it so?

Now everything he going thru ..for him is beyond imagination ...

does he have any in born talent as wizard...?which he did not realize still..

.if it so .it will more interesting...me wanting maan to do magic...

😆so funny ..geet showing her anger with a trick...and maan..thinking to be cautious of his speaking also thinking...

but maan had been caught immediately😲 ..more wanted maaneet..

waiting for ...what is her father upto...

will maan past coming in front?...

have to wait...

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SRK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#160

It's awesome amazing.
Sanaya can read minds n poor maan is thinking that even he can't think.she change maan s look to enter in palace. Finally he reached in geet's room. He was so happy seeing her and about to go towards her suddenly he was flowing in air. When geet wake up she get shock seeing maan in front of her. She engulfed in her arms. Both miss each other huging and kissing each other. Geet was upset with him as he left her alone and her father took her back in their world. They were going to make plan,suddenly geet's father appeared and he tied three of them with rope. Waiting for next dear