~MAGICAL RIDE~NEW MG STORY~CHAPTER 5 posted@38 on 9.3.15

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harman12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

lovely part dear
maan shocked hahaha

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AshelySpinelli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

superb update baby

sanaya changd maan's luk nd took him 2 palace😃

finally aft 2 weeks maan met geet nd geet was angry on him😆

wt a punishment geet gave 2 maan🤣

nw all r ready 2 plan bt geet's father came der😲

waitng 4 d nxt part baby update soon

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

part 2

maan teary on geets departure😭

phir daata kyu😡 its ok bol detha😆

but then how will he and we visit this magical world haina😳

maya nagari... i loved the name😃

yahaan bhi dev... haayeee

maan in that magical robe😆... sochke bhi hassi aa rahi hain... but i loved sanaya as geets freind...

flying carr... wowow... yahaan ki traffic mein kaash mujhe mil jjaatha...

reading mind power of sanaya... wow...

excited for more😃

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

awesome update
finally maaneet met
geet punished maan by hanging him in air😆
opps now all the three are trapped by geet's father...

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DreamyMadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

awesome update... Waiting for d next part.

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

part 3

wow... magic time😃

maan ke face ko deform

waise maan ko kaisa change kar diya hoga?? i so wanted to know that... but am sure khud maan se pheeka hi hoga😆

stop thinking maan😆... i loved that... bechara ab soch bhi nahi saktha ache se

what a palace... i loved the roof top thing... transparent... 😳

i just loved all the magic u descrivbed

but the best was changes in atmosphere as per geets mood

ye power mere paas hotha tho mazaa aa jaatha😆

mile ab alag baandh bhi diya

looking forward for the next😃

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

loved the edit pria...👏

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

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Sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

i loved the edit

kitna mast hai yeh AWWW

HAPPPY HOLI DI 😳

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piya27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Part 1
Maan married to geet
He saw the things moving on its own and geet told she is wizard
Maan hated wizard as it took his parents from him
Geet missing after he left

Part 2
Dadi asked maan to get his geet back and he is in the magic world
He is shocked to know geet getting married to dev
Sanaya helping maan

part 3
everyting was going sooo smothly
maneet meeting, sanaya's naughty tricks
and suddenly geet father jumped in from no where
wat will happen now