~MAGICAL RIDE~NEW MG STORY~CHAPTER 5 posted@38 on 9.3.15

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~MAGICAL RIDE~


Lovely banner isn't??CREDIT GOES TO MY LAKSHMI DI!

(di i loved the carpet...especially 😃)




heyyaaa peps...m back again with a new story!!


I knw..i m crazy right 😆


But this time ...the story m bringing u is very very very different...

Few months back...i was wondering why there arent any spooky stories on GF

and i myself..I m crazy fan..of such movies... u knw magical ones😳


Hence i thought to start this story...😆

This is purely different from any of my stories..in GF

thus i will need ur motivation and support!!


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~~INDEX~~


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CHAPTER 1


I grinned..stuffing the silver shinny anklets in my pockets.. After paying cash i strolled outside elatedly.. I caressed the pair with my hands...smilingly.. My geet would love this ... This is my first gift after our marriage...

I called out for the cab...and headed for our home ..

I warily stepped inside without making a noise... I wanted to surprise her... I Bit my lip to control my giggle... My princess was humming something...

I shook my head...sauntering towards the kitchen..and halted before it

My eyes widened and i grew rooted on the spot... I blinked my eyes knotting my brows watching my wife singing and dancing with her headphones on..while everything else in the kitchen were happening on their own...

She was swaying to the music.. whereas..the casserole..flee in air..hauling on the dinning table..

I rubbed my eyes..once again to make sure i wasn't dreaming.. I suppose i wasn't..

The rest of the dinnerware... followed casserole's path...and settled on the dinning table.. thereafter the onions ,cabbage were chopped..on their own..and salad was prepared..in a spilt of a sec..

I gulped down..observing a chair making its way from living room...straight in the kitchen.. It landed next to my wife..and she sat down...with a sigh..knocking off my headphone..

She mumbled something..and snapped her fingers..causing the items...to blink and arrive on the dinning table..

I was still standing there confounded and astonished..

Geet smile cheekily...after ensuring everything was ready.. She flipped..and turned towards to me..

" mmmaaannn" She...gasped raising up...

"geeet..." I uttered.. dazedly

" woh..maan...tum..tum kab aaye..." She smiled nervously..may be she was trying to pretend.. hell geet I had seen everything

" geet..." All I could say was utter my wife's name..as i still couldn't digest the scene i witnessed

" who are u geet??" I asked her the next moment..after overcoming my bewilderment..

Her eys shot up..in fear and she..trembled.. " yeh,..tum kya bol rahe ho..mai..geet hu... ur geet..maan i m ur wife.."

I shook my head...raising my hand as she leaned in..closer to me.. " don't.."

" my wife...?? she is normal..geet and u..u.this.." I frantically looked at her and then the dinning table..

I heard her groan... and she murmured something before..coming closer to me..

" maan...plz..aisa kuch nahi hai..i dunno what u r saying.." she said..embracing me sideways..

" no..way geet don't hide..i have seen it through my own eyes..." I said flinching her away...looking straight in her eyes..

don't lie plz..tell me.." i implied..making her judder in response..

" if u love me...plz tell me.." i said..framing her face...i had used my last weapon..hope she speaks up

" i..i..m a wizard...maan..i..i can do magic..."

My eyes snapped open..startled and i raised... panting heavily.. Its the same dream..i have been seeing since geet left me..

I sighed heavily..clenching my eyes and brushed my face..

I cursed myself again for running away that day when geet had confessed me the truth.. I was such a coward that i ran away from my love..

I just couldn't take in this... the word magic..and wizard bought back my childhood memories.. My dadi who raised me...after my parents were dead..used to tell me..that i m capable of doing magic..

This word..had always obliterate my life...into bits of pieces.. My father was a wizard yes... My father RAAJVEER SINGH KHURANA was a wizard.. the truth was revealed to me at a very young age.. My mother was a wizard too..

At teen age it wasnt tough for me to combine the puzzles together..and find out that this magic was the reason which got my parents killed..

My dadi saved me..and bought me to Paris.. away from the world of magic.. she wasn't against magic but she defended me against all odds... She let me decide..whether i had to be a wizard or not..

I denied.. i couldn't..get myself to be a wizard..knowing thats what killed my parents.. dadi dint force me...and we started living our life normally..

Then i met geet..2 yrs later

I met her on new year's eve.. I always spent my new year's eve at Louvre place in solace... Like every year i sat on the bench...glimpsing the fireworks in the sky with a bottle of whisky in my hand..

" itsnt it beautiful...the sky looks gorgeous ??" i heard a velvety soft voice..

" thank god... i m out..finally i can be a part of this world..."

I turned myself..to spot the owner of the voice... there she was standing at a distance lost in the sky.. According to me... she was looking more beautiful that the sky..

She joined me later..for drinks..and we ended up getting drunk.. Not only drunk we even had sex..no no made love..

The next day i got up seeing her breathtakingly beautiful face...When i got back into my senses i apologized to her ..but she surprised me...saying it was mutual.. Well u don't get to see such kind of a girl..daily...Do u !!

We agreed on becoming frnds.. She said she was new to this place..and she dint knw..where to go.. i offered her to stay with me.. and thus began our love story..

She was wild yet cute sometimes.. what attracted me the most was the purity of her heart.. She was so sweet... She mingled with dadi...and next i knew they were best frnds.. She was amazing..totally best at everything she did..But yet she was quite a amusing girl... her words never made sense to me... Whenever she was asked about her past... she used to grew anxious..and after her requests not to question her on that I quit asking her anything.. Moreover I wasn't even curious to knw..anything about.her past...It was my pure luck that i got a life partner like her..in my life...

It was a year later when i admitted my love and..told her the same.. She agreed and with dadi's blessings we got married..

After i came to knw of geet's truth..i left her. !!! Next day when i went back i did not her..I searched my whole house ...but she was gone..!! I hated myself.. i hated the fact that I dint give her a chance to explain...her pov..instead...just abandoned her...






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i have typed the whole story...so..cmon..u give me comments i will give u updates

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let me knw how was the first part!!


love

sweta

Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Congo for the new story sweta😃


concept is just wowow

Geet a wizard??

maan married a wizard geet ??😲... kitna mazaa aayega na... ghar ka kaam sab magic se ho jaayega and geet totally free for maan😆
😆😆

but geet ki chamatkaari se maan ko lag gaya dhakka😭

maan too a wizard??😲 wow dono gile shikwe mitaane ke baad magic magic khelegne😆

am so much looking forward for the coming parts...

want to see many many magic... and of course maaneet moments...
loved the concept sweta😃
and am glad that u loved my carpet😆


Edited by -lakshmi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for this new work...
it was really nice... 👏👏👏👏👏 plz continue soon...😊
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Congratulations for the new story 😊and yes its different and very interesting too😊I am liking it already 😛beautiful banner...an amazing concept...eagerly waiting for more 😊

Edited by ns.1 - 10 years ago
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wow
superb concept :)
geet is a wizard even maan!!!
Geet left maan!!
How can she?
I'm sure something is missing.!!!
Glad u hv all d parts typd wid u😆
don't make us wait for long...
Edited by CookieMonster. - 10 years ago
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congrats on the new story! Superb banner! interesting concept! Maan left Geet cos she is a wizard! Maan hate shis dad has his dad was a wizard! Maan regrets his decision! update soon
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nice part
different concept
geet knows magic even maan knows but he was in denial mode
maan came to know about geet being wizard he didn't stop her when she left the house
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Congrats for d new story.
Awesome concept
Geet nd maan both r wizard.
Geet didn't told maan dat she is wizard.
Waiting to read more

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