~MAGICAL RIDE~NEW MG STORY~CHAPTER 5 posted@38 on 9.3.15

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: -indu-

Abhi comment kiya aur doosra part bhi aagaya...

Nice finally maan in mayanagri... And aate hi jhatka diya usse... Dev or roop mein

An villain bhi aagaya... Story spicy hojayegi...

Maaneet reunion

it will magical

Do continue soon

thank u di

🤗

m sooo happy u liked the story 😊

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Interesting
Loving d story
It looks lyk we r in Harry Potter world.
Maan is missing Geet.
Maan enters wizard world.
He came to know abt Geet marriage.
Sanaya looks lyk interesting character.
She takes maan to Geet.

Edited by kamnagupta7 - 10 years ago

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

AmaZing. So maan is missing geet . dadi suggested him to find out about her . so for that he has to enter in wizard land. He was shocked seeing that new world. He get startled hearing geet's wedding news. He was very upset. Suddenly he collided with one of geet's best friend. She helped him to meet with geet. Initially maan was shocked knowing that his geet is a princess. Waiting for next dear

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srikantharaja

@srikantharaja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

great update ... maan reaction is amazing maan is scared something new great going keep it up 👏

please do update thanks alot dear

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

maan is in wizards world to get his geet back !!
geet marriage fixed wid dev??
Isn't she already married!!
I didn't like geets dad😡
hope he won't create any trouble...
Sanaya seems interesting!
want her pic😉
update next asap...

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

nice part

loved it

maan wants bring geet back in his life

geet's uncle forcibly trying get her marry with dev malhotra

geet frined sanaya found maan and took him to geet

eagerly waiting for the next part

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

sooo finally maan is about to meet his geet cant wait for next...

fab part... sanaya was saviour of maan

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zornitsa

@zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Another gr8 update..

Loved all dazed Maan..and description of everything..

Though want to get back Geet

...there is still hesitations..

Maan so thrilled with all doing of Sanya..

Liked her cute magic..and talks...

Loved the dialogue... Keep his thoughts in check around Sanya ..

The small talk ..shows the bonding of Dadi and Maan..

Next waiting for Geet ..and their face off..

Edited by zornitsa - 10 years ago

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

amazing update
maan missed geet
dadi say to maan get back ur geet
maan enter wizard land
maan come to know geet marrying someone else
waiting for next update

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Maan is all sad that he walked out on Geet but Daadima tells him
to go to her world and bring her back
now Maan has to go the world of wizards and bring his wife back
but as he meets Geet's friend Sanaaya he experience an adventurous
car flying trip