The Tough Nut! ( Completed pg.45 27/3)

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

amazing start dear..👏

What more could i say!!!

You have an ability to make readers glued to your story..😉

Is Maan dead or he is someone else?!

I guess the one who died is not Maan..

But just tell me one thing..

is it a sad end one?!

Then plzzz let me know..

I cant take any more..

already depressed state mein hoon aur depression mein nahi jaana chahti..😔

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: divya22
A nyc start...
right nw its mysteriois...
i jst hv one ques...
Starting mai when she was on bus d timeline was when she was in medi college...
n when she treated dat man it was years after dat bus incident...
right??

Thanks for reading!

N for your question yes u are right!!

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: kkmouli
amazing start dear..👏
What more could i say!!!
You have an ability to make readers glued to your story..😉
Is Maan dead or he is someone else?!
I guess the one who died is not Maan..
But just tell me one thing..
is it a sad end one?!
Then plzzz let me know..
I cant take any more..
already depressed state mein hoon aur depression mein nahi jaana chahti..😔

No it is not a sad story

thanks for reading!😊

Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: aparna3011
nice
continue soon

Thanks aparna! 😊

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Part # 1

Thankfully next day was her day off as there was some kind of strike going between the management n the doctors... which she always choose to be away from... The sleepless night she spent recalling those words n reading the simple two line letter n no. of times didn't solve any thing but resulted in severe headache!

How can one be at fault when one is forced to lead a life all alone n is left with no one to call hers! Then suddenly someone knocks your door stating he is only hers!!

Babaji if this is some kind of joke then remember one thing this time I'm not going to spare u!! She thought fuming n not knowing what to do...

When you are in you are in your worst moods then every little thing I the universe will seem annoying and this what exactly happened!

There was a call from the khurana's wishing to meet her... so planning to end all this at once she calmed herself down n left to the apartment...

It was located in one of the high class societies of the city where every building n house screamed proudly that We are Rich!!

As she reached the building n enquired the guards for the address he immediately straitened himself with at most respect guided her to the flat which was actually a pent house. ..

There were too many people present in the hall...few of the faces she instantly recognised who wouldn't they were all page3 celebs...

She made her entry n there was a sudden silence in the hall

OMG she looks so awesome... just a smile princess I'm ready to die again!!

Were the thoughts of certain someone with dark chocolate brown eyes, carrying a killer smile on his lips which went unheard by others but were clearly delivered to the one they were meant for!

Her head shot up trying to locate the voice she just heard... she was wearing a white collared anarkali suit with full sleeves, silver heels, eyes adorned with dark line of Kajal, nude shade of lip glosses hair clipped n carelessly falling on her shoulder!

She looked nothing less than Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana!

She went ahead n took a chair on one of the sofa's and gave them a look which clearly said now u can start!

Hayee Marjavaa!!

She again heard it but choose to ignore for the time being as she was getting more agitated with each passing second n to add to the bonus were those flirty comments passed her way!

N the show started ... fake crying n all those sympathetic talks... overflowing concern n sweetness. .. after a good 15 min someone finally came to the point...

Beta we all are here for you n will support you through out ...never feel u are alone ...acha forgot asking where is Pari? Hope she is over her brother's grief... how will u handle all this alone the huge empire n the responsibility of his darling sister... Beta I know this isn't the right time nor it is her age for all this but if helps you y don't we get my son engaged with pari as soon as she turns 18 we will get them married!

Looking at all the faces present in the hall she quietly walked towards the kitchen... where Nakul was cleaning the dishes... She very calmly told him what to do and he can trust her with his chote sahab's sister! To which he accepted readily. ...

That's it there was huge sounds coming from kitchen of broken cutlery every one rushed to see what was all the chaos about and was shocked to see the kitchen in mess

There stood Mrs. Khurana fuming on the poor servant...

Listen you... get this straight into your head! how dare u say there is no cold water in the fridge. .. from now on I am the queen of this house!!

N my heart too! she heard but saved that for later

Fuming inwardly she stated loud n clear for every one to hear...

Clear this place before I sue u for intruding my personal space...

She walked out towards one of the bedrooms in the top floor fuming and mumbling under her breath making sure her tone was audible for the crowd waiting

Low class people huh!! Always trying to take advantage of weak situations...

As she was about to enter the room she turned n gave a look to the crowd which clearly showed her annoyance on finding them still waiting. ..

Getting the clue they quietly left with out a word!

And she closed the door behind her back with a victorious smile dancing on her lips...

Spare my heart sweetheart

That killer smile of yours ufff...

To Be Continued...

Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago

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chiki143

@chiki143

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Hi dear... nice update. Is she really mrs.maan singh khurana.????totally confused...and where is maan with his cheesy comments? All suspense. Did geet accept all this to guard pari? And maan if he died how come the comments...pls dnt say its his ghost😉

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: chiki143
Hi dear... nice update. Is she really mrs.maan singh khurana.????totally confused...and where is maan with his cheesy comments? All suspense. Did geet accept all this to guard pari? And maan if he died how come the comments...pls dnt say its his ghost😉

too many questions!😆

for now thanks for reading! I was about to pm u but it is really difficult from mobile🤢

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Wow Storyline is different , very refreshing
So when Geet was still studying she was in the bus right and that when both she and Maan's eyes met but somehow he found out details about her .
Years later she was called in for an emergency and that is when she again saw Maan but this time he dies and she did his last rituals right
now she had received a call for her to go to Maan's penthouse and over there she got to know that perhaps the people were trying to crab at the Khurana wealth and also wanted Maan's sister to marry one of the ladies son right .
so basically now Maan is like some spirit and only Geet can hear him
hope I'm on the correct lines
looking forward to the next update for sure

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: taahir004
Wow Storyline is different , very refreshing
So when Geet was still studying she was in the bus right and that when both she and Maan's eyes met but somehow he found out details about her .
Years later she was called in for an emergency and that is when she again saw Maan but this time he dies and she did his last rituals right
now she had received a call for her to go to Maan's penthouse and over there she got to know that perhaps the people were trying to crab at the Khurana wealth and also wanted Maan's sister to marry one of the ladies son right .
so basically now Maan is like some spirit and only Geet can hear him
hope I'm on the correct lines
looking forward to the next update for sure

Wow you've got most of it right!😃

Thanks for reading!