MG OS Soulmate Forever - Epilogue Updated - 07/03/2015

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys. It's my first OS. I know I told u guys that I would update the first part of my ff Beyond Love. But then I just couldn't stop myself from writing this. So Beyond Love will be updated next week. Hope you guys won't mind.

So my sincere apologies in advance for any mistakes.



Part 1:

"Kahaan ho aap? Main kab se raah dekh rahi hoon. Please jaldi aa jaaiye ab aur intezaar nahi hota.". With that she closed her diary.

She got down the bed and went to the bathroom, to take an early shower.

It was early morning, around 4:30 pm. She again had the same dream, which she is having since past one year. And like everytime, she shared her heart with her diary. It wasn't like as if the dream was horrifying or anything. But just something that made her feel sad, very sad and pained too.

She is Geet Handa. The daughter of Great Hotelier Mohinder Handa & his sweet housewife Rano Handa. She recently turned 25, but unlike other parents, her parents never forced her for marriage. Instead they have always supported her. They have known of her Love. Her Love which she described as her Soulmate Love'. And they always felt proud, that in this generation where kids change their love every week, their Geet was different. That she believed in One Love, which is for a lifelong.

"Geet beta"...Rano called for her. Rano was surprised when she saw her lights on so early in the morning. Just then Geet came out from the shower.

Geet: "Mom aap is waqt"

Rano: "Ye toh mujhe tuhse poochna chahiye ki tu itni jaldi uth kar kya kar rahi hai?"

Geet: "Maa woh main bas...Woh need khul gayi toh socha ki ready hi ho ja tu hoon" she said all while looking away from Rano.

Rano held her chin and turned her daughters face towards herself.

Rano: "Main samjhti hoon Beta".

She took hold of Geet palm and took her towards the bed and asked her to sit. She sat too.

Rano: "Beta, hum jaante hai ki aap dukhi hai. Par ye kabhi nahi bhoolna ki jab woh wapas aayega toh ye jaankar usse, isse bhi zyada dukh hoga ye sochkar ki tu udaas thi. Pata hai na tujhe ki usse tere chehre par sirf smile hi pasand hai". Geet nodded at her.

Geet: "Maa woh akele hai. Pata nahi kahan par hai. Thik se khate peete bhi hai ya nahi. Ye sab socha kar bohut dard hota hai Ma".

Rano: "Hmm...samajhti hoon. Par tujhe apne aap ko sambhalna hoga, atleast Dadi ke liye".

Geet: "Hmm". She looked towards her mother. "Thankyou Ma".

Rano simply kissed her forehead.

Rano: "Chalo ab jaldi ready ho ja warna tujhe Khurana Mansion pohanchne mein der ho jayegi".

And with that they both left for their respective chores.



After sometime...

Tring Tring...Tring Tring

"Hello. Geet beta..." Dadi spoke while crying.

Geet: "Dadi...kya hua? Aap thik hai na? Aap ro kyun rahe hai?" She panicked. Even Mohinder and Rano were startled looking at panicked Geet.

Dadi: "Bete aap please jaldi ghar aa jaaiye".

Geet: "Haan...haan Dadi main abhi aati hoon. Aap stress mat lo please. Main bas abhi aati hoon". Cutting the call Geet hurriedly left. Mohinder and Rano too went with her.



After sometime...

In Khurana Mansion

Geet: "Dadi Dadi" she ran inside while shouting for Dadi. She was just praying and wishing that Dadi was alright.

Dadi: "Geet Bete" She spoke while coming from towards the dining area.

Geet: "Dadi aap thik toh hai na? Aap ro kyun rahi thi? Aap ki tabiyat thik hai na? Kahin aapka BP toh badh nahi gaya? Aap thik nahi hai toh main doctor..." Geet was panicking when Dadi interrupted her. Even Mohinder and Rano were waiting for Dadi's answer.

Dadi: "Hum thik hai Bete. Balki hum bohat khush hai. Aur bas bhawook hone ke wajah se hum ro rahe the. Sorry Bete ki aap sab humare wajah se pareshan ho gaye" she said while looking at all of them.

Mohinder: "Lekin Ma aisa toh kya ho gaya ki aap achanak aise..." He was questioning her when she interrupted him.

Dadfi: "Maan wapas aa gaye"...She spoke smilingly while tears were spilling from her eyes.

Mohinder and Rano were shocked, but they were more happy. Whereas, Geet was rooted to her place. She was shocked, surprised, happy and what not. Millions of emotions were playing in her heart.

Rano: "Geet, tera Maan wapas aa gaya" She said cupping Geet's face and Dadi side-hugged her.

Geet started to cry but she was smiling too.

Geet: "Kahan hai woh" while crying.

Dadi: "Abhi apne room mein gaye hai. Aap jao."

Hearing this, Geet was almost running. After a year she was meeting him. Her Maan, who left everybody because he wanted to stay away from his family, his love and most importantly the memories of his dead father.

Maan's mother died after few days of giving birth to him. His father and Dadi were the ones who did his upbringing; ofcourse with Mohinder and Rano. Rano always loved him as his own son. And Geet, well they are each others best friend and childhood sweethearts.

A year and a half back, Maan's father passed away. Maan was heartbroken, he wasn't able to handle it.

So after a month of his father's demise he decided that he needed to go away from here, as he couldn't handle the fact that he was technically an orphan. So he went away far from all, keeping his destination unknown to all. Plus he didn't even have any contact with anybody.



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Maan just kept a step out of the washroom and before he knew, someone was hugging him.

Geet was waiting for Maan to come out, when she heard the washroom door opening. She couldn't wait so she just ran to hug him.

Maan was first shocked but when he came out of it, he just hugged her tighter."Shona" this made Geet look upto Maan.

Their eyes met and both got lost. Tears were spilling from their eyes.

"Shona, I'm sorry. Really sorry ki main tumhe aise chhod kar chala gaya" Maan said, tears were flowing from his eyes too. He was seeing, touching His Shona after an year.

Geet was shaking her head, as if please don't say sorry. She again hugged him.

Maan: "Mujhe bohat kuchh kehna hai tumse Geet. Mann mein jo kuchh bhi hai sab share karna hai. Aaj mere saath bahar chalogi? Mujhe ekant mein shaanti se baat karni hai!".


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Last Part: Page 4

Epilogue 1: Page 6

Epilogue 2: Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Nice start..
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Amazing start
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Interesting hai.. Waiting for more...😊
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first part is soo sweet, Geet was waiting for Maans return nd finally hae wait was over Maan came back, waiting for part 2 please update that too soon
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Lovely start... waiting for nxt update to come...
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Thankyou guys for the lovely comments and likes. It feels great that you guys liked my first OS.
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hi congrats on ur OS! Lovely emotional update! Well written! waiting 4 next part

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